Ⅵ. (A )俗话说得好:“养成好习惯是储存健康,放纵不良是透支生命!”但是Alice 平时有一些不良的生活习惯和饮食习惯,因此经常生病。请根据下面邮件的内容,给Alice写一封回信,提一些建议,帮助她改掉坏习惯。(5分)
Dear Amanda,
How is it going, Amanda? I am feeling very terrible these days. Because I'm so busy that I always study late into the night. And I have no time to do sports because of too much homework. What's more, I often eat some junk food, like potato chips, hamburgers and so on. As a result, I fall ill now. What should I do? Please help me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Alice
要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 40词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名等信息。
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear that you are ill now.
Yours sincerely,
Amanda

One possible version:
As the old saying goes, "A good habit is to store the health, indulge bad is overdraw the life. " So changing bad habits is just as important as keeping good habits. Now I want to give you some advice to change your bad habits.
First of all. you had better go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for your health. So don't stay up late. Second, it's good to do sports regularly. You can exercise once a week if you have no time. Thirty minutes every time is OK. At last, we need to have healthy eating habits. Don't eat junk food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. As a student, we shouldn't go to school without breakfast. Breakfast gives us enough energy for the morning.
If you take my advice, I think you'll get better and better.

【分析】
本题为英语建议信写作任务，需针对Alice的三个不良习惯（熬夜、缺乏运动、食用垃圾食品），结合题目要求（40词左右、语句通顺、无真实信息），给出针对性的健康建议，完成回信内容。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，围绕Alice的问题给出对应建议；2. 针对熬夜问题建议早睡，针对运动问题建议每周适量运动，针对饮食问题建议少吃垃圾食品多吃蔬果；3. 控制字数，保证语句通顺、意思连贯，符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to hear that you are ill now. You shouldn't stay up late. Try to do some sports weekly and eat less junk food, more fruit and vegetables. I hope you'll get better soon.
Yours sincerely,
Amanda
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康话题表达
【点评】
本题结合学生日常学习生活，考查英语写作的实用性，要求学生能针对具体问题提出合理建议，体现英语的交际功能，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.5

(B) 本学期你们学校新开设了很多体育俱乐部,假如你是交换生 David,请给负责的李老师写一封电子邮件,表明你想加入的一个体育俱乐部,并结合自己的经历和特长说明理由,同时提出自己加入该俱乐部后的期望。(15 分)


要求:1. 必须包括表中所有要点,可适当增加细节;
2. 80 词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 参考词汇仅供参考。
Dear Mr Li,
I am David from Class Two, Grade Eight. This term, I would like to choose





Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
David

One possible version:
the basketball club.
Basketball has been an important part of my life for years. I have actively joined in different competitions and achieved good results. My skills of ball control and accurate shooting have been improved through lots of practice. Not only does playing basketball keep me physically healthy, but also it develops my teamwork spirit and leadership skills. I sincerely hope that after joining the club, I can acquire more skills from experienced coaches. Moreover, I am eager to build true friendship with my teammates and work together to bring glory to our school. Thank you for your attention.

【分析】这是一封申请加入体育俱乐部的电子邮件，开头结尾已给出，需补全核心内容。首先确定要加入的俱乐部（参考答案选篮球俱乐部）；其次结合自身经历与特长说明理由，可提及参加过的比赛、掌握的篮球技能（如控球、投篮）；最后明确加入后的期望，如学习专业技能、结交队友、为校争光，需保证内容连贯、符合80词左右的要求，语言贴合八年级学生水平。
【解析】写作时，先点明想加入篮球俱乐部；接着阐述篮球对自己的意义，结合参加比赛、掌握控球与投篮技能的经历，说明篮球带来的益处；最后表达加入俱乐部的期望，注意语句通顺、用词准确，控制字数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
the basketball club.
Basketball has been an important part of my life for years. I have actively joined in different competitions and achieved good results. My skills of ball control and accurate shooting have been improved through lots of practice. Not only does playing basketball keep me physically healthy, but also it develops my teamwork spirit and leadership skills. I sincerely hope that after joining the club, I can acquire more skills from experienced coaches. Moreover, I am eager to build true friendship with my teammates and work together to bring glory to our school. Thank you for your attention.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、体育话题表达
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，结合个人经历与特长，期望明确，语言流畅自然，符合八年级英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.6