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Joy left a voice message for her grandma about the community talent show. There are eight mistakes in her message. Underline the mistakes and correct them.
Hi Grandma, it's Joy. I hope you are well. I will want to invite you to a talent
show at our community centre next Saturday at 7 p.m. It's great fun. Dad
and Alice are playing the piano. They practise every day. I think they will
surprise everyone. Mum sings a song. As you know, she is going to have a
beautiful voice. I'm going to dance. I love dancing, but I'm a little nervous.
There will be lots of people watching me. I hope you can come. It makes me
feel better if you are there. There are some other acts in the talent show. It
will be a wonderful night. If you want to come, please call me back. I save
you a seat.
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(5) (6) (7) (8)
Joy left a voice message for her grandma about the community talent show. There are eight mistakes in her message. Underline the mistakes and correct them.
Hi Grandma, it's Joy. I hope you are well. I will want to invite you to a talent
show at our community centre next Saturday at 7 p.m. It's great fun. Dad
and Alice are playing the piano. They practise every day. I think they will
surprise everyone. Mum sings a song. As you know, she is going to have a
beautiful voice. I'm going to dance. I love dancing, but I'm a little nervous.
There will be lots of people watching me. I hope you can come. It makes me
feel better if you are there. There are some other acts in the talent show. It
will be a wonderful night. If you want to come, please call me back. I save
you a seat.
(1) (2) (3) (4)
(5) (6) (7) (8)
答案
(1) will want → want
(2) are playing → will play/are going to play
(3) sings → will sing/is going to sing
(4) is going to have → has
(5) makes → will make
(6) are → will be
(7) save → will save/am going to save
(8) It's → It will be
(2) are playing → will play/are going to play
(3) sings → will sing/is going to sing
(4) is going to have → has
(5) makes → will make
(6) are → will be
(7) save → will save/am going to save
(8) It's → It will be
解析
本题考查一般将来时的正确运用及时态的合理搭配，需结合语境判断动作发生的时间，调整时态：
1. "will want"错误，want表意愿，通常不用将来时，应改为"want"；
2. "are playing"错误，此处指将要进行的表演，应用一般将来时，可改为"will play"或"are going to play"；
3. "sings"错误，妈妈的表演是将要发生的动作，应用一般将来时，可改为"will sing"或"is going to sing"；
4. "is going to have"错误，描述妈妈的固有特质（拥有好听的声音）应用一般现在时，改为"has"；
5. "makes"错误，此处指奶奶来之后会产生的影响，应用一般将来时，改为"will make"；
6. "are"错误，其他表演是才艺秀上将要出现的，应用一般将来时，改为"will be"；
7. "save"错误，留座位是将要做的动作，应用一般将来时，可改为"will save"或"am going to save"；
8. "It's"错误，才艺秀尚未发生，描述其有趣应用一般将来时，改为"It will be"。
1. "will want"错误，want表意愿，通常不用将来时，应改为"want"；
2. "are playing"错误，此处指将要进行的表演，应用一般将来时，可改为"will play"或"are going to play"；
3. "sings"错误，妈妈的表演是将要发生的动作，应用一般将来时，可改为"will sing"或"is going to sing"；
4. "is going to have"错误，描述妈妈的固有特质（拥有好听的声音）应用一般现在时，改为"has"；
5. "makes"错误，此处指奶奶来之后会产生的影响，应用一般将来时，改为"will make"；
6. "are"错误，其他表演是才艺秀上将要出现的，应用一般将来时，改为"will be"；
7. "save"错误，留座位是将要做的动作，应用一般将来时，可改为"will save"或"am going to save"；
8. "It's"错误，才艺秀尚未发生，描述其有趣应用一般将来时，改为"It will be"。
Bring people closer together
A Terry wrote about his idea on how to bring people in the community closer
together. Read his article and learn how to introduce your idea for building a stronger
community.
Directly address the readers
to make the event sound
welcoming.
Use positive words to create a
warm, joyful mood.
Encourage everyone to join
the event.
Clearly state the aim of the
community event.
Use time expressions to help
the readers follow the steps of
the event.
Greenwood Community Olympics
Get ready for a day of fun and exciting matches at the
Greenwood Community Olympics! There will be activities
for people of all ages. It will be a great way to celebrate
our wonderful community and bring us all closer
together.
The day will start with an exciting opening show. Young
people from the local clubs will sing and dance. After
the show, the games will begin. You can take part by
List simple, well-known
games for people of all ages.
yourself or as a team. We have running races, tug-of-war,
three-legged races and some other events. There is
something for everyone, whether you play to win or just
want to have fun.
After all the games, we will celebrate the winners and give
them gifts. But it's OK if you don't win—it is all for fun,
and it doesn't stop there.
Include events that stress
the aim of bringing the
community closer together.
In the evening there will be a closing show. It will be a
party for the whole community, with food, drinks and
great music. Some of our neighbours will give speeches to
share their love for our community.
I am sure the Greenwood Community Olympics will be a
great event!
