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假设你最好的朋友叫李芳(Li Fang),请你根据下面表格中的提示，以“My best friend”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，向大家介绍她，可适当拓展内容。
My best friend
思路点拨
1. 审体裁：本题要求学生从三个方面介绍自己最好的朋友，是一篇记叙文。
2. 审内容：外貌、性格和能力、未来的计划、省略号(自我发挥1～2句)。
3. 审时态：介绍李芳的外貌、性格和能力等客观情况时，时态应以一般现在时为主；介绍李芳的未来计划时，时态应以一般将来时为主。
4. 审篇幅：80词左右；首尾各1句“套话”，中间用比较级和连接词串联，既顺畅又高级。
范文欣赏
My best friend
Li Fang is my best friend. She has smiling eyes and she always wears a smile on her face. She has a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than I am.
Li Fang is kind and helpful. She often gives up her seat to people in need on the bus. She is good at singing and she is a member of the Music Club in our school. Every morning, she practises singing.
She would like to be a singer when she
假设你最好的朋友叫李芳(Li Fang),请你根据下面表格中的提示，以“My best friend”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，向大家介绍她，可适当拓展内容。
My best friend
思路点拨
1. 审体裁：本题要求学生从三个方面介绍自己最好的朋友，是一篇记叙文。
2. 审内容：外貌、性格和能力、未来的计划、省略号(自我发挥1～2句)。
3. 审时态：介绍李芳的外貌、性格和能力等客观情况时，时态应以一般现在时为主；介绍李芳的未来计划时，时态应以一般将来时为主。
4. 审篇幅：80词左右；首尾各1句“套话”，中间用比较级和连接词串联，既顺畅又高级。
范文欣赏
My best friend
Li Fang is my best friend. She has smiling eyes and she always wears a smile on her face. She has a round face and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than I am.
Li Fang is kind and helpful. She often gives up her seat to people in need on the bus. She is good at singing and she is a member of the Music Club in our school. Every morning, she practises singing.
She would like to be a singer when she
答案
My best friend
Li Fang is my best friend. She has smiling eyes and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me, and she always looks warm and bright.
Li Fang is kind and helpful. She always gives a hand to classmates in trouble, and she is good at singing. All of us love listening to her sweet songs.
Her dream is to become a singer in the future. She keeps practising hard every day, and we all believe her dream will come true.
Li Fang is my best friend. She has smiling eyes and short hair. She is taller and slimmer than me, and she always looks warm and bright.
Li Fang is kind and helpful. She always gives a hand to classmates in trouble, and she is good at singing. All of us love listening to her sweet songs.
Her dream is to become a singer in the future. She keeps practising hard every day, and we all believe her dream will come true.
解析
本题是译林版八年级上册的人物介绍类写作题型，考查学生对一般现在时描述人物特征、形容词比较级用法、一般将来时表达未来计划的知识点掌握情况。写作需紧扣表格给出的外貌、性格能力、未来计划三个核心要点，适当补充合理细节，保证行文连贯，词数控制在80左右即可。
grows up. I believe she will be one of the best singers in China some day.
巩固练习
《青少年杂志》决定举行一次以"My best friend"为题的英语征文比赛。假如你最好的朋友是王梅，请结合以下要点写一篇90词左右的短文，可适当发挥。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My best friend
I want to tell you something about my best friend—Wang Mei.
巩固练习
《青少年杂志》决定举行一次以"My best friend"为题的英语征文比赛。假如你最好的朋友是王梅，请结合以下要点写一篇90词左右的短文，可适当发挥。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My best friend
I want to tell you something about my best friend—Wang Mei.
She is a 15-year-old girl. She is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.
Wang Mei has a square face and bright smiling eyes. She has long hair. She is the slimmest girl in her class. She is humorous and likes telling jokes to make us laugh.
Wang Mei studies the hardest in her class. She always listens carefully to her classmates' problems and helps them with their study.
She likes doing sports. She always plays basketball with her friends after school.
Wang Mei wants to be a teacher when she grows up because she is patient and enjoys working with children.
答案
One possible version:
My best friend
I want to tell you something about my best friend—Wang Mei. She is a 15-year-old girl. She is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.
Wang Mei has a square face and bright smiling eyes. She has long hair. She is the slimmest girl in her class. She is humorous and likes telling jokes to make us laugh.
make sb do sth 使(让)某人做某事。
Wang Mei studies the hardest in her class. She always listens carefully to her classmates' problems and helps them with their study.
She likes doing sports. She always plays basketball with her friends after school.
Wang Mei wants to be a teacher when she grows up because she is patient and enjoys working with children.
enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事。
My best friend
I want to tell you something about my best friend—Wang Mei. She is a 15-year-old girl. She is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.
Wang Mei has a square face and bright smiling eyes. She has long hair. She is the slimmest girl in her class. She is humorous and likes telling jokes to make us laugh.
make sb do sth 使(让)某人做某事。
Wang Mei studies the hardest in her class. She always listens carefully to her classmates' problems and helps them with their study.
