六、书面表达。
请你以“How can we stay positive?”为题用英语写一篇短文。
内容提示:1. take a deep breath
2. do something you like
3. talk about your problems with your parents or friends
4. …
注意:1. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
How can we stay positive?
A good mood makes our life and study easier and better. But how can we stay positive?
请你以“How can we stay positive?”为题用英语写一篇短文。
内容提示:1. take a deep breath
2. do something you like
3. talk about your problems with your parents or friends
4. …
注意:1. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
How can we stay positive?
A good mood makes our life and study easier and better. But how can we stay positive?
答案
First, when you feel stressed, taking a deep breath can help calm you down quickly. Second, doing something you like, such as listening to music or drawing, can lift your spirits. Third, don’t keep problems to yourself—talk to your parents or friends, they will surely give you good advice. Besides, keeping a gratitude diary, writing down small happy things every day, also makes you feel positive. Let’s try these ways to stay positive.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达题,要求围绕“How can we stay positive?”主题,结合给定的提示点(深呼吸、做喜欢的事、与父母朋友倾诉问题,可补充细节)完成80词左右的短文,开头已给出。解题思路为:先承接开头的问句,依次展开各方法,补充具体细节使内容连贯,同时注意语言通顺、无真实信息、符合词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,用First引出第一个方法:当感到压力时,深呼吸能快速让自己平静;2. 用Second引出第二个方法:做喜欢的事(如听音乐、画画)可提升情绪;3. 用Third引出第三个方法:不要憋住问题,和父母或朋友交谈,他们会给出好建议;4. 用Besides补充合理细节:写感恩日记,每天记下小开心事,也能保持积极;5. 最后收尾呼吁尝试这些方法,保持积极心态。
【答案】First, when you feel stressed, taking a deep breath can help calm you down quickly. Second, doing something you like, such as listening to music or drawing, can lift your spirits. Third, don’t keep problems to yourself—talk to your parents or friends, they will surely give you good advice. Besides, keeping a gratitude diary, writing down small happy things every day, also makes you feel positive. Let’s try these ways to stay positive.
【知识点】英语话题写作、情绪类话题词汇运用、英语句子衔接
【点评】该作文紧扣主题,全面覆盖题目提示点,补充的感恩日记细节合理,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作规范,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,用First引出第一个方法:当感到压力时,深呼吸能快速让自己平静;2. 用Second引出第二个方法:做喜欢的事(如听音乐、画画)可提升情绪;3. 用Third引出第三个方法:不要憋住问题,和父母或朋友交谈,他们会给出好建议;4. 用Besides补充合理细节:写感恩日记,每天记下小开心事,也能保持积极;5. 最后收尾呼吁尝试这些方法,保持积极心态。
【答案】First, when you feel stressed, taking a deep breath can help calm you down quickly. Second, doing something you like, such as listening to music or drawing, can lift your spirits. Third, don’t keep problems to yourself—talk to your parents or friends, they will surely give you good advice. Besides, keeping a gratitude diary, writing down small happy things every day, also makes you feel positive. Let’s try these ways to stay positive.
【知识点】英语话题写作、情绪类话题词汇运用、英语句子衔接
【点评】该作文紧扣主题,全面覆盖题目提示点,补充的感恩日记细节合理,语言流畅自然,符合初中英语写作规范,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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