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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
我们在生活中,难免会和身边的人产生争执、摩擦等。请你根据以下
What unpleasant thing happened to you?
How did you deal with it?
What have you learned from it?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Life is not only about happiness. I still remember
我们在生活中,难免会和身边的人产生争执、摩擦等。请你根据以下
内
容
提
示
,用英语描述一次不愉快的经历并向学校英文报投稿。内
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示
:What unpleasant thing happened to you?
How did you deal with it?
What have you learned from it?
Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Life is not only about happiness. I still remember
答案
Life is not only about happiness. I still remember the unpleasant experience between me and my good friend Linda.
It was the afternoon after the math test results came out, and Linda was very unhappy because she had failed the exam. I don't think it's a big deal, so I looked at the 59 on the paper and joked: "You're so awesome. You just did as the saying goes 'A miss is as good as a mile'." Linda was very angry and we had an argument. After that, she stopped talking to me, and I felt left out. I realized what I had done really hurt Linda, so I apologized, and told her that I shouldn't play an awful joke on her grades. Finally, she forgave me.
Through this experience, I have learned that everyone has different opinions about grades, so we should try to put ourselves in other people's shoes before we speak.
It was the afternoon after the math test results came out, and Linda was very unhappy because she had failed the exam. I don't think it's a big deal, so I looked at the 59 on the paper and joked: "You're so awesome. You just did as the saying goes 'A miss is as good as a mile'." Linda was very angry and we had an argument. After that, she stopped talking to me, and I felt left out. I realized what I had done really hurt Linda, so I apologized, and told her that I shouldn't play an awful joke on her grades. Finally, she forgave me.
Through this experience, I have learned that everyone has different opinions about grades, so we should try to put ourselves in other people's shoes before we speak.
解析
【解析】
本文需围绕一次不愉快经历展开写作，可按以下思路完成：1. 开篇点明经历是与好友Linda的争执；2. 叙述事件：数学测验后Linda不及格，自己开玩笑引发争吵；3. 处理方式：意识到错误后主动道歉；4. 感悟：学会换位思考，说话前考虑他人感受。写作时需紧扣提示要点，语言贴合语境，注意词数要求。
【答案】
Life is not only about happiness. I still remember the unpleasant experience between me and my good friend Linda.
It was the afternoon after the math test results came out, and Linda was very unhappy because she had failed the exam. I don't think it's a big deal, so I looked at the 59 on the paper and joked: "You're so awesome. You just did as the saying goes 'A miss is as good as a mile'." Linda was very angry and we had an argument. After that, she stopped talking to me, and I felt left out. I realized what I had done really hurt Linda, so I apologized, and told her that I shouldn't play an awful joke on her grades. Finally, she forgave me.
Through this experience, I have learned that everyone has different opinions about grades, so we should try to put ourselves in other people's shoes before we speak.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、道歉类表达、主题感悟写作
【点评】
本文紧扣写作提示要点，结构清晰，叙事完整，从事件发生到解决再到感悟过渡自然。文中运用了谚语"A miss is as good as a mile"，丰富了语言表达，符合投稿的语言要求，且内容真实贴合生活，容易引发共鸣。
【难度系数】
0.6
本文需围绕一次不愉快经历展开写作，可按以下思路完成：1. 开篇点明经历是与好友Linda的争执；2. 叙述事件：数学测验后Linda不及格，自己开玩笑引发争吵；3. 处理方式：意识到错误后主动道歉；4. 感悟：学会换位思考，说话前考虑他人感受。写作时需紧扣提示要点，语言贴合语境，注意词数要求。
【答案】
Life is not only about happiness. I still remember the unpleasant experience between me and my good friend Linda.
It was the afternoon after the math test results came out, and Linda was very unhappy because she had failed the exam. I don't think it's a big deal, so I looked at the 59 on the paper and joked: "You're so awesome. You just did as the saying goes 'A miss is as good as a mile'." Linda was very angry and we had an argument. After that, she stopped talking to me, and I felt left out. I realized what I had done really hurt Linda, so I apologized, and told her that I shouldn't play an awful joke on her grades. Finally, she forgave me.
Through this experience, I have learned that everyone has different opinions about grades, so we should try to put ourselves in other people's shoes before we speak.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、道歉类表达、主题感悟写作
【点评】
本文紧扣写作提示要点，结构清晰，叙事完整，从事件发生到解决再到感悟过渡自然。文中运用了谚语"A miss is as good as a mile"，丰富了语言表达，符合投稿的语言要求，且内容真实贴合生活，容易引发共鸣。
【难度系数】
0.6
