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(F)(2025·南京六合区期末)
小学六年时光里，大家都发生了很大的变化。请根据所给的思维导图，以“Lucy's changes”为题，写一篇英语小短文介绍一下 Lucy的变化。(15分)
要求：1. 涵盖图片中的所有信息，可作适当拓展；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，表达有条理；3. 不少于6句话，书写规范。
Lucy's changes
小学六年时光里，大家都发生了很大的变化。请根据所给的思维导图，以“Lucy's changes”为题，写一篇英语小短文介绍一下 Lucy的变化。(15分)
要求：1. 涵盖图片中的所有信息，可作适当拓展；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，表达有条理；3. 不少于6句话，书写规范。
Lucy's changes
答案
Lucy's changes
Over the past six years in primary school, Lucy
changed a lot.
In the past, Lucy's room was always messy.
Toys, books and clothes were everywhere. But now,
she always keeps her room clean and tidy. Everything is
in its place, and her room looks nicer.
Lucy's hobbies are different. She loved dancing and
spent a lot of time practising it. But now, she likes
painting better. She finds joy in painting.
Another big change is her dream. Before, Lucy
wanted to be a doctor when she grew up. But now, she
dreams of becoming an artist because she loves art so
much.
Over the past six years in primary school, Lucy
changed a lot.
In the past, Lucy's room was always messy.
Toys, books and clothes were everywhere. But now,
she always keeps her room clean and tidy. Everything is
in its place, and her room looks nicer.
Lucy's hobbies are different. She loved dancing and
spent a lot of time practising it. But now, she likes
painting better. She finds joy in painting.
Another big change is her dream. Before, Lucy
wanted to be a doctor when she grew up. But now, she
dreams of becoming an artist because she loves art so
much.
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇介绍人物变化的话题作文，需紧扣思维导图的三个维度（习惯、爱好、梦想）展开。第一步，确定文章结构：开头总起点明Lucy的变化，中间分三个部分分别对比她过去和现在的状态，保证逻辑清晰。第二步，结合图片细节拓展内容：习惯方面，补充过去房间杂乱的具体表现（玩具、书本、衣物乱放），现在房间整洁有序的状态；爱好方面，体现过去对跳舞的投入，现在对画画的喜爱；梦想方面，说明过去和现在的梦想差异及原因。第三步，注意时态搭配：描述过去的状态用一般过去时，现在的状态用一般现在时，开头可用现在完成时总起。最后要保证语句通顺，满足不少于6句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开头总起：用“Over the past six years in primary school, Lucy changed a lot.”点明主题，直接说明Lucy在小学六年间变化显著。
2. 习惯部分：先描述过去的状态“In the past, Lucy's room was always messy. Toys, books and clothes were everywhere.”，再用转折词“But now”引出现在的状态“she always keeps her room clean and tidy. Everything is in its place, and her room looks nicer.”，通过具体细节的对比体现习惯的转变。
3. 爱好部分：采用对比句式，先写过去“She loved dancing and spent a lot of time practising it.”，再写现在“But now, she likes painting better. She finds joy in painting.”，清晰展现爱好的变化。
4. 梦想部分：先描述过去的梦想“Before, Lucy wanted to be a doctor when she grew up.”，再写现在的梦想及原因“But now, she dreams of becoming an artist because she loves art so much.”，完成梦想变化的阐述。
5. 整体行文连贯，时态运用准确，涵盖所有图片信息且有合理拓展，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Lucy's changes
Over the past six years in primary school, Lucy changed a lot.
In the past, Lucy's room was always messy. Toys, books and clothes were everywhere. But now, she always keeps her room clean and tidy. Everything is in its place, and her room looks nicer.
Lucy's hobbies are different. She loved dancing and spent a lot of time practising it. But now, she likes painting better. She finds joy in painting.
Another big change is her dream. Before, Lucy wanted to be a doctor when she grew up. But now, she dreams of becoming an artist because she loves art so much.
