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五、任务型阅读。
The world is a book, and those who do not travel only read one page. Travelling the world
can help us to better understand it. With this idea in mind, I began my journey to Yunnan.
When I reached the foot of Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, I felt the cold air. Even though it
was summer, I felt like it was still winter there! The road to the top was so long and the
weather was so foggy that it was hard to go on. I had to stop several times to take a small
break. Finally, I reached the top with great excitement. Looking around, I could hardly believe
my eyes. The mountain was covered in snow and shone like glass in the rising sun. And
everything looked wonderful. Looking at the beautiful, natural sights, I felt smaller than an
ant. What an amazing feeling!
After climbing the snowy mountain, I visited Lijiang, an old city with a history of about
800 years. When I walked on the stone path, it felt like walking through a long history step by
step. Along the way, I noticed that the houses looked old and beautiful. I really love the city
and its slow lifestyle.
根据短文内容回答下列问题。(回答不超过6个词)
1. Why did the writer begin his journey to Yunnan? ______
2. When did the writer visit Yunnan?
3. How did the writer feel when looking around on the top of the mountain?
4. What did the houses along the way look like?
5. What do you think of Lijiang's slow lifestyle?
The world is a book, and those who do not travel only read one page. Travelling the world
can help us to better understand it. With this idea in mind, I began my journey to Yunnan.
When I reached the foot of Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, I felt the cold air. Even though it
was summer, I felt like it was still winter there! The road to the top was so long and the
weather was so foggy that it was hard to go on. I had to stop several times to take a small
break. Finally, I reached the top with great excitement. Looking around, I could hardly believe
my eyes. The mountain was covered in snow and shone like glass in the rising sun. And
everything looked wonderful. Looking at the beautiful, natural sights, I felt smaller than an
ant. What an amazing feeling!
After climbing the snowy mountain, I visited Lijiang, an old city with a history of about
800 years. When I walked on the stone path, it felt like walking through a long history step by
step. Along the way, I noticed that the houses looked old and beautiful. I really love the city
and its slow lifestyle.
根据短文内容回答下列问题。(回答不超过6个词)
1. Why did the writer begin his journey to Yunnan? ______
2. When did the writer visit Yunnan?
3. How did the writer feel when looking around on the top of the mountain?
4. What did the houses along the way look like?
5. What do you think of Lijiang's slow lifestyle?
答案
1. To better understand the world. 2. In summer. 3. He felt smaller than an ant. /Smaller than an ant. 4. Old and beautiful. 5. Relaxing.
解析
【分析】
这是限定回答字数的任务型阅读，解题思路非常清晰：首先逐个划出每个题干的核心关键词，带着关键词回到原文定位对应的语句，之后从定位内容里筛选出匹配提问方向的核心信息，最后核对提取内容的字数，确保不超过6个词，符合答题规则。细节类题目都可以通过回文定位直接找答案，最后一道开放题结合慢生活的常识给出符合字数要求的合理表述即可。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第一段“Travelling the world can help us to better understand it. With this idea in mind, I began my journey to Yunnan”，句中it指代前文的the world，提取核心原因得到对应答案，符合字数要求。
2. 定位原文第二段“Even though it was summer, I felt like it was still winter there”，直接提取时间信息即可。
3. 定位原文第二段“Looking at the beautiful, natural sights, I felt smaller than an ant”，直接提取作者对应的感受即可。
4. 定位原文第三段“Along the way, I noticed that the houses looked old and beautiful”，直接提取房屋的外观描述即可。
5. 该题为开放性设问，丽江慢节奏的生活给人的典型感受是放松的，用Relaxing作答符合逻辑和字数要求。
【答案】
1. To better understand the world.
2. In summer.
3. He felt smaller than an ant. /Smaller than an ant.
4. Old and beautiful.
5. Relaxing.
【知识点】
阅读细节定位，信息提取概括，常识语境运用
【点评】
本题整体难度不高，绝大多数答案都可以直接从原文定位获取，仅最后一题为开放性设问，答题时要特别注意题干明确要求的“回答不超过6个词”的限制，避免答案冗余超字数造成不必要的失分。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是限定回答字数的任务型阅读，解题思路非常清晰：首先逐个划出每个题干的核心关键词，带着关键词回到原文定位对应的语句，之后从定位内容里筛选出匹配提问方向的核心信息，最后核对提取内容的字数，确保不超过6个词，符合答题规则。细节类题目都可以通过回文定位直接找答案，最后一道开放题结合慢生活的常识给出符合字数要求的合理表述即可。
【解析】
1. 定位原文第一段“Travelling the world can help us to better understand it. With this idea in mind, I began my journey to Yunnan”，句中it指代前文的the world，提取核心原因得到对应答案，符合字数要求。
2. 定位原文第二段“Even though it was summer, I felt like it was still winter there”，直接提取时间信息即可。
3. 定位原文第二段“Looking at the beautiful, natural sights, I felt smaller than an ant”，直接提取作者对应的感受即可。
4. 定位原文第三段“Along the way, I noticed that the houses looked old and beautiful”，直接提取房屋的外观描述即可。
5. 该题为开放性设问，丽江慢节奏的生活给人的典型感受是放松的，用Relaxing作答符合逻辑和字数要求。
【答案】
1. To better understand the world.
2. In summer.
3. He felt smaller than an ant. /Smaller than an ant.
4. Old and beautiful.
5. Relaxing.
【知识点】
阅读细节定位，信息提取概括，常识语境运用
【点评】
本题整体难度不高，绝大多数答案都可以直接从原文定位获取，仅最后一题为开放性设问，答题时要特别注意题干明确要求的“回答不超过6个词”的限制，避免答案冗余超字数造成不必要的失分。
【难度系数】
0.8
六、书面表达。
春天是游览盐城的最佳季节,Tom 和他的同学在计划一个去盐城的三日游,请写一个关于
本次旅行的计划和注意点。
注意:
1. 表达中必须包含所有要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数100左右,开头已经
写好,不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名。
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yancheng.
