十一、书面表达。
同学们,上周六你和你的家人都做了什么?请把标题“A Saturday”补充完整,并以此为题,写一篇日记。
要求:结合图片,按时间先后顺序展开描写,意思连贯,注意句式的多样性,不少于50个词。

A Saturday
Saturday, (日期)
同学们,上周六你和你的家人都做了什么?请把标题“A Saturday”补充完整,并以此为题,写一篇日记。
要求:结合图片,按时间先后顺序展开描写,意思连贯,注意句式的多样性,不少于50个词。
A Saturday
Saturday, (日期)
答案
A Wonderful Saturday
Saturday, October 14th
It was rainy in the morning. I stayed at home and did my homework carefully. My sister helped Mum clean our rooms.
In the afternoon, the rain stopped. It was sunny and windy. I flew a pretty kite in the park happily. My dad went fishing by the river and caught some small fish.
In the evening, we had a warm family dinner first. After that, we played interesting board games together. We all had a fantastic day.
Saturday, October 14th
It was rainy in the morning. I stayed at home and did my homework carefully. My sister helped Mum clean our rooms.
In the afternoon, the rain stopped. It was sunny and windy. I flew a pretty kite in the park happily. My dad went fishing by the river and caught some small fish.
In the evening, we had a warm family dinner first. After that, we played interesting board games together. We all had a fantastic day.
解析
本题是英语日记写作题,需采用日记格式,用一般过去时描述上周六的活动。写作要严格按照上午、下午、晚上的时间顺序,结合图片里的天气和对应活动展开,晚上的活动需自拟合理的家庭场景,同时注意句式丰富、语句连贯,满足词数要求。
1. 先补充贴合内容的标题,如“A Wonderful Saturday”;
2. 开头标注具体日期,以过去时态切入,先写上午雨天的居家活动;
3. 再写下午转晴起风后的户外互动;
4. 最后补充晚上的自拟家庭活动,使一天的内容完整连贯。
1. 先补充贴合内容的标题,如“A Wonderful Saturday”;
2. 开头标注具体日期,以过去时态切入,先写上午雨天的居家活动;
3. 再写下午转晴起风后的户外互动;
4. 最后补充晚上的自拟家庭活动,使一天的内容完整连贯。
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