话题综述 本单元的话题主要是围绕介绍新学校的环境、设施、老师和同学展开,要求学生能够用所学的词汇和句型以及单元语法重点(人称代词的主格和宾格)从不同方面介绍自己的学校,谈论自己的学校生活和校园活动,从而产生热爱学校和热爱学习的积极情感。在写作时可以从以下方面着手:(1)介绍学校建筑、校园生活;(2)介绍自己最喜欢的校园地点并说明原因;(3)介绍自己的老师和同学;(4)表达自己在学校的感受。
典型例题 新学期已开始两月有余,相信你已渐渐熟悉自己的学校。假如你是阳光中学的李华,参与了学校与美国一所中学的友好交流项目。现在请你写一封80词左右的邮件,从学校设施、师生情况和在校学习的感受三方面向你的美国新朋友Lucy介绍你的学校。
典型例题 新学期已开始两月有余,相信你已渐渐熟悉自己的学校。假如你是阳光中学的李华,参与了学校与美国一所中学的友好交流项目。现在请你写一封80词左右的邮件,从学校设施、师生情况和在校学习的感受三方面向你的美国新朋友Lucy介绍你的学校。
答案
Dear Lucy,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Let me tell you about my new school.
It has bright teaching buildings, a big library with many interesting books and a large playground. We can read or play sports there after class. Our teachers are very kind and they often help us, my classmates are all nice and we get on well. I feel very happy at school and I love it so much.
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Let me tell you about my new school.
It has bright teaching buildings, a big library with many interesting books and a large playground. We can read or play sports there after class. Our teachers are very kind and they often help us, my classmates are all nice and we get on well. I feel very happy at school and I love it so much.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以阳光中学李华的身份给美国朋友Lucy写邮件介绍学校,需围绕学校设施、师生情况、在校感受三方面展开,词数约80,需符合英语邮件格式。解题思路:1. 开头问候并自我介绍,点明写信目的;2. 正文分三部分:介绍学校设施(教学楼、图书馆、操场)、师生情况(老师友善互助、同学相处融洽)、表达在校感受;3. 结尾礼貌署名,确保内容完整、语言简洁。
【解析】写作遵循英语邮件格式:开头用Dear Lucy问候,自我介绍为Sunshine Middle School的Li Hua;正文依次介绍:①学校设施:明亮的教学楼、藏有大量有趣书籍的大图书馆、大操场,课后可在此阅读或运动;②师生情况:老师友善常帮助学生,同学友好相处;③表达感受:在学校很开心,热爱学校;结尾用Yours署名Li Hua,控制词数约80,准确运用单元相关词汇与语法。
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Let me tell you about my new school.
It has bright teaching buildings, a big library with many interesting books and a large playground. We can read or play sports there after class. Our teachers are very kind and they often help us, my classmates are all nice and we get on well. I feel very happy at school and I love it so much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、人称代词主格宾格、校园话题表达
【点评】本篇范文紧扣写作要求,涵盖所有指定要点,语言简洁流畅,符合英语邮件格式,情感积极真挚,准确运用单元核心词汇与语法,是优秀的单元写作范例。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作遵循英语邮件格式:开头用Dear Lucy问候,自我介绍为Sunshine Middle School的Li Hua;正文依次介绍:①学校设施:明亮的教学楼、藏有大量有趣书籍的大图书馆、大操场,课后可在此阅读或运动;②师生情况:老师友善常帮助学生,同学友好相处;③表达感受:在学校很开心,热爱学校;结尾用Yours署名Li Hua,控制词数约80,准确运用单元相关词汇与语法。
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. Let me tell you about my new school.
It has bright teaching buildings, a big library with many interesting books and a large playground. We can read or play sports there after class. Our teachers are very kind and they often help us, my classmates are all nice and we get on well. I feel very happy at school and I love it so much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、人称代词主格宾格、校园话题表达
【点评】本篇范文紧扣写作要求,涵盖所有指定要点,语言简洁流畅,符合英语邮件格式,情感积极真挚,准确运用单元核心词汇与语法,是优秀的单元写作范例。
【难度系数】0.6
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