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三、实战演练
地球是人类共同的家园，我们只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代的主题。目前，你校准备开展以“Save Our Earth”为主题的英语征文活动。现请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿.
参考词汇：save electricity
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名；
4. 词数 70 左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Save Our Earth
The earth is a beautiful place.
地球是人类共同的家园，我们只有一个地球。“低碳、环保”已成为当今时代的主题。目前，你校准备开展以“Save Our Earth”为主题的英语征文活动。现请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文投稿.
参考词汇：save electricity
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名；
4. 词数 70 左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Save Our Earth
The earth is a beautiful place.
It is our only home, but it is in great danger now. So we must do something to save it.
First, we should be good with animals because they are humans' friends. Planting more trees is also important. Trees help us in many ways.
What's more, we must save electricity. For example, we need to remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms.
We also should save water. If our school is not far from our home, why not go to school on foot or by bike?
It's not only good for our health but also for the earth.
In a word, we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth.
答案
第5课时 单元写作指导
三、实战演练
One possible version:
Save Our Earth
The earth is a beautiful place. It is our only home, but it is in great danger now. So we must do something to save it.
First, we should be good with animals because they are humans' friends. Planting more trees is also important. Trees help us in many ways. What's more, we must save electricity. For example, we need to remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. We also should save water. If our school is not far from our home, why not go to school on foot or by bike? It's not only good for our health but also for the earth.
In a word, we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth.
三、实战演练
One possible version:
Save Our Earth
The earth is a beautiful place. It is our only home, but it is in great danger now. So we must do something to save it.
First, we should be good with animals because they are humans' friends. Planting more trees is also important. Trees help us in many ways. What's more, we must save electricity. For example, we need to remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. We also should save water. If our school is not far from our home, why not go to school on foot or by bike? It's not only good for our health but also for the earth.
In a word, we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth.
解析
【解析】
这是一篇英语命题征文，需紧扣“Save Our Earth”主题，先点明地球是人类唯一家园的重要性，再根据提示给出保护地球的具体建议，补充至少一条相关建议，最后发出呼吁。写作时要注意行文连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Save Our Earth
The earth is a beautiful place. It is our only home, but it is in great danger now. So we must do something to save it.
First, we should be good with animals because they are humans' friends. Planting more trees is also important. Trees help us in many ways. What's more, we must save electricity. For example, we need to remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. We also should save water. If our school is not far from our home, why not go to school on foot or by bike? It's not only good for our health but also for the earth.
In a word, we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题表达、英语句式运用
【点评】
本题考查学生结合环保热点主题进行英语写作的能力，既能锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力，也能增强学生的环保意识，贴合当下时代主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语命题征文，需紧扣“Save Our Earth”主题，先点明地球是人类唯一家园的重要性，再根据提示给出保护地球的具体建议，补充至少一条相关建议，最后发出呼吁。写作时要注意行文连贯，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Save Our Earth
The earth is a beautiful place. It is our only home, but it is in great danger now. So we must do something to save it.
First, we should be good with animals because they are humans' friends. Planting more trees is also important. Trees help us in many ways. What's more, we must save electricity. For example, we need to remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. We also should save water. If our school is not far from our home, why not go to school on foot or by bike? It's not only good for our health but also for the earth.
In a word, we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题表达、英语句式运用
【点评】
本题考查学生结合环保热点主题进行英语写作的能力，既能锻炼学生的语言组织与表达能力，也能增强学生的环保意识，贴合当下时代主题。
【难度系数】
0.6
