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九、写作(15分)
学生应当遵守学校的规章制度。请根据以下要点提示，以“School Rules”为题，叙述中学生应遵守的一些规章制度，并谈谈你的观点。词数不少于60，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示:1. 在课堂上不乱讲话，要认真听老师讲课。
2. 不带食物进教室，保持教室安静、清洁。
3. 课后要按时完成作业，做运动半个小时。
4. 在学校要穿校服。
5. 与老师和同学们友好相处。
School Rules
Every school has rules for students.
学生应当遵守学校的规章制度。请根据以下要点提示，以“School Rules”为题，叙述中学生应遵守的一些规章制度，并谈谈你的观点。词数不少于60，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示:1. 在课堂上不乱讲话，要认真听老师讲课。
2. 不带食物进教室，保持教室安静、清洁。
3. 课后要按时完成作业，做运动半个小时。
4. 在学校要穿校服。
5. 与老师和同学们友好相处。
School Rules
Every school has rules for students.
答案
One possible version:
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. We can’t talk in class. We have to listen to the teachers carefully. We can’t take food or drinks into the classroom. Also we must keep our classroom quiet and clean. After class, we have to finish our homework on time. And we must do sports for half an hour. One more thing, we have to wear our school uniforms at school. We should get on well with our teachers and classmates. I think teachers make rules to help us. As students, we must follow them.
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. We can’t talk in class. We have to listen to the teachers carefully. We can’t take food or drinks into the classroom. Also we must keep our classroom quiet and clean. After class, we have to finish our homework on time. And we must do sports for half an hour. One more thing, we have to wear our school uniforms at school. We should get on well with our teachers and classmates. I think teachers make rules to help us. As students, we must follow them.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题为“School Rules”，需覆盖所有提示要点：课堂纪律、教室卫生、课后任务、校服要求、人际相处，最后补充个人观点。步骤：1. 承接给定开头，用情态动词（can't/have to）表达规则；2. 逐一对应5个提示点，用正确句式串联；3. 结尾阐述遵守校规的看法，确保词数达标。
【解析】
按照要求紧扣要点，用规范英语表达：
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. We can’t talk in class. We have to listen to the teachers carefully. We can’t take food or drinks into the classroom. Also we must keep our classroom quiet and clean. After class, we have to finish our homework on time. And we must do sports for half an hour. One more thing, we have to wear our school uniforms at school. We should get on well with our teachers and classmates. I think teachers make rules to help us. As students, we must follow them.
【答案】
One possible version:
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. We can’t talk in class. We have to listen to the teachers carefully. We can’t take food or drinks into the classroom. Also we must keep our classroom quiet and clean. After class, we have to finish our homework on time. And we must do sports for half an hour. One more thing, we have to wear our school uniforms at school. We should get on well with our teachers and classmates. I think teachers make rules to help us. As students, we must follow them.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、情态动词用法、校园话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，句式准确规范，观点清晰合理，符合初中英语写作的评分标准，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题为“School Rules”，需覆盖所有提示要点：课堂纪律、教室卫生、课后任务、校服要求、人际相处，最后补充个人观点。步骤：1. 承接给定开头，用情态动词（can't/have to）表达规则；2. 逐一对应5个提示点，用正确句式串联；3. 结尾阐述遵守校规的看法，确保词数达标。
【解析】
按照要求紧扣要点，用规范英语表达：
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. We can’t talk in class. We have to listen to the teachers carefully. We can’t take food or drinks into the classroom. Also we must keep our classroom quiet and clean. After class, we have to finish our homework on time. And we must do sports for half an hour. One more thing, we have to wear our school uniforms at school. We should get on well with our teachers and classmates. I think teachers make rules to help us. As students, we must follow them.
【答案】
One possible version:
School Rules
Every school has rules for students. We can’t talk in class. We have to listen to the teachers carefully. We can’t take food or drinks into the classroom. Also we must keep our classroom quiet and clean. After class, we have to finish our homework on time. And we must do sports for half an hour. One more thing, we have to wear our school uniforms at school. We should get on well with our teachers and classmates. I think teachers make rules to help us. As students, we must follow them.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、情态动词用法、校园话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，句式准确规范，观点清晰合理，符合初中英语写作的评分标准，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
