王梅的英国朋友 John 对中国的美食很感兴趣，下面是 John 给她发的电子邮件，请你根据所给内容，回复一封英文邮件。
Dear Wang Mei,
You know I like Chinese food very much because it's really delicious. Could you tell me some information about Chinese food? Oh, my mother's birthday is coming and I plan to cook a Chinese dish named fried eggs with tomatoes for her as a gift. Can you teach me how to make the dish?
Yours,
John
提示：
Cut tomatoes into pieces → crack and whip(搅打) eggs → Fry eggs → Put tomatoes and add salt
注意:1. 邮件要回答上述邮件中的两个问题,提示仅供参考,可适当发挥;2. 词数 80左右。

Dear John,
I'm glad that you are interested in Chinese food. Chinese food has different tasty dishes across different areas, and most of them are healthy and easy to make.
Now let me tell you how to cook fried eggs with tomatoes. First, cut two tomatoes into pieces. Next, crack three eggs into a bowl and whip them well. Then, fry the eggs in the pan for several minutes. Finally, put the tomatoes in and add some salt. It's easy to make, you can have a try.
Wish your mother a happy birthday!
Yours,
Wang Mei

【分析】首先明确邮件需完成两个任务：一是回应John对中国食物的兴趣，二是教授西红柿炒鸡蛋的制作步骤。需结合给定的提示步骤，用友好的语气组织语言，符合英文邮件格式，控制词数在80左右，确保步骤清晰、表达准确。
【解析】先开篇回应John的兴趣，说明中国食物的特点；再按提示步骤（切番茄、搅打鸡蛋、煎蛋、加番茄和盐）组织成连贯的操作说明；最后送上对他妈妈的生日祝福，确保语言简洁自然，符合要求。
【答案】
Dear John,
I'm glad that you are interested in Chinese food. Chinese food has different tasty dishes across different areas, and most of them are healthy and easy to make.
Now let me tell you how to cook fried eggs with tomatoes. First, cut two tomatoes into pieces. Next, crack three eggs into a bowl and whip them well. Then, fry the eggs in the pan for several minutes. Finally, put the tomatoes in and add some salt. It's easy to make, you can have a try.
Wish your mother a happy birthday!
Yours,
Wang Mei
【知识点】英文邮件写作，食物制作指令表达，祈使句运用
【点评】本题为应用文写作题，结合生活实际场景，考察学生的英语书面表达能力，要求学生整合信息、规范使用邮件格式，同时准确运用步骤类动词短语，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6

Dear John,
I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. ① I like the fried eggs with tomatoes very much. It is easy to make and it's delicious. I am sure your mother will love it.
First②, wash two tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Next②, crack three eggs and whip them in a bowl. After that②, fry the eggs in a pan and take them out when they are firm. Then②, put the tomatoes in the pan and cook them. Last②, put the eggs back into the pan and mix them with the tomatoes! Don't forget to add some salt to the dish. ③
I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them! ④ Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Mei
①以“I am really happy to know you like Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world.”作为回信的开头，符合情理。
②用“First、Next、After that、Then、Last”来描述具体制作的步骤，简洁清晰。
③“Don't forget to add some salt to the dish.”用否定的祈使句形式，句式变换多样，表达多元。
④结尾“I think cooking for our parents is a good way to show our love to them!”再次点题，回应“I am sure your mother will love it.”，使意义升华。
[范文评析]
1. 总评：契合应用文信件主题，富有交际性功能，语言得体，表达自然，立意积极。
2. 结构布局：采用“开篇点题介绍菜肴→正文具体描述步骤→结尾总结升华立意”的结构，逻辑清晰，层次分明。

写作实践
假如你是Jack，上周你向奶奶学习了如何做一种名为“turkey sandwich”的食物，并在制作完成后作为生日礼物送给了妈妈。请你根据表格中的信息给好友David写一封80词左右的信，介绍一下它是如何做的。

Dear David,





Yours,
Jack

第七课时 Writing
标准提分版：
Dear David,
Last week, I made a turkey sandwich for my mum on her birthday. My grandma taught me how to make it. Let me share it with you.
Before that, you need to get the ingredients ready. First, put some mustard on two pieces of bread. Then, cut up one tomato and put it on the bread. Next, add two pieces of turkey. Finally, put two spoons of mayonnaise on the turkey. Now, the turkey sandwich is done. It looks so good! My mum loves it very much.
Best wishes! Write to me soon.
Yours,
Jack
进阶优化版：
Dear David,
Guess what! Last week, I secretly learned to make the turkey sandwich from my grandma as a surprise gift for my mum's birthday! Want to know how to create this magic? Let me guide you.
First, spread mustard on two soft bread slices. Next, chop a juicy tomato into tiny pieces and put them on the bread. Then, add two pieces of turkey. Finally, add two spoons of mayonnaise. Ta-da! The sandwich becomes a colourful tower! Mum took one bite and said, "This tastes like love!"
Would you try making it? I bet your family will love it too!
Yours,
Jack

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以Jack的身份给好友David写一封80词左右的信，核心是介绍火鸡三明治的制作过程，需结合背景（上周跟奶奶学习、作为妈妈的生日礼物）。解题思路：①先确定书信格式（称呼、正文、结尾）；②开头点明写信缘由（分享制作火鸡三明治的经历，呼应给妈妈当生日礼物的背景）；③主体用顺序词（First、Next、Then、Finally等）清晰描述制作步骤；④结尾补充感受，使内容完整，同时控制词数、语言符合朋友间的交流语气。
【解析】
1. 书信格式：严格遵循英文书信规范，开头用称呼Dear David，结尾用Yours, Jack；
2. 开头段：点明核心信息（上周跟奶奶学做火鸡三明治，给妈妈当生日礼物，想分享），自然引出下文；
3. 主体段：用顺序词串联制作步骤：先准备食材，依次在面包上涂芥末、放番茄、加火鸡、放蛋黄酱，步骤清晰；
4. 结尾段：补充妈妈喜欢的感受，呼应主题，邀请对方尝试，使内容完整；
5. 语言：使用准确简单的词汇，句式多样，符合要求。
【答案】
Dear David,
Last week, I made a turkey sandwich for my mum on her birthday. My grandma taught me how to make it. Let me share it with you.
Before that, you need to get the ingredients ready. First, put some mustard on two pieces of bread. Then, cut up one tomato and put it on the bread. Next, add two pieces of turkey. Finally, put two spoons of mayonnaise on the turkey. Now, the turkey sandwich is done. It looks so good! My mum loves it very much.
Best wishes! Write to me soon.
Yours,
Jack
【知识点】
英语书信写作、步骤说明表达、顺序副词使用
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，以书信形式清晰介绍火鸡三明治的制作过程，结构完整，逻辑清晰，运用顺序词使步骤一目了然，语言得体自然，符合好友间的交流语境，同时融入“给妈妈做生日礼物”的情感，立意积极，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5