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学校正举办主题为“My family budget”的英语征文活动,请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇短文。
【要点】1. How does your family manage money?
2. What do you think of your family budget?
【要求】1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥。
3. 80 词左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
学校正举办主题为“My family budget”的英语征文活动,请你根据下面的要点提示写一篇短文。
【要点】1. How does your family manage money?
2. What do you think of your family budget?
【要求】1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥。
3. 80 词左右。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
答案
One possible version:
Money matters in every family. In my family, my
parents always try to manage money well. Each month, they
make a budget.
First, they spend some money on my education. Then,
they have to pay for our flat, car, food and other daily
needs. All these cost about 50 per cent of the money. Next,
they spend 30 per cent of the money on special things like
going on holiday. At last, they always try to save about 20
per cent of the money in the bank for "a rainy day".
I think it is important to make a budget. It can help us
manage money well.
Money matters in every family. In my family, my
parents always try to manage money well. Each month, they
make a budget.
First, they spend some money on my education. Then,
they have to pay for our flat, car, food and other daily
needs. All these cost about 50 per cent of the money. Next,
they spend 30 per cent of the money on special things like
going on holiday. At last, they always try to save about 20
per cent of the money in the bank for "a rainy day".
I think it is important to make a budget. It can help us
manage money well.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题是“My family budget”的征文。解题思路需紧扣两个核心要点：一是说明家庭如何管理资金，二是表达对家庭预算的看法。写作时要遵循“引入主题→具体阐述家庭理财方式→表达个人观点”的结构，确保内容连贯、语法正确，字数控制在80词左右，且不使用真实个人信息。
【解析】
1. 开头引入：点明家庭理财的重要性，引出自家的预算做法；
2. 具体说明理财方式：分层次介绍家庭资金分配（教育开支、日常开销、特殊支出、储蓄），用百分比让内容更清晰；
3. 表达个人看法：阐述家庭预算的意义，呼应主题；
4. 检查调整：确保符合字数要求，语法正确，上下文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Money matters in every family. In my family, my parents always try to manage money well. Each month, they make a budget.
First, they spend some money on my education. Then, they have to pay for our flat, car, food and other daily needs. All these cost about 50 per cent of the money. Next, they spend 30 per cent of the money on special things like going on holiday. At last, they always try to save about 20 per cent of the money in the bank for "a rainy day".
I think it is important to make a budget. It can help us manage money well.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家庭话题英语表达、预算相关英语词汇
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，先介绍家庭预算的具体分配方式，再阐述个人对预算的看法，语言简洁流畅，符合80词左右的要求，语法正确，完整覆盖了所有要点，是一篇优秀的征文范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，主题是“My family budget”的征文。解题思路需紧扣两个核心要点：一是说明家庭如何管理资金，二是表达对家庭预算的看法。写作时要遵循“引入主题→具体阐述家庭理财方式→表达个人观点”的结构，确保内容连贯、语法正确，字数控制在80词左右，且不使用真实个人信息。
【解析】
1. 开头引入：点明家庭理财的重要性，引出自家的预算做法；
2. 具体说明理财方式：分层次介绍家庭资金分配（教育开支、日常开销、特殊支出、储蓄），用百分比让内容更清晰；
3. 表达个人看法：阐述家庭预算的意义，呼应主题；
4. 检查调整：确保符合字数要求，语法正确，上下文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Money matters in every family. In my family, my parents always try to manage money well. Each month, they make a budget.
First, they spend some money on my education. Then, they have to pay for our flat, car, food and other daily needs. All these cost about 50 per cent of the money. Next, they spend 30 per cent of the money on special things like going on holiday. At last, they always try to save about 20 per cent of the money in the bank for "a rainy day".
I think it is important to make a budget. It can help us manage money well.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家庭话题英语表达、预算相关英语词汇
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，先介绍家庭预算的具体分配方式，再阐述个人对预算的看法，语言简洁流畅，符合80词左右的要求，语法正确，完整覆盖了所有要点，是一篇优秀的征文范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
