六、书面表达。
当今社会,科技发展日新月异,深刻地影响着我们的生活。学校为了激发同学们对科技的兴趣,鼓励大家关注科技发展,将举办以“科技改变生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李辉,决定参加此次比赛。请你结合以下提示,写一篇英语演讲稿。
内容提示:
1. What changes have science and technology brought to our life?
2. How do science and technology help with your study or other things?
3. What do you expect from the further development of technology?
注意:
1. 短文须包括以上提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui from Class 9, Grade 9. As we all know, science and technology have been changing our lives in many ways.
That’s all. Thank you!
当今社会,科技发展日新月异,深刻地影响着我们的生活。学校为了激发同学们对科技的兴趣,鼓励大家关注科技发展,将举办以“科技改变生活”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李辉,决定参加此次比赛。请你结合以下提示,写一篇英语演讲稿。
内容提示:
1. What changes have science and technology brought to our life?
2. How do science and technology help with your study or other things?
3. What do you expect from the further development of technology?
注意:
1. 短文须包括以上提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现学生真实的姓名和校名;
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui from Class 9, Grade 9. As we all know, science and technology have been changing our lives in many ways.
That’s all. Thank you!
答案
范例:
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hui from Class 9, Grade 9. As we all know, science and technology have been changing our lives in many ways. First, science and technology have greatly changed communication and transportation. With smartphones and social media, we can instantly connect with people worldwide. High-speed trains and car-sharing apps make travel faster and more convenient. Second, science and technology greatly benefit our studies. Online learning platforms and educational apps provide interactive lessons, while AI tools help with doing research, collecting information and solving problems. Looking ahead, I hope science and technology will still keep improving our lives. I dream smart cities with clean energy and AI-assisted healthcare can benefit everyone.
That's all. Thank you!
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hui from Class 9, Grade 9. As we all know, science and technology have been changing our lives in many ways. First, science and technology have greatly changed communication and transportation. With smartphones and social media, we can instantly connect with people worldwide. High-speed trains and car-sharing apps make travel faster and more convenient. Second, science and technology greatly benefit our studies. Online learning platforms and educational apps provide interactive lessons, while AI tools help with doing research, collecting information and solving problems. Looking ahead, I hope science and technology will still keep improving our lives. I dream smart cities with clean energy and AI-assisted healthcare can benefit everyone.
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达(演讲稿),需围绕“科技改变生活”主题,结合三个提示要点完成写作。首先明确身份为李辉,开头已给出,需依次完成:1.列举科技带来的生活变化(如通讯、交通领域);2.说明科技对自身学习的帮助(如在线平台、AI工具);3.表达对科技未来发展的期望(如智能城市、AI医疗)。写作时要注意语言简洁,符合演讲稿语气,词数控制在80左右,不得出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
按照提示分三部分组织内容:①科技带来的变化:从通讯(智能手机、社交媒体)和交通(高铁、共享出行)举例,体现生活的便捷;②对学习的帮助:提及在线学习平台、AI工具辅助学习,说明科技对学业的益处;③未来期望:希望科技打造智能城市、清洁能源、AI医疗,惠及大众。语言使用简单复合句,符合初中英语水平,紧扣主题,覆盖所有要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hui from Class 9, Grade 9. As we all know, science and technology have been changing our lives in many ways. First, science and technology have greatly changed communication and transportation. With smartphones and social media, we can instantly connect with people worldwide. High-speed trains and car-sharing apps make travel faster and more convenient. Second, science and technology greatly benefit our studies. Online learning platforms and educational apps provide interactive lessons, while AI tools help with doing research, collecting information and solving problems. Looking ahead, I hope science and technology will still keep improving our lives. I dream smart cities with clean energy and AI-assisted healthcare can benefit everyone.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达;科技话题写作;演讲稿格式
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作要求,词数合适,语气适配演讲场景,是一篇规范的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达(演讲稿),需围绕“科技改变生活”主题,结合三个提示要点完成写作。首先明确身份为李辉,开头已给出,需依次完成:1.列举科技带来的生活变化(如通讯、交通领域);2.说明科技对自身学习的帮助(如在线平台、AI工具);3.表达对科技未来发展的期望(如智能城市、AI医疗)。写作时要注意语言简洁,符合演讲稿语气,词数控制在80左右,不得出现真实个人信息。
【解析】
按照提示分三部分组织内容:①科技带来的变化:从通讯(智能手机、社交媒体)和交通(高铁、共享出行)举例,体现生活的便捷;②对学习的帮助:提及在线学习平台、AI工具辅助学习,说明科技对学业的益处;③未来期望:希望科技打造智能城市、清洁能源、AI医疗,惠及大众。语言使用简单复合句,符合初中英语水平,紧扣主题,覆盖所有要求。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hui from Class 9, Grade 9. As we all know, science and technology have been changing our lives in many ways. First, science and technology have greatly changed communication and transportation. With smartphones and social media, we can instantly connect with people worldwide. High-speed trains and car-sharing apps make travel faster and more convenient. Second, science and technology greatly benefit our studies. Online learning platforms and educational apps provide interactive lessons, while AI tools help with doing research, collecting information and solving problems. Looking ahead, I hope science and technology will still keep improving our lives. I dream smart cities with clean energy and AI-assisted healthcare can benefit everyone.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达;科技话题写作;演讲稿格式
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作要求,词数合适,语气适配演讲场景,是一篇规范的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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