【知识点】
1. 英语时态运用
2. 对比类写作
3. 人物变化话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖了思维导图中的所有信息，通过“过去-现在”的对比结构清晰展现Lucy的变化，时态运用准确，语句通顺连贯，还加入了细节拓展（如房间的具体状态、爱好的感受等），符合小学英语写作的规范，能很好地完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确这是一篇介绍人物变化的话题作文，需紧扣思维导图的三个维度（习惯、爱好、梦想）展开。第一步，确定文章结构：开头总起点明Lucy的变化，中间分三个部分分别对比她过去和现在的状态，保证逻辑清晰。第二步，结合图片细节拓展内容：习惯方面，补充过去房间杂乱的具体表现（玩具、书本、衣物乱放），现在房间整洁有序的状态；爱好方面，体现过去对跳舞的投入，现在对画画的喜爱；梦想方面，说明过去和现在的梦想差异及原因。第三步，注意时态搭配：描述过去的状态用一般过去时，现在的状态用一般现在时，开头可用现在完成时总起。最后要保证语句通顺，满足不少于6句话的要求。
【解析】
1. 开头总起：用“Over the past six years in primary school, Lucy changed a lot.”点明主题，直接说明Lucy在小学六年间变化显著。
2. 习惯部分：先描述过去的状态“In the past, Lucy's room was always messy. Toys, books and clothes were everywhere.”，再用转折词“But now”引出现在的状态“she always keeps her room clean and tidy. Everything is in its place, and her room looks nicer.”，通过具体细节的对比体现习惯的转变。
3. 爱好部分：采用对比句式，先写过去“She loved dancing and spent a lot of time practising it.”，再写现在“But now, she likes painting better. She finds joy in painting.”，清晰展现爱好的变化。
4. 梦想部分：先描述过去的梦想“Before, Lucy wanted to be a doctor when she grew up.”，再写现在的梦想及原因“But now, she dreams of becoming an artist because she loves art so much.”，完成梦想变化的阐述。
5. 整体行文连贯，时态运用准确，涵盖所有图片信息且有合理拓展，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Lucy's changes
Over the past six years in primary school, Lucy changed a lot.
In the past, Lucy's room was always messy. Toys, books and clothes were everywhere. But now, she always keeps her room clean and tidy. Everything is in its place, and her room looks nicer.
Lucy's hobbies are different. She loved dancing and spent a lot of time practising it. But now, she likes painting better. She finds joy in painting.
Another big change is her dream. Before, Lucy wanted to be a doctor when she grew up. But now, she dreams of becoming an artist because she loves art so much.
【知识点】
1. 英语时态运用
2. 对比类写作
3. 人物变化话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖了思维导图中的所有信息，通过“过去-现在”的对比结构清晰展现Lucy的变化，时态运用准确，语句通顺连贯，还加入了细节拓展（如房间的具体状态、爱好的感受等），符合小学英语写作的规范，能很好地完成写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
(G)(2025·泰州兴化市期末)
李明是一名六年级的学生，这个暑假将是他小学阶段的最后一个假期。他的父母计划带他去北京旅游。为了让假期充实又有趣，他想制定暑假计划，却不知如何开始，于是向Chatbot求助。请根据Chatbot的回复，以“My summer holiday plan”为题帮助李明制定一份暑假计划。(15分)
要求：1. 条理清晰，语句通顺，注意人称和时态，标点和语法正确；2. 内容至少包含Chatbot回复中的四个方面，可适当拓展；3. 词数不少于40词，句数不少于6句话(不包括已给出的部分)。
My summer holiday plan
The summer holiday is coming. ___
李明是一名六年级的学生，这个暑假将是他小学阶段的最后一个假期。他的父母计划带他去北京旅游。为了让假期充实又有趣，他想制定暑假计划，却不知如何开始，于是向Chatbot求助。请根据Chatbot的回复，以“My summer holiday plan”为题帮助李明制定一份暑假计划。(15分)
要求：1. 条理清晰，语句通顺，注意人称和时态，标点和语法正确；2. 内容至少包含Chatbot回复中的四个方面，可适当拓展；3. 词数不少于40词，句数不少于6句话(不包括已给出的部分)。
My summer holiday plan
The summer holiday is coming. ___
答案
My summer holiday plan
The summer holiday is coming. This summer
holiday is very special for me because I will graduate
from primary school soon. My parents and I are going
to visit Beijing as a graduation trip. First, we will leave
on July 10th and stay in Beijing for five days. During
the trip, we will visit many famous places, such as the
Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen
Square. Then, I will do some exercises to prepare for
middle school. I want to improve my study habits
before the new term starts.
Besides travelling, I will take photos and keep a
travel diary. This way, I can remember the happy
moments.
The summer holiday is coming. This summer
holiday is very special for me because I will graduate
from primary school soon. My parents and I are going
to visit Beijing as a graduation trip. First, we will leave
on July 10th and stay in Beijing for five days. During
the trip, we will visit many famous places, such as the
Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen
Square. Then, I will do some exercises to prepare for
middle school. I want to improve my study habits
before the new term starts.
