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五、书面表达。
假如你是肖雅，你收到了一封玲玲的来信，她在信中说她今年想转到你们学校并向你询问校规，请你根据以下提示给她回复一封电子邮件。
提示：
（1）必须按时到校；
（2）课前的准备工作；
（3）教室里不能做的事。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数不少于70个（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：finish 完成
Dear Lingling,
I'm happy to hear from you.
Yours,
Xiao Ya
假如你是肖雅，你收到了一封玲玲的来信，她在信中说她今年想转到你们学校并向你询问校规，请你根据以下提示给她回复一封电子邮件。
提示：
（1）必须按时到校；
（2）课前的准备工作；
（3）教室里不能做的事。
写作要求：
（1）文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
（3）词数不少于70个（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：finish 完成
Dear Lingling,
I'm happy to hear from you.
You asked me about my school rules. Now let me tell you about them.
First, we have to get to school before 8:20 a.m. We can’t be late for school. Second, if you have to clean the classroom, you need to finish it before class. And we should keep it clean all day. Also, we must prepare books and pens well before class. Last, we can’t eat in the classroom.
Yours,
Xiao Ya
答案
Dear Lingling,
I’m happy to hear from you. You asked me about my school rules. Now let me tell you about them.
First, we have to get to school before 8:20 a.m. We can’t be late for school. Second, if you have to clean the classroom, you need to finish it before class. And we should keep it clean all day. Also, we must prepare books and pens well before class. Last, we can’t eat in the classroom.
School rules are good for students and they can help us develop good habits. They are important and everyone should follow them.
Yours,
Xiao Ya
I’m happy to hear from you. You asked me about my school rules. Now let me tell you about them.
First, we have to get to school before 8:20 a.m. We can’t be late for school. Second, if you have to clean the classroom, you need to finish it before class. And we should keep it clean all day. Also, we must prepare books and pens well before class. Last, we can’t eat in the classroom.
School rules are good for students and they can help us develop good habits. They are important and everyone should follow them.
Yours,
Xiao Ya
解析
【分析】
首先，我们需要明确这是一封回复邮件，要紧扣玲玲询问校规的需求展开。解题思路如下：第一步，承接开头，自然引出介绍校规的话题；第二步，按照题目给出的三个提示要点逐一展开，每个要点要补充具体内容，让表述更清晰，比如按时到校可以明确具体时间，课前准备可以细化为打扫教室、准备学习用品，教室禁忌举例说明不能吃东西；第三步，结尾可以补充校规的意义，让内容更完整；最后检查是否符合词数、格式要求，避免出现真实姓名或校名。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接：用“You asked me about my school rules. Now let me tell you about them.”回应对方的问题，自然过渡到校规介绍。
2. 分点阐述校规：
按时到校：明确“get to school before 8:20 a.m.”，强调“We can’t be late for school”，清晰传达要求。
课前准备：补充“if you have to clean the classroom, you need to finish it before class”“keep it clean all day”以及“prepare books and pens well before class”，覆盖课前的清洁和学习准备两方面。
教室禁忌：用“we can’t eat in the classroom”举例说明教室里不能做的事。
3. 结尾升华：点明“School rules are good for students and they can help us develop good habits. They are important and everyone should follow them.”，说明校规的作用，让内容更有深度。
4. 格式检查：严格遵循电子邮件的格式，开头结尾符合要求，未出现真实姓名或校名，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Lingling,
I’m happy to hear from you. You asked me about my school rules. Now let me tell you about them.
First, we have to get to school before 8:20 a.m. We can’t be late for school. Second, if you have to clean the classroom, you need to finish it before class. And we should keep it clean all day. Also, we must prepare books and pens well before class. Last, we can’t eat in the classroom.
School rules are good for students and they can help us develop good habits. They are important and everyone should follow them.
Yours,
Xiao Ya
【知识点】
电子邮件写作、校规类话题表达、英语应用文格式
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，分点阐述校规条理分明，结尾补充校规的意义使内容更充实。语言表达准确规范，符合英语书面表达的要求，是一篇合格的回复邮件，适合初中阶段学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先，我们需要明确这是一封回复邮件，要紧扣玲玲询问校规的需求展开。解题思路如下：第一步，承接开头，自然引出介绍校规的话题；第二步，按照题目给出的三个提示要点逐一展开，每个要点要补充具体内容，让表述更清晰，比如按时到校可以明确具体时间，课前准备可以细化为打扫教室、准备学习用品，教室禁忌举例说明不能吃东西；第三步，结尾可以补充校规的意义，让内容更完整；最后检查是否符合词数、格式要求，避免出现真实姓名或校名。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接：用“You asked me about my school rules. Now let me tell you about them.”回应对方的问题，自然过渡到校规介绍。
2. 分点阐述校规：
按时到校：明确“get to school before 8:20 a.m.”，强调“We can’t be late for school”，清晰传达要求。
课前准备：补充“if you have to clean the classroom, you need to finish it before class”“keep it clean all day”以及“prepare books and pens well before class”，覆盖课前的清洁和学习准备两方面。
教室禁忌：用“we can’t eat in the classroom”举例说明教室里不能做的事。
3. 结尾升华：点明“School rules are good for students and they can help us develop good habits. They are important and everyone should follow them.”，说明校规的作用，让内容更有深度。
4. 格式检查：严格遵循电子邮件的格式，开头结尾符合要求，未出现真实姓名或校名，词数达标。
【答案】
Dear Lingling,
I’m happy to hear from you. You asked me about my school rules. Now let me tell you about them.
First, we have to get to school before 8:20 a.m. We can’t be late for school. Second, if you have to clean the classroom, you need to finish it before class. And we should keep it clean all day. Also, we must prepare books and pens well before class. Last, we can’t eat in the classroom.
School rules are good for students and they can help us develop good habits. They are important and everyone should follow them.
Yours,
Xiao Ya
【知识点】
电子邮件写作、校规类话题表达、英语应用文格式
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，分点阐述校规条理分明，结尾补充校规的意义使内容更充实。语言表达准确规范，符合英语书面表达的要求，是一篇合格的回复邮件，适合初中阶段学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.6
