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Ⅱ. 书面表达。
假如你是李明,你的朋友 Sally 得了流感,症状为头痛、发烧并咳嗽。请你写一封邮件帮助她缓解流感症状,并提两条日常保持健康的建议。
要求:
(1)语言表达准确,内容连贯、通顺;
(2)词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
I'm sorry to hear that you have the flu.
Yours,
Li Ming
假如你是李明,你的朋友 Sally 得了流感,症状为头痛、发烧并咳嗽。请你写一封邮件帮助她缓解流感症状,并提两条日常保持健康的建议。
要求:
(1)语言表达准确,内容连贯、通顺;
(2)词数 80 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sally,
I'm sorry to hear that you have the flu.
The following advice may help you a lot.
First, you'd better see a doctor and take some medicine. Then, remember to drink more water and have a good rest.
Besides, you must eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables, instead of snacks or fast food.
What's more, you should take exercise a lot in your daily life.
Why not play sports and take a walk with your friends?
Don't worry, and I'm sure you'll get better soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sally,
I'm sorry to hear that you have the flu. The following advice may help you a lot.
First, you'd better see a doctor and take some medicine. Then, remember to drink more water and have a good rest. Besides, you must eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables, instead of snacks or fast food. What's more, you should take exercise a lot in your daily life. Why not play sports and take a walk with your friends?
Don't worry, and I'm sure you'll get better soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Sally,
I'm sorry to hear that you have the flu. The following advice may help you a lot.
First, you'd better see a doctor and take some medicine. Then, remember to drink more water and have a good rest. Besides, you must eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables, instead of snacks or fast food. What's more, you should take exercise a lot in your daily life. Why not play sports and take a walk with your friends?
Don't worry, and I'm sure you'll get better soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【解析】
首先表达对Sally患流感的惋惜与关心，接着给出缓解流感症状的具体建议：看医生服药、多喝水多休息、食用健康食物；随后提出日常保持健康的建议：坚持锻炼，如和朋友运动散步；最后表达康复祝愿，内容贴合要求，语言连贯，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sally,
I'm sorry to hear that you have the flu. The following advice may help you a lot.
First, you'd better see a doctor and take some medicine. Then, remember to drink more water and have a good rest. Besides, you must eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables, instead of snacks or fast food. What's more, you should take exercise a lot in your daily life. Why not play sports and take a walk with your friends?
Don't worry, and I'm sure you'll get better soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文邮件写作；健康话题表达；提建议句型
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，先针对流感症状给出缓解建议，再提出日常健康建议，逻辑清晰，语言表达准确流畅，运用了多种提建议的句型，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先表达对Sally患流感的惋惜与关心，接着给出缓解流感症状的具体建议：看医生服药、多喝水多休息、食用健康食物；随后提出日常保持健康的建议：坚持锻炼，如和朋友运动散步；最后表达康复祝愿，内容贴合要求，语言连贯，词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sally,
I'm sorry to hear that you have the flu. The following advice may help you a lot.
First, you'd better see a doctor and take some medicine. Then, remember to drink more water and have a good rest. Besides, you must eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables, instead of snacks or fast food. What's more, you should take exercise a lot in your daily life. Why not play sports and take a walk with your friends?
Don't worry, and I'm sure you'll get better soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
【翻译】
亲爱的萨莉：
得知你患了流感，我感到很遗憾。以下的建议可能会对你有很大帮助。
首先，你最好去看医生并服用一些药物。然后，记得多喝水，好好休息。此外，你必须吃健康的食物，比如水果和蔬菜，而不是零食或快餐。更重要的是，你在日常生活中应该多进行锻炼。何不和朋友们一起运动和散步呢？
别担心，我相信你很快就会好起来的。
你的，
李明
英文邮件写作；健康话题表达；提建议句型
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，先针对流感症状给出缓解建议，再提出日常健康建议，逻辑清晰，语言表达准确流畅，运用了多种提建议的句型，符合词数要求，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