Besides travelling, I will take photos and keep a
travel diary. This way, I can remember the happy
moments.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语计划类应用文写作，需紧扣题目要求，结合Chatbot给出的出行维度（地点、时间、同行人、活动、停留时长）完成创作。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定开头，先点明这个暑假的特殊性（小学最后一个假期），自然引出旅行计划；
2. 选取Chatbot提到的至少四个核心维度展开：先明确同行人员、旅行目的地，再交代出发时间与停留时长；
3. 详细描述旅行中的具体活动，同时拓展合理的假期其他安排，比如为初中学习做准备、记录旅行瞬间等；
4. 全程使用一般将来时，保证时态统一，语句通顺，满足词数和句数要求。
【解析】
1. 引入环节：承接开头句，用“This summer holiday is very special for me because I will graduate from primary school soon.”点明假期特殊性，自然引出旅行计划；
2. 旅行基础信息：通过“My parents and I are going to visit Beijing as a graduation trip. First, we will leave on July 10th and stay in Beijing for five days.”覆盖同行人员、目的地、出发时间、停留时长四个核心维度；
3. 活动与拓展：用“During the trip, we will visit many famous places... Then, I will do some exercises to prepare for middle school.”详细描述旅行活动与假期学习准备，对应“活动内容”维度；
4. 补充细节：通过“Besides travelling, I will take photos and keep a travel diary. This way, I can remember the happy moments.”丰富内容，让计划更完整；
全文时态统一为一般将来时，语句连贯，完全符合题目各项要求。
【答案】
My summer holiday plan
The summer holiday is coming. This summer
holiday is very special for me because I will graduate
from primary school soon. My parents and I are going
to visit Beijing as a graduation trip. First, we will leave
on July 10th and stay in Beijing for five days. During
the trip, we will visit many famous places, such as the
Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen
Square. Then, I will do some exercises to prepare for
middle school. I want to improve my study habits
before the new term starts.
Besides travelling, I will take photos and keep a
travel diary. This way, I can remember the happy
moments.
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时运用
2. 英语应用文写作
3. 旅行话题写作
【点评】
本文严格贴合题目要求，覆盖了同行人员、目的地、出发时间、停留时长、活动内容等多个指定维度，同时合理拓展了学习准备、旅行记录的内容，内容充实有条理。全文时态准确，语句通顺，符合六年级学生的写作水平，出色完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语计划类应用文写作，需紧扣题目要求，结合Chatbot给出的出行维度（地点、时间、同行人、活动、停留时长）完成创作。解题思路如下：
1. 承接给定开头，先点明这个暑假的特殊性（小学最后一个假期），自然引出旅行计划；
2. 选取Chatbot提到的至少四个核心维度展开：先明确同行人员、旅行目的地，再交代出发时间与停留时长；
3. 详细描述旅行中的具体活动，同时拓展合理的假期其他安排，比如为初中学习做准备、记录旅行瞬间等；
4. 全程使用一般将来时，保证时态统一，语句通顺，满足词数和句数要求。
【解析】
1. 引入环节：承接开头句，用“This summer holiday is very special for me because I will graduate from primary school soon.”点明假期特殊性，自然引出旅行计划；
2. 旅行基础信息：通过“My parents and I are going to visit Beijing as a graduation trip. First, we will leave on July 10th and stay in Beijing for five days.”覆盖同行人员、目的地、出发时间、停留时长四个核心维度；
3. 活动与拓展：用“During the trip, we will visit many famous places... Then, I will do some exercises to prepare for middle school.”详细描述旅行活动与假期学习准备，对应“活动内容”维度；
4. 补充细节：通过“Besides travelling, I will take photos and keep a travel diary. This way, I can remember the happy moments.”丰富内容，让计划更完整；
全文时态统一为一般将来时，语句连贯，完全符合题目各项要求。
【答案】
My summer holiday plan
The summer holiday is coming. This summer
holiday is very special for me because I will graduate
from primary school soon. My parents and I are going
to visit Beijing as a graduation trip. First, we will leave
on July 10th and stay in Beijing for five days. During
the trip, we will visit many famous places, such as the
Great Wall, the Summer Palace and Tian'anmen
Square. Then, I will do some exercises to prepare for
middle school. I want to improve my study habits
before the new term starts.
Besides travelling, I will take photos and keep a
travel diary. This way, I can remember the happy
moments.
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时运用
2. 英语应用文写作
3. 旅行话题写作
【点评】
本文严格贴合题目要求，覆盖了同行人员、目的地、出发时间、停留时长、活动内容等多个指定维度，同时合理拓展了学习准备、旅行记录的内容，内容充实有条理。全文时态准确，语句通顺，符合六年级学生的写作水平，出色完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.6