♦ Structure of the article ♦
Beginning
{ What: The Greenwood Community Olympics
{ Why: A great way to bring us all closer together
Main body
{ Opening show
{ Different games
{ Celebration for winners
{ Closing show
Ending: The Greenwood Community Olympics will be a great event.
♦ Language bank ♦
Get ready for ... It will be a great way to ...
The day will start with ... There is something for everyone, ...
After all the games, ... I am sure ... will be a great event!
B Write an article introducing your idea for bringing people in your community closer
together.
A Terry wrote about his idea on how to bring people in the community closer
together. Read his article and learn how to introduce your idea for building a stronger
community.
Directly address the readers
to make the event sound
welcoming.
Use positive words to create a
warm, joyful mood.
Encourage everyone to join
the event.
Clearly state the aim of the
community event.
Use time expressions to help
the readers follow the steps of
the event.
Greenwood Community Olympics
Get ready for a day of fun and exciting matches at the
Greenwood Community Olympics! There will be activities
for people of all ages. It will be a great way to celebrate
our wonderful community and bring us all closer
together.
The day will start with an exciting opening show. Young
people from the local clubs will sing and dance. After
the show, the games will begin. You can take part by
List simple, well-known
games for people of all ages.
yourself or as a team. We have running races, tug-of-war,
three-legged races and some other events. There is
something for everyone, whether you play to win or just
want to have fun.
After all the games, we will celebrate the winners and give
them gifts. But it's OK if you don't win—it is all for fun,
and it doesn't stop there.
Include events that stress
the aim of bringing the
community closer together.
In the evening there will be a closing show. It will be a
party for the whole community, with food, drinks and
great music. Some of our neighbours will give speeches to
share their love for our community.
I am sure the Greenwood Community Olympics will be a
great event!
♦ Structure of the article ♦
Beginning
{ What: The Greenwood Community Olympics
{ Why: A great way to bring us all closer together
Main body
{ Opening show
{ Different games
{ Celebration for winners
{ Closing show
Ending: The Greenwood Community Olympics will be a great event.
♦ Language bank ♦
Get ready for ... It will be a great way to ...
The day will start with ... There is something for everyone, ...
After all the games, ... I am sure ... will be a great event!
B Write an article introducing your idea for bringing people in your community closer
together.
答案
# Community Food & Story Sharing Day
Get ready for a warm and lovely Community Food & Story Sharing Day! It will be a great way to celebrate our friendly community and bring all of us closer together.
The day will start with a food preparation time from 9:00 to 10:00 a.m. You can bring your family's favorite home-made dishes, or join us to make simple snacks like cookies and fruit salads together. There is something for everyone, whether you are good at cooking or just want to learn new skills.
After the food preparation, we will have a food sharing and story-telling session from 10:00 a.m. to 12:00 p.m. While enjoying the delicious food, you can share interesting stories about your family, your hobbies or your happy moments in the community. This will help us know each other better and build a warmer relationship.
In the afternoon, from 1:30 to 3:30, we will hold a small DIY garden activity. We can plant small flowers or make painted stone decorations for our community garden. Kids and adults can all join in this fun activity.
After all these activities, we will have a closing gathering at 4:00 p.m. We will take a group photo to remember this wonderful day, and give small gifts to those who share the most touching stories.
I am sure the Community Food & Story Sharing Day will be a great event full of love and joy! Let's come and join us to make our community a warmer place!
Get ready for a warm and lovely Community Food & Story Sharing Day! It will be a great way to celebrate our friendly community and bring all of us closer together.
The day will start with a food preparation time from 9:00 to 10:00 a.m. You can bring your family's favorite home-made dishes, or join us to make simple snacks like cookies and fruit salads together. There is something for everyone, whether you are good at cooking or just want to learn new skills.
After the food preparation, we will have a food sharing and story-telling session from 10:00 a.m. to 12:00 p.m. While enjoying the delicious food, you can share interesting stories about your family, your hobbies or your happy moments in the community. This will help us know each other better and build a warmer relationship.
In the afternoon, from 1:30 to 3:30, we will hold a small DIY garden activity. We can plant small flowers or make painted stone decorations for our community garden. Kids and adults can all join in this fun activity.
After all these activities, we will have a closing gathering at 4:00 p.m. We will take a group photo to remember this wonderful day, and give small gifts to those who share the most touching stories.
I am sure the Community Food & Story Sharing Day will be a great event full of love and joy! Let's come and join us to make our community a warmer place!
解析
首先参考范文的结构，确定活动主题为社区美食故事分享日，开头直接呼吁读者，点明活动能拉近社区居民距离的目的；主体部分用时间表达依次安排美食准备、美食分享、手工DIY、收尾聚会等环节，覆盖各年龄段人群，使用积极词汇营造温馨氛围，鼓励大家参与；结尾总结活动的美好，呼应主题。写作时可运用语言库中的表达，如"Get ready for ..." "It will be a great way to ..." "The day will start with ..."等，符合七年级下册的写作要求。