She likes doing sports. She always plays basketball with her friends after school.
Wang Mei wants to be a teacher when she grows up because she is patient and enjoys working with children.
enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事。
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：主题为"My best friend"，介绍对象是王梅，词数控制在90左右，给定开头不需要重新书写。接下来梳理写作思路：按照从浅到深的逻辑排布内容，先介绍人物基础身份信息，再描写外貌性格特征，接着补充人物的优秀品质、兴趣爱好，最后点明人物的未来理想，这样行文条理清晰不会杂乱。写作过程中注意正确使用课内学过的固定搭配，避免语法错误，适当补充细节让内容更饱满，同时把控总词数符合要求即可完成写作。
【解析】
我们可以分步骤完成这篇短文：
1. 承接给定开头，先交代王梅的基础信息：15岁，既是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友，我们五年前初次相识，快速搭建人物的基础设定。
2. 描写人物的外在特征与性格：介绍她的脸型、明亮的笑眼、长发的外形特点，点明她是班上最苗条的女生，性格幽默爱讲笑话，用make sb. do sth的结构说明她讲笑话逗大家开心的特点，让人物形象更鲜活。
3. 补充人物的内在优点：说明她学习非常刻苦，总能认真倾听同学的困扰，主动在学习上帮助他人，突出人物的闪光点。
4. 补充兴趣爱好：介绍她热爱运动，放学后经常和朋友一起打篮球，进一步丰富人物设定。
5. 收尾点明理想：说明她长大后想成为一名老师，原因是她很有耐心，喜欢和孩子相处，用到enjoy doing sth的固定结构，全文逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My best friend
I want to tell you something about my best friend—Wang Mei. She is a 15-year-old girl. She is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.
Wang Mei has a square face and bright smiling eyes. She has long hair. She is the slimmest girl in her class. She is humorous and likes telling jokes to make us laugh.
Wang Mei studies the hardest in her class. She always listens carefully to her classmates' problems and helps them with their study.
She likes doing sports. She always plays basketball with her friends after school.
Wang Mei wants to be a teacher when she grows up because she is patient and enjoys working with children.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作；固定动词搭配；语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的人物介绍类写作题型，要点指向清晰，没有设置过高的表达门槛，学生只需要按照从外在到内在的逻辑串联相关信息，正确运用课内学过的人物描述类形容词和固定搭配，就可以写出符合要求的短文，能够有效考察学生对人物描写相关词汇句型的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：主题为"My best friend"，介绍对象是王梅，词数控制在90左右，给定开头不需要重新书写。接下来梳理写作思路：按照从浅到深的逻辑排布内容，先介绍人物基础身份信息，再描写外貌性格特征，接着补充人物的优秀品质、兴趣爱好，最后点明人物的未来理想，这样行文条理清晰不会杂乱。写作过程中注意正确使用课内学过的固定搭配，避免语法错误，适当补充细节让内容更饱满，同时把控总词数符合要求即可完成写作。
【解析】
我们可以分步骤完成这篇短文：
1. 承接给定开头，先交代王梅的基础信息：15岁，既是我的邻居也是我最好的朋友，我们五年前初次相识，快速搭建人物的基础设定。
2. 描写人物的外在特征与性格：介绍她的脸型、明亮的笑眼、长发的外形特点，点明她是班上最苗条的女生，性格幽默爱讲笑话，用make sb. do sth的结构说明她讲笑话逗大家开心的特点，让人物形象更鲜活。
3. 补充人物的内在优点：说明她学习非常刻苦，总能认真倾听同学的困扰，主动在学习上帮助他人，突出人物的闪光点。
4. 补充兴趣爱好：介绍她热爱运动，放学后经常和朋友一起打篮球，进一步丰富人物设定。
5. 收尾点明理想：说明她长大后想成为一名老师，原因是她很有耐心，喜欢和孩子相处，用到enjoy doing sth的固定结构，全文逻辑连贯，符合写作要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My best friend
I want to tell you something about my best friend—Wang Mei. She is a 15-year-old girl. She is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.
Wang Mei has a square face and bright smiling eyes. She has long hair. She is the slimmest girl in her class. She is humorous and likes telling jokes to make us laugh.
Wang Mei studies the hardest in her class. She always listens carefully to her classmates' problems and helps them with their study.
She likes doing sports. She always plays basketball with her friends after school.
Wang Mei wants to be a teacher when she grows up because she is patient and enjoys working with children.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作；固定动词搭配；语篇逻辑构建
【点评】
本题是初中阶段非常典型的人物介绍类写作题型，要点指向清晰，没有设置过高的表达门槛，学生只需要按照从外在到内在的逻辑串联相关信息，正确运用课内学过的人物描述类形容词和固定搭配，就可以写出符合要求的短文，能够有效考察学生对人物描写相关词汇句型的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.7
