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每到夏天,总有些地方洪水肆虐。我们应如何在洪水中保护自己呢?你们班在英语课上就这一问题进行了讨论。请你根据以下提示,用英语说说你的观点。
【要求】1.包含所有给出的要点提示,可适当发挥,省略号部分要求至少自拟1点。
2.70词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to
【要求】1.包含所有给出的要点提示,可适当发挥,省略号部分要求至少自拟1点。
2.70词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to
protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season.
We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes.
Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue.
Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater.
Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm.
We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water.
If we need help, we can also call the police.
答案
One possible version
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，需围绕“洪水时如何自我保护”展开。首先要覆盖所有给定提示：灾害前观看洪水相关新闻、准备水和食物；灾害中到高处、不要游泳，还需补充至少1条合理自救措施。写作时用清晰的逻辑连接词组织内容，确保词数约70词，衔接已给开头，行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 确定写作主题：洪水期间的自我保护方法；2. 整合给定要点：灾害前（观看洪水新闻、准备水和食物）、灾害中（转移到高处、不尝试游泳）；3. 补充合理自救点（如落水后抓木质物品、求助警方）；4. 用连接词串联内容，控制词数，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、生活常识应用
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，将英语写作与防灾知识融合，既考查学生英语语言运用能力，又引导学生掌握洪水自救知识，要求整合给定要点并适当拓展，贴近学生生活。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语话题写作题，需围绕“洪水时如何自我保护”展开。首先要覆盖所有给定提示：灾害前观看洪水相关新闻、准备水和食物；灾害中到高处、不要游泳，还需补充至少1条合理自救措施。写作时用清晰的逻辑连接词组织内容，确保词数约70词，衔接已给开头，行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 确定写作主题：洪水期间的自我保护方法；2. 整合给定要点：灾害前（观看洪水新闻、准备水和食物）、灾害中（转移到高处、不尝试游泳）；3. 补充合理自救点（如落水后抓木质物品、求助警方）；4. 用连接词串联内容，控制词数，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version
Good morning, everyone! Floods happen nearly every summer. Today I'd like to talk about how to protect ourselves in the flood.
Firstly, we should often watch the news about the flood during the rainy season. We need to prepare water, food and medicine before the disaster comes. Secondly, when there is a flood, we must move to higher places at once and stay there to wait for rescue. Remember not to try to swim through the floodwater. Thirdly, if the flood washes us away, we should keep calm. We can catch something made of wood and it can help us get out of the water. If we need help, we can also call the police.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作、生活常识应用
【点评】
本题结合生活实际，将英语写作与防灾知识融合，既考查学生英语语言运用能力，又引导学生掌握洪水自救知识，要求整合给定要点并适当拓展，贴近学生生活。
【难度系数】
0.6
