写作演练
[小试身手]
请你以“My hometown”为题，根据以下要点写一篇80词左右的文章。
要点:1. 苏州是我的家乡，一个美丽且现代化的城市。2. 苏州有古镇周庄和同里，苏州古典园林也非常值得一游。3. 我住在市中心的一所公寓里，在火车站的东南面，离车站约1千米远，很容易找到。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 先总体介绍苏州；接着介绍苏州的古镇周庄、同里以及苏州园林；最后介绍自己家的位置并表达欢迎来访。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My hometown
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(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
[小试身手]
请你以“My hometown”为题，根据以下要点写一篇80词左右的文章。
要点:1. 苏州是我的家乡，一个美丽且现代化的城市。2. 苏州有古镇周庄和同里，苏州古典园林也非常值得一游。3. 我住在市中心的一所公寓里，在火车站的东南面，离车站约1千米远，很容易找到。
[思路点拨]
① 时态:一般现在时。② 人称:以第一人称为主。③ 先总体介绍苏州；接着介绍苏州的古镇周庄、同里以及苏州园林；最后介绍自己家的位置并表达欢迎来访。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My hometown
______________________________
(更多精彩作文素材见“背记手册”)
答案
One possible version:
My hometown
Suzhou is my hometown. It's a beautiful and modern city.
There are old towns like Zhouzhuang and Tongli. They are wonderful places to have fun. The Classical Gardens of Suzhou are also well worth visiting. Every year lots of visitors come here to enjoy the beauty of the gardens.
I live in a flat in the city centre. It is south - east of the train station, about 1,000 metres away. You can find it easily.
I love my hometown. I hope you can come and visit it soon.
My hometown
Suzhou is my hometown. It's a beautiful and modern city.
There are old towns like Zhouzhuang and Tongli. They are wonderful places to have fun. The Classical Gardens of Suzhou are also well worth visiting. Every year lots of visitors come here to enjoy the beauty of the gardens.
I live in a flat in the city centre. It is south - east of the train station, about 1,000 metres away. You can find it easily.
I love my hometown. I hope you can come and visit it soon.
