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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
假如你是李华，你学校即将举办以“A Hero Around Me”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请选择你心目中的一位英雄，如认真负责的老师、热心助人的同学、勤劳的环卫工人等，结合实际，根据以下导图的提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求：
1. 须包含以上导图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
3. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A Hero Around Me
Hello,everyone! I am Li Hua. It's a great honor for me to speak here.
假如你是李华，你学校即将举办以“A Hero Around Me”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请选择你心目中的一位英雄，如认真负责的老师、热心助人的同学、勤劳的环卫工人等，结合实际，根据以下导图的提示，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要求：
1. 须包含以上导图中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
3. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A Hero Around Me
Hello,everyone! I am Li Hua. It's a great honor for me to speak here.
答案
One possible version:
A Hero Around Me
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It's a great honor for me to speak here. I want to talk about a hero around me—my English teacher Ms Wang, who has always been my role model.
Ms Wang is a kind and responsible teacher who devotes all her energy to our studies. Last term, I failed my English exam and felt extremely upset. When she found out my difficulty, she comforted me gently first. Later, she spent her spare time helping me analyze my mistakes and make a proper study plan. Gradually, with her continuous encouragement, I made significant progress in English.
I deeply admire Ms Wang and regard her as a real hero. Her selfless love and patience give me much strength. I will learn from her and strive to be a person who is ready to help others.
Thank you for listening!
A Hero Around Me
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It's a great honor for me to speak here. I want to talk about a hero around me—my English teacher Ms Wang, who has always been my role model.
Ms Wang is a kind and responsible teacher who devotes all her energy to our studies. Last term, I failed my English exam and felt extremely upset. When she found out my difficulty, she comforted me gently first. Later, she spent her spare time helping me analyze my mistakes and make a proper study plan. Gradually, with her continuous encouragement, I made significant progress in English.
I deeply admire Ms Wang and regard her as a real hero. Her selfless love and patience give me much strength. I will learn from her and strive to be a person who is ready to help others.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语演讲稿写作题，需围绕“A Hero Around Me”主题，结合导图的三个核心要点（介绍英雄、描述英雄事迹、表达敬佩与学习决心）完成写作。解题思路：1. 选择身边熟悉的英雄（如老师、同学等），确定写作对象；2. 简要介绍英雄的身份与特点；3. 选取具体事例体现英雄的优秀品质；4. 表达对英雄的敬佩及向其学习的决心，同时满足词数、行文连贯等要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头引出要介绍的英雄（英语老师Ms Wang），简要说明她是负责任的老师；接着通过具体事例（自己英语考试失利，老师利用课余时间辅导，帮助自己进步）体现她的热心与负责；最后表达对老师的敬佩，表明要向她学习帮助他人的品质，结尾加上演讲常用的礼貌语，确保覆盖所有导图要点，语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A Hero Around Me
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It's a great honor for me to speak here. I want to talk about a hero around me—my English teacher Ms Wang, who has always been my role model.
Ms Wang is a kind and responsible teacher who devotes all her energy to our studies. Last term, I failed my English exam and felt extremely upset. When she found out my difficulty, she comforted me gently first. Later, she spent her spare time helping me analyze my mistakes and make a proper study plan. Gradually, with her continuous encouragement, I made significant progress in English.
I deeply admire Ms Wang and regard her as a real hero. Her selfless love and patience give me much strength. I will learn from her and strive to be a person who is ready to help others.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；演讲稿写作；要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖导图的三个核心要点，事例具体真实，情感表达真挚，语言通顺流畅，符合演讲稿的格式要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语演讲稿写作题，需围绕“A Hero Around Me”主题，结合导图的三个核心要点（介绍英雄、描述英雄事迹、表达敬佩与学习决心）完成写作。解题思路：1. 选择身边熟悉的英雄（如老师、同学等），确定写作对象；2. 简要介绍英雄的身份与特点；3. 选取具体事例体现英雄的优秀品质；4. 表达对英雄的敬佩及向其学习的决心，同时满足词数、行文连贯等要求。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头引出要介绍的英雄（英语老师Ms Wang），简要说明她是负责任的老师；接着通过具体事例（自己英语考试失利，老师利用课余时间辅导，帮助自己进步）体现她的热心与负责；最后表达对老师的敬佩，表明要向她学习帮助他人的品质，结尾加上演讲常用的礼貌语，确保覆盖所有导图要点，语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
A Hero Around Me
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. It's a great honor for me to speak here. I want to talk about a hero around me—my English teacher Ms Wang, who has always been my role model.
Ms Wang is a kind and responsible teacher who devotes all her energy to our studies. Last term, I failed my English exam and felt extremely upset. When she found out my difficulty, she comforted me gently first. Later, she spent her spare time helping me analyze my mistakes and make a proper study plan. Gradually, with her continuous encouragement, I made significant progress in English.
I deeply admire Ms Wang and regard her as a real hero. Her selfless love and patience give me much strength. I will learn from her and strive to be a person who is ready to help others.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；演讲稿写作；要点式写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖导图的三个核心要点，事例具体真实，情感表达真挚，语言通顺流畅，符合演讲稿的格式要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
