五、书面表达。
假如你是康康,你的外国朋友 Mike 住在蓝天旅馆,你想邀请他来参观你的社区,并且到你家做客,请你根据写作要求,用英语写一封邀请信,介绍你的社区并告诉他到你家的路线。

写作要求:
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3)词数70个左右。
假如你是康康,你的外国朋友 Mike 住在蓝天旅馆,你想邀请他来参观你的社区,并且到你家做客,请你根据写作要求,用英语写一封邀请信,介绍你的社区并告诉他到你家的路线。
写作要求:
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名;
(3)词数70个左右。
答案
Dear Mike,
I'd like to invite you to my house. It is in a quiet community. There is a supermarket here. And a bank is next to it.
Here is the way to my house. First, go along Lantian Street and turn left at the second crossing. Then go straight until you see an underground station. Take the underground Line two and get off at Xingfu Community Station. Then you can see my house behind the supermarket. Hope you can come.
Yours,
Kangkang
I'd like to invite you to my house. It is in a quiet community. There is a supermarket here. And a bank is next to it.
Here is the way to my house. First, go along Lantian Street and turn left at the second crossing. Then go straight until you see an underground station. Take the underground Line two and get off at Xingfu Community Station. Then you can see my house behind the supermarket. Hope you can come.
Yours,
Kangkang
解析
【分析】
首先,这是一篇英语邀请信写作,需遵循英语书信的基本格式。解题思路如下:
1. 开头点明邀请目的,自然引出社区情况介绍,必须涵盖“社区安静、有超市且超市旁有银行”的核心要点;
2. 接着按照表格给出的路线,使用清晰的指路类表达,按顺序描述路线,确保步骤易懂不混乱;
3. 结尾表达对朋友到来的期待,最后完成书信署名。写作时要控制词数,语言简洁准确,不能出现真实姓名或校名。
【解析】
1. 书信格式:开头用“Dear Mike,”作为称呼,结尾用“Yours,”搭配署名“Kangkang”,完全符合英语书信的规范格式;
2. 社区介绍:用“It is in a quiet community. There is a supermarket here. And a bank is next to it.”精准覆盖题目要求的社区安静、超市与银行的位置关系,表述清晰;
3. 路线描述:使用“First, go along... turn left... Then go straight... Take the underground... get off...”这类常用指路表达,严格按照表格的路线顺序进行描述,逻辑清晰,能让读者清楚知晓路径;
4. 整体语言简洁凝练,词数符合题目要求,所有指定要点均完整覆盖。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I'd like to invite you to my house. It is in a quiet community. There is a supermarket here. And a bank is next to it.
Here is the way to my house. First, go along Lantian Street and turn left at the second crossing. Then go straight until you see an underground station. Take the underground Line two and get off at Xingfu Community Station. Then you can see my house behind the supermarket. Hope you can come.
Yours,
Kangkang
【知识点】
邀请信格式、指路句型、There be句型
【点评】
本文格式规范,完整涵盖题目要求的所有要点,路线描述清晰有条理,语言简洁准确,符合词数要求,是一篇符合写作要求的邀请信范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先,这是一篇英语邀请信写作,需遵循英语书信的基本格式。解题思路如下:
1. 开头点明邀请目的,自然引出社区情况介绍,必须涵盖“社区安静、有超市且超市旁有银行”的核心要点;
2. 接着按照表格给出的路线,使用清晰的指路类表达,按顺序描述路线,确保步骤易懂不混乱;
3. 结尾表达对朋友到来的期待,最后完成书信署名。写作时要控制词数,语言简洁准确,不能出现真实姓名或校名。
【解析】
1. 书信格式:开头用“Dear Mike,”作为称呼,结尾用“Yours,”搭配署名“Kangkang”,完全符合英语书信的规范格式;
2. 社区介绍:用“It is in a quiet community. There is a supermarket here. And a bank is next to it.”精准覆盖题目要求的社区安静、超市与银行的位置关系,表述清晰;
3. 路线描述:使用“First, go along... turn left... Then go straight... Take the underground... get off...”这类常用指路表达,严格按照表格的路线顺序进行描述,逻辑清晰,能让读者清楚知晓路径;
4. 整体语言简洁凝练,词数符合题目要求,所有指定要点均完整覆盖。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I'd like to invite you to my house. It is in a quiet community. There is a supermarket here. And a bank is next to it.
Here is the way to my house. First, go along Lantian Street and turn left at the second crossing. Then go straight until you see an underground station. Take the underground Line two and get off at Xingfu Community Station. Then you can see my house behind the supermarket. Hope you can come.
Yours,
Kangkang
【知识点】
邀请信格式、指路句型、There be句型
【点评】
本文格式规范,完整涵盖题目要求的所有要点,路线描述清晰有条理,语言简洁准确,符合词数要求,是一篇符合写作要求的邀请信范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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