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素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. It is important for us to live a healthy life. （观点陈述）
2. A healthy diet can give us enough energy. （重要说明）
3. It is important for me to keep fit. （健康观念）
[中间句]
1. I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy. （作息习惯）
2. I never go to school without breakfast. （饮食习惯）
3. Too much sugar is bad for our teeth. （健康常识）
4. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and less sugar. （健康计划）
[结尾句]
1. I can stay fit with a healthy lifestyle. （健康总结）
2. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest. （理念总结）
3. Let's save food and eat healthily! （呼吁号召）
[名言警句]
1. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果,医生远离我。
2. Good health is over wealth. 健康胜于财富。
写作演练＞＞
假设你是安迪(Andy),请根据下面的提示,
以“My lifestyle”为题,写一篇有关饮食和生活习惯的英语短文。
提示:1. 每天打篮球。2. 早餐吃一个鸡蛋,喝一杯牛奶。3. 午餐、晚餐吃肉和蔬菜。4. 喜欢喝牛奶,不喜欢吃甜食。
注意:1. 词数70左右。2. 要点完整,表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:第一人称。③ 开头自我介绍,主体部分按提示依次介绍,结尾阐述自己的生活方式很健康。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My lifestyle
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. It is important for us to live a healthy life. （观点陈述）
2. A healthy diet can give us enough energy. （重要说明）
3. It is important for me to keep fit. （健康观念）
[中间句]
1. I get nine hours of sleep every night, so I am always full of energy. （作息习惯）
2. I never go to school without breakfast. （饮食习惯）
3. Too much sugar is bad for our teeth. （健康常识）
4. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and less sugar. （健康计划）
[结尾句]
1. I can stay fit with a healthy lifestyle. （健康总结）
2. For me, a healthy lifestyle is all about a healthy diet, enough exercise and rest. （理念总结）
3. Let's save food and eat healthily! （呼吁号召）
[名言警句]
1. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果,医生远离我。
2. Good health is over wealth. 健康胜于财富。
写作演练＞＞
假设你是安迪(Andy),请根据下面的提示,
以“My lifestyle”为题,写一篇有关饮食和生活习惯的英语短文。
提示:1. 每天打篮球。2. 早餐吃一个鸡蛋,喝一杯牛奶。3. 午餐、晚餐吃肉和蔬菜。4. 喜欢喝牛奶,不喜欢吃甜食。
注意:1. 词数70左右。2. 要点完整,表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:第一人称。③ 开头自我介绍,主体部分按提示依次介绍,结尾阐述自己的生活方式很健康。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My lifestyle
I'm Andy. I'm 14 years old. I play basketball every day because I want to be a basketball player.
I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast.
I have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk because I need lots of energy. I don't like eating sweet food because it is not good for my health.
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
My lifestyle
I'm Andy. I'm 14 years old. I play basketball every day because I want to be a basketball player.
I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast. I have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk because I need lots of energy. I don't like eating sweet food because it is not good for my health.
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.
My lifestyle
I'm Andy. I'm 14 years old. I play basketball every day because I want to be a basketball player.
I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast. I have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk because I need lots of energy. I don't like eating sweet food because it is not good for my health.
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语写作题，要求以安迪的身份写关于生活习惯的短文。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称；2. 按三段结构展开：第一段自我介绍（姓名、年龄、每天打篮球）；第二段介绍饮食（早餐、午餐晚餐的食物，喜欢和不喜欢的食物及原因）；第三段总结自己的生活方式很健康；3. 结合提示和素材，确保要点完整，语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：用“I'm Andy. I'm + 年龄 + years old. I play basketball every day...”介绍自己，点明每天打篮球；2. 中间：写饮食部分，早餐是“eat an egg and drink a glass of milk”，午餐和晚餐是“have some meat and vegetables”，喜欢喝牛奶的原因（“because I need lots of energy”），不喜欢甜食的原因（“because it is not good for my health”）；3. 结尾：用“I think my lifestyle is very healthy.”总结。注意运用正确的句式，比如原因状语从句，确保语句连贯，要点齐全。
【答案】
One possible version:
My lifestyle
I'm Andy. I'm 14 years old. I play basketball every day because I want to be a basketball player.
I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast. I have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk because I need lots of energy. I don't like eating sweet food because it is not good for my health.
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般现在时、饮食表达
【点评】
这篇作文要点完整，涵盖了题目要求的所有内容，语句通顺，结构清晰，运用原因状语从句丰富表达，符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语写作题，要求以安迪的身份写关于生活习惯的短文。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称；2. 按三段结构展开：第一段自我介绍（姓名、年龄、每天打篮球）；第二段介绍饮食（早餐、午餐晚餐的食物，喜欢和不喜欢的食物及原因）；第三段总结自己的生活方式很健康；3. 结合提示和素材，确保要点完整，语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：用“I'm Andy. I'm + 年龄 + years old. I play basketball every day...”介绍自己，点明每天打篮球；2. 中间：写饮食部分，早餐是“eat an egg and drink a glass of milk”，午餐和晚餐是“have some meat and vegetables”，喜欢喝牛奶的原因（“because I need lots of energy”），不喜欢甜食的原因（“because it is not good for my health”）；3. 结尾：用“I think my lifestyle is very healthy.”总结。注意运用正确的句式，比如原因状语从句，确保语句连贯，要点齐全。
【答案】
One possible version:
My lifestyle
I'm Andy. I'm 14 years old. I play basketball every day because I want to be a basketball player.
I always eat an egg and drink a glass of milk for breakfast. I have some meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk because I need lots of energy. I don't like eating sweet food because it is not good for my health.
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.
【知识点】
英语写作、一般现在时、饮食表达
【点评】
这篇作文要点完整，涵盖了题目要求的所有内容，语句通顺，结构清晰，运用原因状语从句丰富表达，符合初中英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
