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假如你是李华，你班将举办以“如何与父母友好相处”为主题的交流会。请你根据下表内容，写一篇不少于 80 词的发言稿。
2. Disagree with kids about making friends
【审题要领】
|主题|人称|时态|
|----|----|----|
||||
【写作框架】
1. 引入话题 → It's a great honour to …
2. 给出与父母相处的建议 → (1) … we need to …
(2) … try writing a letter.
(3) What's more, we should …
3. 呼吁大家为改善家庭关系作出努力 → Let's work together to improve …
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句：1. As a teenager, I am not good at communicating with my parents. 作为一名青少年，我不太善于与父母交流。
中间句：1. It's a great way to start by talking to someone you trust. 与你信任的人交谈是一个很好的开始方式。
结尾句：1. Thanks for everything you have done for me. 感谢您为我所做的一切。
【美文欣赏】
Dear classmates,
It's a great honour to be here to give a speech on common problems—pressure from our parents.
Many of us feel upset when parents put lots of pressure on us, compare us with others or disagree with us about making friends. However, parents won't know how we feel until we tell them. As middle school students, in order to bridge this gap, we need to talk with them and share our true feelings so that they can understand us better. If speaking face to face is too hard, try writing a letter. What's more, we should study hard and behave well to show them that we're growing up.
Remember, parents love us deeply, even though they don't say it often. Let's work together to improve the relationship so that our homes can be filled with laughter.
Thanks for listening.
假如你是李华，你班将举办以“如何与父母友好相处”为主题的交流会。请你根据下表内容，写一篇不少于 80 词的发言稿。
2. Disagree with kids about making friends
【审题要领】
|主题|人称|时态|
|----|----|----|
||||
【写作框架】
1. 引入话题 → It's a great honour to …
2. 给出与父母相处的建议 → (1) … we need to …
(2) … try writing a letter.
(3) What's more, we should …
3. 呼吁大家为改善家庭关系作出努力 → Let's work together to improve …
【素材积累】
重点句子
开头句：1. As a teenager, I am not good at communicating with my parents. 作为一名青少年，我不太善于与父母交流。
中间句：1. It's a great way to start by talking to someone you trust. 与你信任的人交谈是一个很好的开始方式。
结尾句：1. Thanks for everything you have done for me. 感谢您为我所做的一切。
【美文欣赏】
Dear classmates,
It's a great honour to be here to give a speech on common problems—pressure from our parents.
Many of us feel upset when parents put lots of pressure on us, compare us with others or disagree with us about making friends. However, parents won't know how we feel until we tell them. As middle school students, in order to bridge this gap, we need to talk with them and share our true feelings so that they can understand us better. If speaking face to face is too hard, try writing a letter. What's more, we should study hard and behave well to show them that we're growing up.
Remember, parents love us deeply, even though they don't say it often. Let's work together to improve the relationship so that our homes can be filled with laughter.
Thanks for listening.
答案
Dear classmates,
It's a great honour to be here to share how to get along well with parents. We often have problems: parents may put pressure on us, disagree with our friends, or compare us with others. These make us upset.
To solve them, first, we need to talk with parents and share true feelings so they understand us better. If face-to-face talk is hard, try writing a letter. What's more, we should study hard and behave well to show we're growing up.
Parents love us deeply. Let's work together to improve the relationship and make homes full of laughter.
Thanks for listening.
It's a great honour to be here to share how to get along well with parents. We often have problems: parents may put pressure on us, disagree with our friends, or compare us with others. These make us upset.
To solve them, first, we need to talk with parents and share true feelings so they understand us better. If face-to-face talk is hard, try writing a letter. What's more, we should study hard and behave well to show we're growing up.
Parents love us deeply. Let's work together to improve the relationship and make homes full of laughter.
Thanks for listening.
解析
主题围绕“如何与父母友好相处”，需用第一人称“we”，时态为一般现在时。先引入话题，列举父母给压力、交友分歧、拿孩子比较等问题，再提出交谈分享感受、写信沟通、努力学习表现成长等建议，最后呼吁改善关系。
