【主题写作实践】
你的家乡天气如何呢?请你根据下面的
提示,写一篇短文介绍你家乡的天气。

注意:
(1)语句通顺、语意连贯、语法正确;
(2)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实
信息;
(3)写作词数为80词左右。

写作点拨:
审题
本题需要从季节、气候、人们的活动三个
方面介绍家乡的天气。文章体裁为说明文,人
称使用第三人称,时态为一般现在时、现在进
行时。
提纲

参考句型
1. I would like to tell you something about my
hometown.
2. It is hot and rainy in summer and it is cold
and dry in winter.
3. sb is/are doing sth
规范作文:

主题写作实践
Hello, boys and girls. I would like to tell you
something about my hometown. My hometown is in
Hunan. It is hot and rainy in summer, and it is cold
and dry in winter. In spring and autumn, it is warm.
It is summer now. Today is Sunday and it is
sunny and a little hot today. My family are in the
park. My parents are sitting under a tall tree. They
are talking about something. I'm playing volleyball
with my sister. All of us are having a good time
here. People can feel relaxed here.

【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题，需围绕“介绍家乡天气”展开，解题思路如下：1. 审题明确要求：从季节气候、人们活动两方面介绍，用一般现在时、现在进行时，无真实信息，词数80左右；2. 开篇用参考句型引出介绍家乡；3. 说明家乡不同季节的天气特点；4. 结合当前季节描述当下天气，用现在进行时写人们的活动，保证语句通顺连贯。
【解析】
按照写作要求，先开篇引出介绍家乡，再说明家乡四季天气，接着结合当前季节描述天气，最后用现在进行时写人们的活动，确保符合语法、字数及内容要求。
【答案】
Hello, boys and girls. I would like to tell you something about my hometown. My hometown is in Hunan. It is hot and rainy in summer, and it is cold and dry in winter. In spring and autumn, it is warm. It is summer now. Today is Sunday and it is sunny and a little hot today. My family are in the park. My parents are sitting under a tall tree. They are talking about something. I'm playing volleyball with my sister. All of us are having a good time here. People can feel relaxed here.
【知识点】
英语写作、时态运用、季节描述
【点评】
本题考查学生英语综合运用能力，要求结合生活实际完成语篇写作，既考查基础语法时态，又考查语篇连贯性，贴近学生生活，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5