春天是游览盐城的最佳季节,Tom 和他的同学在计划一个去盐城的三日游,请写一个关于
本次旅行的计划和注意点。
注意:
1. 表达中必须包含所有要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2. 词数100左右,开头已经
写好,不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实姓名。
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yancheng.
Yancheng has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit N4A museums to learn about local red culture. The next day, we'll enjoy nature in the Dazong Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Water Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yancheng's beauty.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit N4A museums to learn about local red culture. The next day, we'll enjoy nature in the Dazong Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Water Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yancheng's beauty.
答案
One possible version:
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yancheng.
Yancheng has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit N4A museums to learn about local red culture. The next day, we'll enjoy nature in the Dazong Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Water Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yancheng's beauty.
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yancheng.
Yancheng has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit N4A museums to learn about local red culture. The next day, we'll enjoy nature in the Dazong Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Water Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yancheng's beauty.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：这是一篇旅行计划类的说明文，需要覆盖表格全部要点，适当补充内容，词数控制在100左右。第一步先梳理写作逻辑：首先承接给定开头，先说明选择去盐城旅行的原因，除了题干给出的变化大、花木繁多空气清新、街道干净交通便利三个点，自行补充合理的出游优势，满足题干自拟要点的要求。第二步按照时间顺序依次介绍三天的旅行安排，把新四军纪念馆研学、大纵湖赏景、水街美食购物的内容自然串联，不要生硬逐句翻译。第三步补充合理的出行注意事项，最后抒发对本次旅程的期待，完成感受部分的内容，全程注意描述客观事实用一般现在时，描述未来计划用一般将来时，保证行文流畅衔接自然。
【解析】
本篇写作按照清晰的逻辑展开：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍盐城的城市优势，完整覆盖所有出游原因要点，自然引出本次三日游的安排。
2. 按第一天、第二天、第三天的时间顺序依次介绍行程，清晰明了，所有题干给出的行程要点全部体现，表述自然不生硬。
3. 补充符合出游场景的注意事项，最后表达对探索盐城美景的期待，完成感受部分的内容，全文词数符合要求，没有提及任何真实私人信息，完全符合题干的各项规则。
【答案】
One possible version:
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yancheng.
Yancheng has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit N4A museums to learn about local red culture. The next day, we'll enjoy nature in the Dazong Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Water Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yancheng's beauty.
【知识点】
旅行类作文写作
一般将来时运用
要点整合表达
【点评】
该范文完全覆盖题干所有给定要点，没有生硬直译提示内容，行文逻辑清晰，按照“出游缘由-行程安排-出行提示-旅行期待”的脉络展开，时态使用准确合理，补充的出行注意事项贴合出游场景，词数控制在要求范围内，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优质范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道题先明确写作要求：这是一篇旅行计划类的说明文，需要覆盖表格全部要点，适当补充内容，词数控制在100左右。第一步先梳理写作逻辑：首先承接给定开头，先说明选择去盐城旅行的原因，除了题干给出的变化大、花木繁多空气清新、街道干净交通便利三个点，自行补充合理的出游优势，满足题干自拟要点的要求。第二步按照时间顺序依次介绍三天的旅行安排，把新四军纪念馆研学、大纵湖赏景、水街美食购物的内容自然串联，不要生硬逐句翻译。第三步补充合理的出行注意事项，最后抒发对本次旅程的期待，完成感受部分的内容，全程注意描述客观事实用一般现在时，描述未来计划用一般将来时，保证行文流畅衔接自然。
【解析】
本篇写作按照清晰的逻辑展开：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍盐城的城市优势，完整覆盖所有出游原因要点，自然引出本次三日游的安排。
2. 按第一天、第二天、第三天的时间顺序依次介绍行程，清晰明了，所有题干给出的行程要点全部体现，表述自然不生硬。
3. 补充符合出游场景的注意事项，最后表达对探索盐城美景的期待，完成感受部分的内容，全文词数符合要求，没有提及任何真实私人信息，完全符合题干的各项规则。
【答案】
One possible version:
Spring is coming. We are planning to visit Yancheng.
Yancheng has changed a lot. Its beautiful flowers, fresh air, clean streets and convenient transport make it perfect for a spring trip.
Here's our plan. On the first day, we'll visit N4A museums to learn about local red culture. The next day, we'll enjoy nature in the Dazong Lake and He Garden. On the last day, we'll taste delicious food and shop for gifts on Water Street.
Don't forget to check the weather, wear comfortable shoes, and bring cameras. Let's keep the environment clean and follow public rules. We're excited to explore Yancheng's beauty.
【知识点】
旅行类作文写作
一般将来时运用
要点整合表达
【点评】
该范文完全覆盖题干所有给定要点，没有生硬直译提示内容，行文逻辑清晰，按照“出游缘由-行程安排-出行提示-旅行期待”的脉络展开，时态使用准确合理，补充的出行注意事项贴合出游场景，词数控制在要求范围内，是一篇符合初中英语写作要求的优质范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
