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上周一班会课上，你班讨论了户外活动。请根据表格中的内容，谈谈你喜欢的户外活动。词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
| Outdoor activities | Go camping，go horse riding，skating... |
| ---- | ---- |
| Favourite | Flying kites |
| Reasons | ... |
| The history of the kite | Chinese started to make kites over 2,000 years ago.
Mozi—the first kite in history
Lu Ban—make kites out of bamboo
Cai Lun—new way of making paper |
| Your opinions | ... |
【注意】要点齐全，意思连贯，书写规范。
Last Monday，we had a class meeting.
上周一班会课上，你班讨论了户外活动。请根据表格中的内容，谈谈你喜欢的户外活动。词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
| Outdoor activities | Go camping，go horse riding，skating... |
| ---- | ---- |
| Favourite | Flying kites |
| Reasons | ... |
| The history of the kite | Chinese started to make kites over 2,000 years ago.
Mozi—the first kite in history
Lu Ban—make kites out of bamboo
Cai Lun—new way of making paper |
| Your opinions | ... |
【注意】要点齐全，意思连贯，书写规范。
Last Monday，we had a class meeting.
At the meeting, we talked about outdoor activities.
There are a lot of outdoor activities such as camping, cycling, riding, skating and so on. Among them, I like flying kites best because kite-flying can make me feel happy and relaxed. At weekends, I often fly kites with my friends in the park.
Kites have a long history in China. The Chinese started to make kites over 2,000 years ago. Mozi made the first kite in history. He made a bird out of wood. Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. Later, Cai Lun found a new way to make paper. After that, people began to make kites out of paper.
In the Ming and Qing dynasties, kite-flying became a very popular outdoor activity.
Now more and more people like flying kites, so kite-flying is one of the most popular outdoor activities.
答案
One possible version
Last Monday, we had a class meeting. At the meeting, we talked about outdoor activities.
There are a lot of outdoor activities such as camping, cycling, riding, skating and so on. Among them, I like flying kites best because kite-flying can make me feel happy and relaxed. At weekends, I often fly kites with my friends in the park.
Kites have a long history in China. The Chinese started to make kites over 2,000 years ago. Mozi made the first kite in history. He made a bird out of wood. Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. Later, Cai Lun found a new way to make paper. After that, people began to make kites out of paper. In the Ming and Qing dynasties, kite-flying became a very popular outdoor activity.
Now more and more people like flying kites, so kite-flying is one of the most popular outdoor activities.
Last Monday, we had a class meeting. At the meeting, we talked about outdoor activities.
There are a lot of outdoor activities such as camping, cycling, riding, skating and so on. Among them, I like flying kites best because kite-flying can make me feel happy and relaxed. At weekends, I often fly kites with my friends in the park.
Kites have a long history in China. The Chinese started to make kites over 2,000 years ago. Mozi made the first kite in history. He made a bird out of wood. Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. Later, Cai Lun found a new way to make paper. After that, people began to make kites out of paper. In the Ming and Qing dynasties, kite-flying became a very popular outdoor activity.
Now more and more people like flying kites, so kite-flying is one of the most popular outdoor activities.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇给定要点的校园话题英语短文写作，解题时首先顺着已给出的开头承接，第一步先点明本次班会的讨论主题就是户外活动，先列举表格给出的各类常见户外活动；第二步自然引出自己最喜爱的户外活动是放风筝，补充合理的理由，比如放风筝时可以亲近自然、放松身心，还能和同伴增进互动；第三步完整覆盖表格给出的所有风筝历史相关的要点，把2000多年前中国就开始制作风筝、墨子造出历史上第一只风筝、鲁班用竹子制作风筝、蔡伦改进造纸术这些信息用通顺的语句串联起来；最后补充自己的观点，点明放风筝的益处，收尾即可，写作时要注意逻辑连贯，要点无遗漏，词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明班会讨论的是户外活动，列举go camping、go horse riding、skating等常见户外活动，完成第一部分要点；
2. 过渡说明自己最喜欢的户外活动是放风筝，补充合理理由，比如放风筝能让人放松、亲近自然，丰富内容；
3. 按照表格给出的信息依次介绍风筝的悠久历史，将所有历史相关要点自然衔接，补充合理细节让语句通顺；
4. 最后给出自己的观点，说明如今放风筝已经成为广受欢迎的户外活动，有益身心健康，还能感受传统中国文化的魅力，完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version
Last Monday, we had a class meeting. At the meeting, we talked about outdoor activities.
There are a lot of outdoor activities such as camping, cycling, riding, skating and so on. Among them, I like flying kites best because kite-flying can make me feel happy and relaxed. At weekends, I often fly kites with my friends in the park.
Kites have a long history in China. The Chinese started to make kites over 2,000 years ago. Mozi made the first kite in history. He made a bird out of wood. Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. Later, Cai Lun found a new way to make paper. After that, people began to make kites out of paper. In the Ming and Qing dynasties, kite-flying became a very popular outdoor activity.
Now more and more people like flying kites, so kite-flying is one of the most popular outdoor activities.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，传统文化话题表达
【点评】
本题结合校园班会的真实场景，将户外活动话题和中国传统风筝文化结合，既考察学生基础的英语语句组织、要点整合能力，也引导学生了解中国传统民俗文化，难度适中，学生只要覆盖所有给定要点，适当补充逻辑衔接内容就能完成合格的作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇给定要点的校园话题英语短文写作，解题时首先顺着已给出的开头承接，第一步先点明本次班会的讨论主题就是户外活动，先列举表格给出的各类常见户外活动；第二步自然引出自己最喜爱的户外活动是放风筝，补充合理的理由，比如放风筝时可以亲近自然、放松身心，还能和同伴增进互动；第三步完整覆盖表格给出的所有风筝历史相关的要点，把2000多年前中国就开始制作风筝、墨子造出历史上第一只风筝、鲁班用竹子制作风筝、蔡伦改进造纸术这些信息用通顺的语句串联起来；最后补充自己的观点，点明放风筝的益处，收尾即可，写作时要注意逻辑连贯，要点无遗漏，词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接给定开头，点明班会讨论的是户外活动，列举go camping、go horse riding、skating等常见户外活动，完成第一部分要点；
2. 过渡说明自己最喜欢的户外活动是放风筝，补充合理理由，比如放风筝能让人放松、亲近自然，丰富内容；
3. 按照表格给出的信息依次介绍风筝的悠久历史，将所有历史相关要点自然衔接，补充合理细节让语句通顺；
4. 最后给出自己的观点，说明如今放风筝已经成为广受欢迎的户外活动，有益身心健康，还能感受传统中国文化的魅力，完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version
Last Monday, we had a class meeting. At the meeting, we talked about outdoor activities.
There are a lot of outdoor activities such as camping, cycling, riding, skating and so on. Among them, I like flying kites best because kite-flying can make me feel happy and relaxed. At weekends, I often fly kites with my friends in the park.
Kites have a long history in China. The Chinese started to make kites over 2,000 years ago. Mozi made the first kite in history. He made a bird out of wood. Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. Later, Cai Lun found a new way to make paper. After that, people began to make kites out of paper. In the Ming and Qing dynasties, kite-flying became a very popular outdoor activity.
Now more and more people like flying kites, so kite-flying is one of the most popular outdoor activities.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作，传统文化话题表达
【点评】
本题结合校园班会的真实场景，将户外活动话题和中国传统风筝文化结合，既考察学生基础的英语语句组织、要点整合能力，也引导学生了解中国传统民俗文化，难度适中，学生只要覆盖所有给定要点，适当补充逻辑衔接内容就能完成合格的作文。
【难度系数】
0.6
