佳作赏析
[经典例题]
为展现丰富多彩的校园生活,学校将举办以“My favourite day at school”为题的征文活动。请根据问题提示,结合当天的课程和课外活动的安排,用英语写一篇70词左右的作文投稿。
问题:1. What day do you like best? 2. What is your favourite subject? 3. What activities do you have after class?
[高分范文]
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
On Friday morning, I have four different classes. ① Of all the subjects, I like English best because my English teacher is great. He always makes his classes interesting. In the afternoon, there are different activities in the school. I am in the basketball team. We often have basketball games with students from other schools. ② The games are always exciting because everyone tries their best to win.
③ I have a good time every Friday at school.
[名师点评]
文章结构完整,叙述具体,细节真实,描写生动,通过描述周五的课程和活动,表达对学校生活的喜爱,有真情实感。
① 运用“like... best”“make... interesting”表达对英语学科和老师的喜爱之情。
② 运用try one's best to do sth.表明球类活动富有对抗性,令人兴奋。
③ 总结全文,突出主题,表明作者周五在学校有美好快乐的体验。
特训
素材积累
[开头句]
1. My school day starts at 8:00.
2. I go to school from Monday to Friday.
3. I would like to tell you about my school life.
[中间句]
1. He goes to school at about 7:10 a. m.
2. I have lunch at school.
3. We have a field trip each term.
[结尾句]
1. I like my school life.
2. We always have great fun!
3. What a happy day it is!
[名言警句]
1. Study hard and play hard.
努力学习,尽情玩耍。
2. Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.
今日事今日毕。
写作演练
[小试身手]
假设你是汤姆(Tom),你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友琳达(Linda)写一封邮件,向她介绍你现在的学校生活。70词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。2. 课外活动。3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第二段:... starts at... We have... lessons... I like... because...
第三段:Now I am a member of... I also like...
第四段:I have lots of new friends... We often chat together...
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
________
________
________
________
________
________
________
________
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
特训
[经典例题]
为展现丰富多彩的校园生活,学校将举办以“My favourite day at school”为题的征文活动。请根据问题提示,结合当天的课程和课外活动的安排,用英语写一篇70词左右的作文投稿。
问题:1. What day do you like best? 2. What is your favourite subject? 3. What activities do you have after class?
[高分范文]
My favourite day at school
Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.
On Friday morning, I have four different classes. ① Of all the subjects, I like English best because my English teacher is great. He always makes his classes interesting. In the afternoon, there are different activities in the school. I am in the basketball team. We often have basketball games with students from other schools. ② The games are always exciting because everyone tries their best to win.
③ I have a good time every Friday at school.
[名师点评]
文章结构完整,叙述具体,细节真实,描写生动,通过描述周五的课程和活动,表达对学校生活的喜爱,有真情实感。
① 运用“like... best”“make... interesting”表达对英语学科和老师的喜爱之情。
② 运用try one's best to do sth.表明球类活动富有对抗性,令人兴奋。
③ 总结全文,突出主题,表明作者周五在学校有美好快乐的体验。
特训
素材积累
[开头句]
1. My school day starts at 8:00.
2. I go to school from Monday to Friday.
3. I would like to tell you about my school life.
[中间句]
1. He goes to school at about 7:10 a. m.
2. I have lunch at school.
3. We have a field trip each term.
[结尾句]
1. I like my school life.
2. We always have great fun!
3. What a happy day it is!
[名言警句]
1. Study hard and play hard.
努力学习,尽情玩耍。
2. Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.
今日事今日毕。
写作演练
[小试身手]
假设你是汤姆(Tom),你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友琳达(Linda)写一封邮件,向她介绍你现在的学校生活。70词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
提示:1. 学习情况。2. 课外活动。3. 同学关系。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。
[写作提纲]
要点描述
第二段:... starts at... We have... lessons... I like... because...
第三段:Now I am a member of... I also like...
第四段:I have lots of new friends... We often chat together...
[妙笔生花]
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
________
________
________
________
________
________
________
________
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
特训
答案
One possible version:
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
Dear Linda,
I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.
Our school starts at half past seven in the morning. We have six lessons every day. I like Chinese best because I can learn a lot about China.
I like football. Now I am a member of our school football team. We practise football after school on Wednesday afternoons. I also like reading because it is great fun. I often borrow some books from the library.
I have lots of new friends at school. They are all nice to me. We often chat together after lunch. We learn from each other and help each other.
I like my new school.
Yours,
Tom
