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Ⅸ.书面表达。
假如你是 Li Hua,写一篇关于你是如何管理零花钱的小短文。要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话。
提示:1. How much pocket money do you get?
2. What are you going to buy?
3. How do you use your money wisely?
假如你是 Li Hua,写一篇关于你是如何管理零花钱的小短文。要求:语句通顺,书写规范,不少于5句话。
提示:1. How much pocket money do you get?
2. What are you going to buy?
3. How do you use your money wisely?
My pocket money plan
Hi, I'm Li Hua. I get 110 yuan pocket money every month. I always make a spending plan to use my money wisely.
First, I use some of my money to buy school things, like new pencils and storybooks. I also use a little money to pay for my music lessons, because I love singing.
Then, I keep some money for sharing. On festivals, I buy small gifts for my parents and friends.
Finally, I save the rest of my money. I'm saving up to buy a new music book. I think it's important to save and spend money well.
答案
范文:
My pocket money plan
Hi, I'm Li Hua. I get 110 yuan pocket money every month. I always make a spending plan to use my money wisely.
First, I use some of my money to buy school things, like new pencils and storybooks. I also use a little money to pay for my music lessons, because I love singing.
Then, I keep some money for sharing. On festivals, I buy small gifts for my parents and friends.
Finally, I save the rest of my money. I'm saving up to buy a new music book. I think it's important to save and spend money well.
My pocket money plan
Hi, I'm Li Hua. I get 110 yuan pocket money every month. I always make a spending plan to use my money wisely.
First, I use some of my money to buy school things, like new pencils and storybooks. I also use a little money to pay for my music lessons, because I love singing.
Then, I keep some money for sharing. On festivals, I buy small gifts for my parents and friends.
Finally, I save the rest of my money. I'm saving up to buy a new music book. I think it's important to save and spend money well.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：以Li Hua的身份写关于管理零花钱的短文，需涵盖提示的三个要点（零花钱数额、用途、明智使用方法），不少于5句。解题思路：1. 开头介绍自己及每月零花钱数量；2. 中间分点说明零花钱的使用方式（购买学习/兴趣相关物品、分享、储蓄），体现明智使用；3. 结尾总结合理用钱的重要性，确保语句通顺、符合要求。
【解析】
按照思路组织内容：先点明身份和零花钱数额，再分述使用情况：将部分钱用于学习用品和兴趣课程，部分用于节日给亲友买小礼物，剩余储蓄用于购买目标物品，最后点明合理用钱的意义，形成完整短文。
【答案】
My pocket money plan
Hi, I'm Li Hua. I get 110 yuan pocket money every month. I always make a spending plan to use my money wisely.
First, I use some of my money to buy school things, like new pencils and storybooks. I also use a little money to pay for my music lessons, because I love singing.
Then, I keep some money for sharing. On festivals, I buy small gifts for my parents and friends.
Finally, I save the rest of my money. I'm saving up to buy a new music book. I think it's important to save and spend money well.
【知识点】
话题写作，英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，涵盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，语言流畅自然，符合书面表达的要求，能为学生提供很好的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作要求：以Li Hua的身份写关于管理零花钱的短文，需涵盖提示的三个要点（零花钱数额、用途、明智使用方法），不少于5句。解题思路：1. 开头介绍自己及每月零花钱数量；2. 中间分点说明零花钱的使用方式（购买学习/兴趣相关物品、分享、储蓄），体现明智使用；3. 结尾总结合理用钱的重要性，确保语句通顺、符合要求。
【解析】
按照思路组织内容：先点明身份和零花钱数额，再分述使用情况：将部分钱用于学习用品和兴趣课程，部分用于节日给亲友买小礼物，剩余储蓄用于购买目标物品，最后点明合理用钱的意义，形成完整短文。
【答案】
My pocket money plan
Hi, I'm Li Hua. I get 110 yuan pocket money every month. I always make a spending plan to use my money wisely.
First, I use some of my money to buy school things, like new pencils and storybooks. I also use a little money to pay for my music lessons, because I love singing.
Then, I keep some money for sharing. On festivals, I buy small gifts for my parents and friends.
Finally, I save the rest of my money. I'm saving up to buy a new music book. I think it's important to save and spend money well.
【知识点】
话题写作，英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，结构清晰，涵盖所有提示要点，内容具体真实，语言流畅自然，符合书面表达的要求，能为学生提供很好的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
