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假设你叫李文，是阳光中学（Sunshine Middle School）的一名学生。今年暑期，你将代表学校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并作发言，此次会议的主题是“A greener world”。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。
注意事项：1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定内容，仅供参考；3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；4. 发言稿中不得出现真实的个人及学校信息。
Good morning, everyone! It’s my honour to be here. My name is Li Wen. I am 15 years old. I study at Sunshine Middle School.
______________________________
思路点拨
分析题意可知，本文要求学生撰写一篇发言稿，体裁应是应用文。文章主要谈论环保；在谈论具体做法时，人称应以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。第一段：简单介绍自己；第二段：阐述环保的具体做法；第三段：呼吁大家行动起来。
范文欣赏
Good morning, everyone! It’s my honour to be here. My name is Li Wen. I am 15 years old. I study at Sunshine Middle School.
The Earth is in trouble! We need to take action to protect the environment. The Chinese government has shut up the factories that cause serious pollution. We use new energy. If I always remember to turn off the lights when I leave a room, I can save much energy. I can save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth and by taking shorter showers. It is important for me to take my own shopping bags to the supermarket. I can also recycle empty bottles in my free time.
It is time for us to take action to make a greener world. Let’s do something to make a difference. Thank you!
假设你叫李文，是阳光中学（Sunshine Middle School）的一名学生。今年暑期，你将代表学校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并作发言，此次会议的主题是“A greener world”。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。
注意事项：1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定内容，仅供参考；3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；4. 发言稿中不得出现真实的个人及学校信息。
Good morning, everyone! It’s my honour to be here. My name is Li Wen. I am 15 years old. I study at Sunshine Middle School.
______________________________
思路点拨
分析题意可知，本文要求学生撰写一篇发言稿，体裁应是应用文。文章主要谈论环保；在谈论具体做法时，人称应以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。第一段：简单介绍自己；第二段：阐述环保的具体做法；第三段：呼吁大家行动起来。
范文欣赏
Good morning, everyone! It’s my honour to be here. My name is Li Wen. I am 15 years old. I study at Sunshine Middle School.
The Earth is in trouble! We need to take action to protect the environment. The Chinese government has shut up the factories that cause serious pollution. We use new energy. If I always remember to turn off the lights when I leave a room, I can save much energy. I can save water by turning off the tap when I brush my teeth and by taking shorter showers. It is important for me to take my own shopping bags to the supermarket. I can also recycle empty bottles in my free time.
It is time for us to take action to make a greener world. Let’s do something to make a difference. Thank you!
答案
巩固练习
（2024·常州教育学会期末）上周五，你校开展了一次关于绿色生活方式的讲座，请你根据提示为此次活动写一则英文报道，并给某中学生英文报投稿，讲座内容如下。词数不少于80。
|讲座内容|1. 如何处理旧书（捐赠、送人）；|
|----|----|
| |2. 如何节水节能（发挥两点）；|
| |3. 如何减少污染（发挥两点）。|
注意：条理清楚、要点齐全、表达准确。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Last Friday, our school held a talk on the green lifestyle in the school hall.
______________________________
We hope the talk can help more people realize the importance of the green lifestyle and take action right away!
（2024·常州教育学会期末）上周五，你校开展了一次关于绿色生活方式的讲座，请你根据提示为此次活动写一则英文报道，并给某中学生英文报投稿，讲座内容如下。词数不少于80。
|讲座内容|1. 如何处理旧书（捐赠、送人）；|
|----|----|
| |2. 如何节水节能（发挥两点）；|
| |3. 如何减少污染（发挥两点）。|
注意：条理清楚、要点齐全、表达准确。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Last Friday, our school held a talk on the green lifestyle in the school hall.
______________________________
We hope the talk can help more people realize the importance of the green lifestyle and take action right away!
答案
One possible version:
Last Friday, our school held a talk on the green lifestyle in the school hall.
First, the speaker introduced several ways to deal with old books. For example, it is a good idea to donate them to the children in poor areas. And we can also give them to our friends who are interested in them.
Then, some advice was given on how to save water and energy. For example, we should turn off the tap after washing hands. It's also important to turn off the lights when leaving a room.
Finally, the students were taught some useful ways to reduce pollution, such as going to school by bus and using our own bags while shopping.
We hope the talk can help more people realize the importance of the green lifestyle and take action right away!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；第二步，从如何处理旧书，如何节水节能，如何减少污染等方面介绍讲座内容；第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with 处理 ②for example 例如 ③be interested in 对……感兴趣 ④turn off 关闭 ⑤such as 例如
[高分句型]
①Then, some advice was given on how to save water and energy. (本句运用到了一般过去时的被动语态和“疑问词+动词不定式”结构)
②We hope the talk can help more people realize the importance of the green lifestyle and take action right away! (本句运用到了宾语从句)
Last Friday, our school held a talk on the green lifestyle in the school hall.
First, the speaker introduced several ways to deal with old books. For example, it is a good idea to donate them to the children in poor areas. And we can also give them to our friends who are interested in them.
Then, some advice was given on how to save water and energy. For example, we should turn off the tap after washing hands. It's also important to turn off the lights when leaving a room.
Finally, the students were taught some useful ways to reduce pollution, such as going to school by bus and using our own bags while shopping.
We hope the talk can help more people realize the importance of the green lifestyle and take action right away!
思路引导 [总体分析]
①体裁：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；第二步，从如何处理旧书，如何节水节能，如何减少污染等方面介绍讲座内容；第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with 处理 ②for example 例如 ③be interested in 对……感兴趣 ④turn off 关闭 ⑤such as 例如
[高分句型]
①Then, some advice was given on how to save water and energy. (本句运用到了一般过去时的被动语态和“疑问词+动词不定式”结构)
②We hope the talk can help more people realize the importance of the green lifestyle and take action right away! (本句运用到了宾语从句)
