C) 书面表达。
请以“My important days”为题,并根据下面的思维导图,以短文形式介绍一下你最重要的日子。

要求:
1. 内容全面,表达规范,条理清晰,合理拓展。
2. 不少于7句话。
My important days
请以“My important days”为题,并根据下面的思维导图,以短文形式介绍一下你最重要的日子。
要求:
1. 内容全面,表达规范,条理清晰,合理拓展。
2. 不少于7句话。
My important days
答案
My important days
My birthday is my most important day. It's on June 12th every year. On that day, my parents usually buy me a big birthday cake with fruit on it. My good friends will come to my house and bring me lovely gifts. We sing the birthday song together and I make a wish quietly. After that, we eat the cake and play fun games like hide-and-seek. I feel so happy and loved on this special day. I always look forward to my birthday coming every year.
My birthday is my most important day. It's on June 12th every year. On that day, my parents usually buy me a big birthday cake with fruit on it. My good friends will come to my house and bring me lovely gifts. We sing the birthday song together and I make a wish quietly. After that, we eat the cake and play fun games like hide-and-seek. I feel so happy and loved on this special day. I always look forward to my birthday coming every year.
解析
本题要求以“My important days”为题写短文,需结合思维导图的Time(时间)、Activity(活动)、Feeling(感受),还可补充如礼物等内容拓展。写作时可选取生日这类常见的重要日子,用五年级学过的一般现在时,依次说明日子的时间、当天的活动、收到的事物以及自身感受,保证内容完整、语句通顺,满足不少于7句话的要求。
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