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四、提升题 书面表达。
时光悄然流逝，美好却能定格珍藏。校报英语版块正在开展以“初中校园生
活的珍贵点滴”为主题的征稿活动。请你根据以下写作要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先写下你初中校园生活里最难忘的事以及难忘的原因，再谈谈自己将以怎样的姿态迎接全新的人生旅程。
写作要点：
1. What is the most unforgettable event in your junior high school life? Why?
2. What will you do to welcome your new life?
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Time flies, but sweet memories can stay in our hearts forever.
时光悄然流逝，美好却能定格珍藏。校报英语版块正在开展以“初中校园生
活的珍贵点滴”为主题的征稿活动。请你根据以下写作要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先写下你初中校园生活里最难忘的事以及难忘的原因，再谈谈自己将以怎样的姿态迎接全新的人生旅程。
写作要点：
1. What is the most unforgettable event in your junior high school life? Why?
2. What will you do to welcome your new life?
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Time flies, but sweet memories can stay in our hearts forever.
The most unforgettable event in my junior high school life is preparing for the sports meeting with my classmates. We practised together every day, encouraged each other, and never gave up. It taught me the power of teamwork and let me cherish our precious friendship. We laughed together and got over difficulties side by side.
Graduation is not the end of learning. To welcome my new life, I will keep good learning habits and study harder. I will also be more independent and braver to face new challenges. I will hold onto warm memories and move forward with confidence all the way. I believe I can become a better self in the future.
答案
The most unforgettable event in my junior high school life is preparing for the sports meeting with my classmates. We practised together every day, encouraged each other, and never gave up. It taught me the power of teamwork and let me cherish our precious friendship. We laughed together and got over difficulties side by side.
Graduation is not the end of learning. To welcome my new life, I will keep good learning habits and study harder. I will also be more independent and braver to face new challenges. I will hold onto warm memories and move forward with confidence all the way. I believe I can become a better self in the future.
Graduation is not the end of learning. To welcome my new life, I will keep good learning habits and study harder. I will also be more independent and braver to face new challenges. I will hold onto warm memories and move forward with confidence all the way. I believe I can become a better self in the future.
解析
【分析】
本题为初中英语书面表达题，主题是“初中校园生活的珍贵点滴”，需完成两个核心写作任务：一是说明初中最难忘的事及原因，二是阐述迎接全新人生旅程的姿态。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先明确具体的难忘校园事件（如集体活动），并说明难忘的深层原因（如收获成长、珍贵情谊）；2. 自然过渡到迎接新生活的具体做法，需贴合学生身份，内容可行；3. 严格遵守词数（80-120）、无真实个人信息、行文连贯的要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头，点明最难忘的事件是和同学一起准备运动会，描述具体过程（每天练习、互相鼓励、不放弃），再说明原因（体会团队力量、珍惜珍贵友谊）；接着过渡到迎接新生活，说明要保持良好学习习惯、更独立勇敢面对新挑战，最后表达对未来的信心。语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，无真实信息，完整覆盖所有写作要点。
【答案】
The most unforgettable event in my junior high school life is preparing for the sports meeting with my classmates. We practised together every day, encouraged each other, and never gave up. It taught me the power of teamwork and let me cherish our precious friendship. We laughed together and got over difficulties side by side.
Graduation is not the end of learning. To welcome my new life, I will keep good learning habits and study harder. I will also be more independent and braver to face new challenges. I will hold onto warm memories and move forward with confidence all the way. I believe I can become a better self in the future.
【知识点】
初中英语书面表达，话题类英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体充实，情感真挚自然，语言连贯流畅，符合词数及格式要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为初中英语书面表达题，主题是“初中校园生活的珍贵点滴”，需完成两个核心写作任务：一是说明初中最难忘的事及原因，二是阐述迎接全新人生旅程的姿态。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先明确具体的难忘校园事件（如集体活动），并说明难忘的深层原因（如收获成长、珍贵情谊）；2. 自然过渡到迎接新生活的具体做法，需贴合学生身份，内容可行；3. 严格遵守词数（80-120）、无真实个人信息、行文连贯的要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头，点明最难忘的事件是和同学一起准备运动会，描述具体过程（每天练习、互相鼓励、不放弃），再说明原因（体会团队力量、珍惜珍贵友谊）；接着过渡到迎接新生活，说明要保持良好学习习惯、更独立勇敢面对新挑战，最后表达对未来的信心。语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，无真实信息，完整覆盖所有写作要点。
【答案】
The most unforgettable event in my junior high school life is preparing for the sports meeting with my classmates. We practised together every day, encouraged each other, and never gave up. It taught me the power of teamwork and let me cherish our precious friendship. We laughed together and got over difficulties side by side.
Graduation is not the end of learning. To welcome my new life, I will keep good learning habits and study harder. I will also be more independent and braver to face new challenges. I will hold onto warm memories and move forward with confidence all the way. I believe I can become a better self in the future.
【知识点】
初中英语书面表达，话题类英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体充实，情感真挚自然，语言连贯流畅，符合词数及格式要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
