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(2025·江苏淮安·一模)不惧碾作尘,无意苦争春。张桂梅的精神值得我们学习,她的行为值得我们敬佩。在你的成长道路上,也一定出现过值得你敬佩的人。这个人可能是你的父母、老师或你的朋友……你们学校正在组织英语作文比赛,请以“The person I respect”为题,根据以下要点,写一篇短文参赛。
【要点】1. Who is the person you respect?
2. Why do you respect him/her?
3. How does he/she influence you?
【要求】1. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
【要点】1. Who is the person you respect?
2. Why do you respect him/her?
3. How does he/she influence you?
【要求】1. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
答案
The person I respect
The person I respect most is my English teacher, Ms. Wang.
She is always kind and patient to every student. Last year I was poor at English and nearly gave it up. She spent much of her free time helping me patiently, and finally I made great progress. She also often volunteers to help left-behind children on weekends.
Now I am more willing to help people around me. I hope I can pass this warmth on in the future.
The person I respect most is my English teacher, Ms. Wang.
She is always kind and patient to every student. Last year I was poor at English and nearly gave it up. She spent much of her free time helping me patiently, and finally I made great progress. She also often volunteers to help left-behind children on weekends.
Now I am more willing to help people around me. I hope I can pass this warmth on in the future.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“The person I respect”，需围绕三个指定要点展开：1. 点明自己尊敬的人物；2. 阐述尊敬的原因（需结合具体事例）；3. 说明该人物对自己的影响。写作时要注意规避真实学校、姓名，语句连贯，控制词数在80左右，符合参赛要求。
【解析】采用“总-分-总”结构写作：开头直接点明尊敬的人物是英语老师Ms. Wang；中间通过两个具体事例（帮助英语薄弱的自己进步、周末志愿帮扶留守儿童）说明尊敬的原因；结尾点明该人物对自己的影响（自己更愿意帮助他人，传递温暖），确保要点齐全、语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】The person I respect
The person I respect most is my English teacher, Ms. Wang.
She is always kind and patient to every student. Last year I was poor at English and nearly gave it up. She spent much of her free time helping me patiently, and finally I made great progress. She also often volunteers to help left-behind children on weekends.
Now I am more willing to help people around me. I hope I can pass this warmth on in the future.
【知识点】英语应用文写作 要点式作文
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，通过具体事例展现了尊敬他人的原因，语句连贯、情感真挚，符合参赛作文的规范。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】采用“总-分-总”结构写作：开头直接点明尊敬的人物是英语老师Ms. Wang；中间通过两个具体事例（帮助英语薄弱的自己进步、周末志愿帮扶留守儿童）说明尊敬的原因；结尾点明该人物对自己的影响（自己更愿意帮助他人，传递温暖），确保要点齐全、语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】The person I respect
The person I respect most is my English teacher, Ms. Wang.
She is always kind and patient to every student. Last year I was poor at English and nearly gave it up. She spent much of her free time helping me patiently, and finally I made great progress. She also often volunteers to help left-behind children on weekends.
Now I am more willing to help people around me. I hope I can pass this warmth on in the future.
【知识点】英语应用文写作 要点式作文
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，要点齐全，通过具体事例展现了尊敬他人的原因，语句连贯、情感真挚，符合参赛作文的规范。
【难度系数】0.7
