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[开头句]
1. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. （引出节日）
2. Let's see how people all over the world are celebrating it. （引出活动）
[中间句]
1. It is also a time to show love for our elders. （节日意义）
2. On this day, we wish our elders a long and happy life. （节日习俗,下同）
3. On the Chinese New Year's Eve, families get together and enjoy a big dinner.
[结尾句]
1. I love celebrating New Year. （节日感受）
2. I hope you can come to celebrate it with us. （节日邀请）
3. How interesting the festival is! （节日感叹）
4. But wherever you are, Happy New Year! （节日祝福）
[名言警句]
1. A new heart for a New Year, always! 新年新心,永远如此!
2. Festivals bring families together. 节日让家人团聚。
写作演练＞＞
中国传统节日是我们中华民族悠久历史与丰富文化的组成部分,请以“An unforgettable
festival”为题,写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文分享你曾经度过的一个难忘的节日。
提示: 1. What is your unforgettable festival? 2. Why is this festival unforgettable to you? 3. What is your feeling?
[思路点拨]
① 时态:以一般过去时为主。② 人称:第一人称、第三人称。③ 首先介绍最难忘的节日是什么,然后具体阐述节日活动,最后表明自己的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
An unforgettable festival
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. （引出节日）
2. Let's see how people all over the world are celebrating it. （引出活动）
[中间句]
1. It is also a time to show love for our elders. （节日意义）
2. On this day, we wish our elders a long and happy life. （节日习俗,下同）
3. On the Chinese New Year's Eve, families get together and enjoy a big dinner.
[结尾句]
1. I love celebrating New Year. （节日感受）
2. I hope you can come to celebrate it with us. （节日邀请）
3. How interesting the festival is! （节日感叹）
4. But wherever you are, Happy New Year! （节日祝福）
[名言警句]
1. A new heart for a New Year, always! 新年新心,永远如此!
2. Festivals bring families together. 节日让家人团聚。
写作演练＞＞
中国传统节日是我们中华民族悠久历史与丰富文化的组成部分,请以“An unforgettable
festival”为题,写一篇 80 词左右的英语短文分享你曾经度过的一个难忘的节日。
提示: 1. What is your unforgettable festival? 2. Why is this festival unforgettable to you? 3. What is your feeling?
[思路点拨]
① 时态:以一般过去时为主。② 人称:第一人称、第三人称。③ 首先介绍最难忘的节日是什么,然后具体阐述节日活动,最后表明自己的感受。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together.
Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food.
My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi.
At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
解析
【分析】本题是英语写作题，要求以“An unforgettable festival”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主；2. 按三段结构构思：第一段点明难忘的节日是去年的春节；第二段描述节日准备过程，包含父母的付出和自己努力学包饺子的经历；第三段说明自己开心的原因；3. 结合给定素材，确保内容紧扣节日主题，符合字数要求。
【解析】写作步骤：① 审题：明确主题为“难忘的节日”，时态用一般过去时，结构分为三段；② 第一段：引出最难忘的节日是去年的春节；③ 第二段：具体写父母的准备工作（妈妈买新衣、做饭，爸爸打扫装饰房子），自己努力学包饺子，经奶奶教导后成功；④ 第三段：点明开心的原因是自己能独立包饺子；⑤ 检查字数和语法，确保符合要求。
【答案】An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
【知识点】英语短文写作、一般过去时、节日话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，内容具体，运用一般过去时准确叙述了难忘的春节经历，情感真实，符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】写作步骤：① 审题：明确主题为“难忘的节日”，时态用一般过去时，结构分为三段；② 第一段：引出最难忘的节日是去年的春节；③ 第二段：具体写父母的准备工作（妈妈买新衣、做饭，爸爸打扫装饰房子），自己努力学包饺子，经奶奶教导后成功；④ 第三段：点明开心的原因是自己能独立包饺子；⑤ 检查字数和语法，确保符合要求。
【答案】An unforgettable festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. And I had an unforgettable one last year.
My parents prepared for the festival together. Mum bought new clothes for me and cooked much delicious food. My father cleaned and decorated the house. I tried my best to learn how to make jiaozi. At first, I didn't do it well. But my grandma taught me carefully. Then I kept practising and I made it!
I was happy because I could make jiaozi by myself!
【知识点】英语短文写作、一般过去时、节日话题表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，内容具体，运用一般过去时准确叙述了难忘的春节经历，情感真实，符合初中英语写作的要求。
【难度系数】0.3
