跟踪演练
假如你是Jack，这周五是Tom的生日，你和你的同学们给他举办了一个惊喜派对。
内容包括：1. 放学后我们在教室举办派对；
2. 每个人都送给Tom礼物；
3. 我们唱歌、跳舞和做游戏。
注意：1. 短文必须包含以上所有信息，可适当发挥；2. 词数60—70。

My name is Jack. This Friday is Tom's birthday. My classmates and I held a surprise party for him in the classroom after school. We didn't tell Tom about it earlier, so he felt very surprised. Each of us gave Tom a lovely gift. We sang, danced and played fun games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much.

【分析】首先明确写作身份为Jack，需围绕“给Tom办惊喜生日派对”展开，先点明事件背景（这周五是Tom生日），再依次覆盖所有要求要点：派对时间地点（放学后教室）、送礼物、唱歌跳舞做游戏，适当添加细节（如没提前说让Tom惊喜），控制词数在60-70，确保语句通顺、要点完整。
【解析】1. 开头介绍身份与事件：My name is Jack. This Friday is Tom's birthday. 2. 说明派对安排与惊喜设计：My classmates and I held a surprise party for him in the classroom after school. We didn't tell Tom about it earlier, so he felt very surprised. 3. 写送礼物环节：Each of us gave Tom a lovely gift. 4. 写派对活动：We sang, danced and played fun games together. 5. 收尾表达感受：We all enjoyed ourselves very much. 全程覆盖所有要求要点，词数符合要求。
【答案】My name is Jack. This Friday is Tom's birthday. My classmates and I held a surprise party for him in the classroom after school. We didn't tell Tom about it earlier, so he felt very surprised. Each of us gave Tom a lovely gift. We sang, danced and played fun games together. We all enjoyed ourselves very much.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、英语日常表达
【点评】本题为英语基础写作题，要求围绕给定要点完成短文，需兼顾要点完整性、语句通顺度与词数要求，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6