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第三节 书面表达（共15分）
你打算参加学校英语社团组织的“用英语讲好中国故事”连环画创作比赛。
请根据内容提示，用英语写一篇文章介绍你的作品，词数80左右。
1. What is the name of your comic strip?
2. Who is the main character?
3. What is the story mainly about?
4. What message do you want to share with the readers?
Good morning, teachers and friends.
Thank you.
你打算参加学校英语社团组织的“用英语讲好中国故事”连环画创作比赛。
请根据内容提示，用英语写一篇文章介绍你的作品，词数80左右。
1. What is the name of your comic strip?
2. Who is the main character?
3. What is the story mainly about?
4. What message do you want to share with the readers?
Good morning, teachers and friends.
The name of my comic strip is The Magic Brush in Our Town. The main character is Ma Liang, a boy from a Chinese folk tale who has a magic paintbrush.
In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone. The story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a better place.
I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.
In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone. The story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a better place.
I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.
Thank you.
答案
Good morning, teachers and friends. The name of my comic strip is The Magic Brush in Our
Town. The main character is Ma Liang, a boy from a Chinese folk tale who has a magic
paintbrush.
In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws
a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone. The
story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a
better place.
I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.
Thank you.
Town. The main character is Ma Liang, a boy from a Chinese folk tale who has a magic
paintbrush.
In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws
a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone. The
story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a
better place.
I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.
Thank you.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，任务是介绍“用英语讲好中国故事”主题的连环画作品，需覆盖四个核心要求：作品名称、主角、故事内容、传递的信息。解题思路：1. 开头使用礼貌问候语；2. 依次回应四个提示点，选取中国民间故事相关内容贴合主题；3. 结尾礼貌致谢；4. 控制词数在80左右，语言简洁准确，符合英语表达习惯，传递积极价值观。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：
1. 开头：Good morning, teachers and friends.（礼貌问候）
2. 说明作品名：The name of my comic strip is The Magic Brush in Our Town.（回应作品名要求）
3. 介绍主角：The main character is Ma Liang, a boy from a Chinese folk tale who has a magic paintbrush.（回应主角要求）
4. 讲述故事内容：In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone.（回应故事内容要求）
5. 传递信息：The story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a better place. I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.（回应传递信息要求）
6. 结尾：Thank you.（礼貌收尾）
整体结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Good morning, teachers and friends. The name of my comic strip is The Magic Brush in Our Town. The main character is Ma Liang, a boy from a Chinese folk tale who has a magic paintbrush.
In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone. The story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a better place.
I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.
Thank you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、应用文写作、中国文化英语表达
【点评】
该书面表达紧扣“用英语讲好中国故事”的活动主题，选取中国经典民间故事人物马良作为主角，内容完整覆盖题目要求的四个要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，任务是介绍“用英语讲好中国故事”主题的连环画作品，需覆盖四个核心要求：作品名称、主角、故事内容、传递的信息。解题思路：1. 开头使用礼貌问候语；2. 依次回应四个提示点，选取中国民间故事相关内容贴合主题；3. 结尾礼貌致谢；4. 控制词数在80左右，语言简洁准确，符合英语表达习惯，传递积极价值观。
【解析】
按照写作步骤完成：
1. 开头：Good morning, teachers and friends.（礼貌问候）
2. 说明作品名：The name of my comic strip is The Magic Brush in Our Town.（回应作品名要求）
3. 介绍主角：The main character is Ma Liang, a boy from a Chinese folk tale who has a magic paintbrush.（回应主角要求）
4. 讲述故事内容：In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone.（回应故事内容要求）
5. 传递信息：The story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a better place. I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.（回应传递信息要求）
6. 结尾：Thank you.（礼貌收尾）
整体结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Good morning, teachers and friends. The name of my comic strip is The Magic Brush in Our Town. The main character is Ma Liang, a boy from a Chinese folk tale who has a magic paintbrush.
In my story, Ma Liang uses his brush not to paint gold, but to help our community. He draws a clean river for fish, a new playground for children, and a beautiful garden for everyone. The story shows that real magic is using your talent to help others and make the world around you a better place.
I hope readers learn that kindness and creativity are the most powerful magic of all.
Thank you.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、应用文写作、中国文化英语表达
【点评】
该书面表达紧扣“用英语讲好中国故事”的活动主题，选取中国经典民间故事人物马良作为主角，内容完整覆盖题目要求的四个要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
