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三、提升题▶书面表达。
你的家乡有什么历史物件或遗址吗？校报英语版块正在进行题为“Treasures of My Hometown”的征文比赛。请你根据以下写作要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先描述你最喜欢的家乡的一个历史物件或一处遗址，再说明喜欢它的原因，并谈谈应该如何保护它。
写作要点：
1. What is your favourite historical object or site in your hometown?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How can you and other local people protect it?
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Treasures of My Hometown
My favourite historical object / site in my hometown is
你的家乡有什么历史物件或遗址吗？校报英语版块正在进行题为“Treasures of My Hometown”的征文比赛。请你根据以下写作要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先描述你最喜欢的家乡的一个历史物件或一处遗址，再说明喜欢它的原因，并谈谈应该如何保护它。
写作要点：
1. What is your favourite historical object or site in your hometown?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How can you and other local people protect it?
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Treasures of My Hometown
My favourite historical object / site in my hometown is
an ancient stone bridge. It has stood above a small river for hundreds of years. The bridge is made of grey stones and looks simple but beautiful.
I like it mainly because it is a symbol of my hometown's long history. It also holds many sweet memories of local people's daily lives. Every time I walk on it, I feel close to the past.
It is important for me and other local people to protect this old bridge. We should not carve anything on it or throw rubbish around. We can also tell our family and friends to value historical treasures. I will work together with other local people to protect our hometown treasures.
I like it mainly because it is a symbol of my hometown's long history. It also holds many sweet memories of local people's daily lives. Every time I walk on it, I feel close to the past.
It is important for me and other local people to protect this old bridge. We should not carve anything on it or throw rubbish around. We can also tell our family and friends to value historical treasures. I will work together with other local people to protect our hometown treasures.
答案
Treasures of My Hometown
My favourite historical object / site in my hometown is an ancient stone bridge. It has stood above a small river for hundreds of years. The bridge is made of grey stones and looks simple but beautiful.
I like it mainly because it is a symbol of my hometown's long history. It also holds many sweet memories of local people's daily lives. Every time I walk on it, I feel close to the past.
It is important for me and other local people to protect this old bridge. We should not carve anything on it or throw rubbish around. We can also tell our family and friends to value historical treasures. I will work together with other local people to protect our hometown treasures.
My favourite historical object / site in my hometown is an ancient stone bridge. It has stood above a small river for hundreds of years. The bridge is made of grey stones and looks simple but beautiful.
I like it mainly because it is a symbol of my hometown's long history. It also holds many sweet memories of local people's daily lives. Every time I walk on it, I feel close to the past.
It is important for me and other local people to protect this old bridge. We should not carve anything on it or throw rubbish around. We can also tell our family and friends to value historical treasures. I will work together with other local people to protect our hometown treasures.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“家乡的历史物件/遗址”完成征文，需覆盖三个核心写作要点：说明具体的历史对象、阐述喜欢它的原因、提出保护该对象的方法。解题思路：先选定一个具体的家乡历史物件（如古石桥），按要点依次展开内容，注意行文连贯，控制词数，避免出现真实的人名、校名、地名，确保符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 补全开头，明确写作对象：选择家乡的古石桥，描述其历史（矗立数百年）、材质（灰色石头）和外观（简单美观）；
2. 阐述喜欢的原因：说明它是家乡悠久历史的象征，承载着当地居民的甜蜜生活回忆，行走其上能感受到与过去的联结；
3. 提出保护措施：说明保护古石桥的具体做法，如不在桥上刻字、不扔垃圾，向亲友宣传保护意识，和当地人共同守护家乡的历史珍宝；
最后检查是否覆盖所有写作要点，词数符合80-120的要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
Treasures of My Hometown
My favourite historical object / site in my hometown is an ancient stone bridge. It has stood above a small river for hundreds of years. The bridge is made of grey stones and looks simple but beautiful.
I like it mainly because it is a symbol of my hometown's long history. It also holds many sweet memories of local people's daily lives. Every time I walk on it, I feel close to the past.
It is important for me and other local people to protect this old bridge. We should not carve anything on it or throw rubbish around. We can also tell our family and friends to value historical treasures. I will work together with other local people to protect our hometown treasures.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、历史文化类话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】
本题结合家乡历史元素考查英语写作能力，既要求语言表达准确连贯，又渗透了文化保护的意识，是常见的英语书面表达题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“家乡的历史物件/遗址”完成征文，需覆盖三个核心写作要点：说明具体的历史对象、阐述喜欢它的原因、提出保护该对象的方法。解题思路：先选定一个具体的家乡历史物件（如古石桥），按要点依次展开内容，注意行文连贯，控制词数，避免出现真实的人名、校名、地名，确保符合征文要求。
【解析】
1. 补全开头，明确写作对象：选择家乡的古石桥，描述其历史（矗立数百年）、材质（灰色石头）和外观（简单美观）；
2. 阐述喜欢的原因：说明它是家乡悠久历史的象征，承载着当地居民的甜蜜生活回忆，行走其上能感受到与过去的联结；
3. 提出保护措施：说明保护古石桥的具体做法，如不在桥上刻字、不扔垃圾，向亲友宣传保护意识，和当地人共同守护家乡的历史珍宝；
最后检查是否覆盖所有写作要点，词数符合80-120的要求，无违规信息。
【答案】
Treasures of My Hometown
My favourite historical object / site in my hometown is an ancient stone bridge. It has stood above a small river for hundreds of years. The bridge is made of grey stones and looks simple but beautiful.
I like it mainly because it is a symbol of my hometown's long history. It also holds many sweet memories of local people's daily lives. Every time I walk on it, I feel close to the past.
It is important for me and other local people to protect this old bridge. We should not carve anything on it or throw rubbish around. We can also tell our family and friends to value historical treasures. I will work together with other local people to protect our hometown treasures.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、历史文化类话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】
本题结合家乡历史元素考查英语写作能力，既要求语言表达准确连贯，又渗透了文化保护的意识，是常见的英语书面表达题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
