B. 书面表达
冬季是流感暴发的高峰期,它威胁着人们的健康。为了预防流感,我们在日常生活中应该怎么做呢?请你结合以下思维导图内容提示,以“How to Prevent the Flu”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊的英语专栏投稿。

注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How to Prevent the Flu
These days many people have the flu. So what should we do to prevent the flu and keep healthy?
冬季是流感暴发的高峰期,它威胁着人们的健康。为了预防流感,我们在日常生活中应该怎么做呢?请你结合以下思维导图内容提示,以“How to Prevent the Flu”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向校刊的英语专栏投稿。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How to Prevent the Flu
These days many people have the flu. So what should we do to prevent the flu and keep healthy?
答案
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How to Prevent the Flu
These days many people have the flu. So what should we do to prevent the flu and keep healthy?
First of all, having a positive attitude is important. Second, we should play sport often to build ourselves up. Third, we need to have healthy living habits. We should eat healthy food every day. What's more, we'd better wear a mask in crowded places and open windows for fresh air. Finally, if we feel unwell, we must see a doctor as soon as possible. We'll get well soon if we follow the doctor's advice.
In a word, a healthy lifestyle and good habits are crucial in preventing the flu.
How to Prevent the Flu
These days many people have the flu. So what should we do to prevent the flu and keep healthy?
First of all, having a positive attitude is important. Second, we should play sport often to build ourselves up. Third, we need to have healthy living habits. We should eat healthy food every day. What's more, we'd better wear a mask in crowded places and open windows for fresh air. Finally, if we feel unwell, we must see a doctor as soon as possible. We'll get well soon if we follow the doctor's advice.
In a word, a healthy lifestyle and good habits are crucial in preventing the flu.
解析
【分析】本题要求以“How to Prevent the Flu”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,需结合思维导图提示(积极态度、做运动、健康生活习惯)并适当拓展。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,用逻辑连接词串联要点,保证文章结构清晰;2. 围绕思维导图核心点,补充合理拓展内容(如健康饮食、防护措施、及时就医等);3. 确保语句连贯、语法正确,符合词数要求。
【解析】首先用“First of all”引出“保持积极态度”的要点;接着用“Second”说明“经常运动增强体质”;然后用“Third”阐述“健康生活习惯”,补充“吃健康食物”;再用“What's more”拓展“拥挤场所戴口罩、开窗通风”的防护细节;最后用“Finally”补充“身体不适及时就医”;结尾总结健康生活方式对预防流感的重要性,使文章完整连贯。
【答案】How to Prevent the Flu
These days many people have the flu. So what should we do to prevent the flu and keep healthy?
First of all, having a positive attitude is important. Second, we should play sport often to build ourselves up. Third, we need to have healthy living habits. We should eat healthy food every day. What's more, we'd better wear a mask in crowded places and open windows for fresh air. Finally, if we feel unwell, we must see a doctor as soon as possible. We'll get well soon if we follow the doctor's advice.
In a word, a healthy lifestyle and good habits are crucial in preventing the flu.
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查健康话题的英语写作,要求学生整合提示信息并适当拓展,注重文章结构的逻辑性和语句连贯性,符合初中英语写作的考查要求,能有效锻炼学生的语言应用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先用“First of all”引出“保持积极态度”的要点;接着用“Second”说明“经常运动增强体质”;然后用“Third”阐述“健康生活习惯”,补充“吃健康食物”;再用“What's more”拓展“拥挤场所戴口罩、开窗通风”的防护细节;最后用“Finally”补充“身体不适及时就医”;结尾总结健康生活方式对预防流感的重要性,使文章完整连贯。
【答案】How to Prevent the Flu
These days many people have the flu. So what should we do to prevent the flu and keep healthy?
First of all, having a positive attitude is important. Second, we should play sport often to build ourselves up. Third, we need to have healthy living habits. We should eat healthy food every day. What's more, we'd better wear a mask in crowded places and open windows for fresh air. Finally, if we feel unwell, we must see a doctor as soon as possible. We'll get well soon if we follow the doctor's advice.
In a word, a healthy lifestyle and good habits are crucial in preventing the flu.
【知识点】英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查健康话题的英语写作,要求学生整合提示信息并适当拓展,注重文章结构的逻辑性和语句连贯性,符合初中英语写作的考查要求,能有效锻炼学生的语言应用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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