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七、书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是王强，你打算邀请你的英国笔友 Ryan 来你的家乡游玩。请根据以下要点提示用英语写一封邀请信。
要点如下:1. What is your hometown like? (至少两点);
2. What do you think of the people in your hometown? (至少举两例);
3. What can you and Ryan do together in your hometown? (至少两点)。
注意:1. 参考要点,可适当发挥;2. 文中不得透露校名、姓名等真实信息;3. 词数 90 左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ryan，
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown
Yours，
Wang Qiang
假如你是王强，你打算邀请你的英国笔友 Ryan 来你的家乡游玩。请根据以下要点提示用英语写一封邀请信。
要点如下:1. What is your hometown like? (至少两点);
2. What do you think of the people in your hometown? (至少举两例);
3. What can you and Ryan do together in your hometown? (至少两点)。
注意:1. 参考要点,可适当发挥;2. 文中不得透露校名、姓名等真实信息;3. 词数 90 左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ryan，
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown
Yours，
Wang Qiang
答案
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
Yangzhou is a modern city with a long history. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning, we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
The people in Yangzhou are very nice and helpful. There're many volunteers in the park, and they are always ready to help you. If I'm not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to visit the gardens and try some delicious food in Dongguan Street. We can also go shopping and buy some presents. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
Yangzhou is a modern city with a long history. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning, we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
The people in Yangzhou are very nice and helpful. There're many volunteers in the park, and they are always ready to help you. If I'm not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to visit the gardens and try some delicious food in Dongguan Street. We can also go shopping and buy some presents. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封邀请信，需明确三个核心要点：介绍家乡（至少两点）、描述家乡的人（至少两例）、说明共同活动（至少两点）。写作时要遵循书信格式，开头结尾已给出，需补充中间内容，注意词数90左右，适当发挥，不得透露真实信息。思考路径：先点明家乡，再从历史、环境等角度介绍家乡特点，接着通过具体事例体现家乡人的品质，最后说明与笔友可共同参与的活动，确保覆盖所有要点且语言流畅。
【解析】
1. 补全开头：点明家乡为Yangzhou，引出邀请；
2. 介绍家乡：说明其是兼具现代与悠久历史的城市，有众多名胜，春季绿树成荫、花香鸟鸣，环境优美；
3. 描述家乡人：通过公园志愿者乐于助人、邻居帮忙照看房屋两个事例，体现家乡人友好热心的品质；
4. 说明共同活动：带笔友逛园林、尝东关街美食，一起购物买礼物；
5. 结尾表达期待见面，完成书信。写作时注意用词准确，语句通顺，符合书信语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
Yangzhou is a modern city with a long history. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning, we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
The people in Yangzhou are very nice and helpful. There're many volunteers in the park, and they are always ready to help you. If I'm not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to visit the gardens and try some delicious food in Dongguan Street. We can also go shopping and buy some presents. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作、家乡话题书面表达、英语书信格式
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，结构清晰合理，符合书信格式和词数要求，未透露个人信息，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一封邀请信，需明确三个核心要点：介绍家乡（至少两点）、描述家乡的人（至少两例）、说明共同活动（至少两点）。写作时要遵循书信格式，开头结尾已给出，需补充中间内容，注意词数90左右，适当发挥，不得透露真实信息。思考路径：先点明家乡，再从历史、环境等角度介绍家乡特点，接着通过具体事例体现家乡人的品质，最后说明与笔友可共同参与的活动，确保覆盖所有要点且语言流畅。
【解析】
1. 补全开头：点明家乡为Yangzhou，引出邀请；
2. 介绍家乡：说明其是兼具现代与悠久历史的城市，有众多名胜，春季绿树成荫、花香鸟鸣，环境优美；
3. 描述家乡人：通过公园志愿者乐于助人、邻居帮忙照看房屋两个事例，体现家乡人友好热心的品质；
4. 说明共同活动：带笔友逛园林、尝东关街美食，一起购物买礼物；
5. 结尾表达期待见面，完成书信。写作时注意用词准确，语句通顺，符合书信语气，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Yangzhou.
Yangzhou is a modern city with a long history. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning, we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
The people in Yangzhou are very nice and helpful. There're many volunteers in the park, and they are always ready to help you. If I'm not at home, my neighbours will help me to look after my house.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to visit the gardens and try some delicious food in Dongguan Street. We can also go shopping and buy some presents. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Yangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作、家乡话题书面表达、英语书信格式
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，结构清晰合理，符合书信格式和词数要求，未透露个人信息，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
