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假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动，号召大家准备关于保护濒危动物的演讲。你们班的交换生Tom给你发了一封邮件向你询问相关事宜，请用英文回复他的邮件。
参考词汇:next Monday, elephants, golden monkeys, hunt, protect, raise money, pictures
【要求】1. 必须包含所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥。2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等。3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，不少于90词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动，号召大家准备关于保护濒危动物的演讲。你们班的交换生Tom给你发了一封邮件向你询问相关事宜，请用英文回复他的邮件。
参考词汇:next Monday, elephants, golden monkeys, hunt, protect, raise money, pictures
【要求】1. 必须包含所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥。2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等。3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，不少于90词(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
The speech will take place in our school hall next Monday. At present, many endangered animals such as elephants and golden monkeys are facing serious problems. People hunt them for their valuable parts, and their living space is getting smaller and smaller, so the number of them is dropping fast. In the speech, we will talk about the actions we can take: we should try our best to stop people from hunting these endangered animals, and we can also raise money for the animal protection group to help build more safe living areas for them. I will also show a set of pictures of these poor animals in my speech to make more people know their situations. I advise everyone to do something small in daily life: never buy products made from endangered animals, and tell the people around you that protecting animals is very important for our whole world.
解析
【分析】
这是一封回复Tom的英文邮件，需围绕“保护濒危动物的演讲”展开写作。首先要明确需包含的核心要点：演讲时间（下周一）、演讲内容（濒危动物现状：捕猎等，可举例大象、金丝猴；行动：阻止捕猎、筹钱；建议：日常保护行动）。写作时需衔接已给开头，用通顺的英语组织内容，使用参考词汇，适当发挥，确保语句连贯，不出现真实信息，满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 说明演讲的时间与地点：The speech will take place in our school hall next Monday.
2. 介绍濒危动物现状：列举elephants、golden monkeys，说明它们因被hunt、生存空间缩小导致数量减少，即many endangered animals like elephants and golden monkeys face serious problems, hunted for valuable parts, living space smaller, number dropping fast.
3. 说明演讲中的行动：stop hunting these animals, raise money for animal protection groups.
4. 补充演讲辅助内容：show pictures of these animals让大众了解现状。
5. 给出日常建议：never buy products from endangered animals, tell others the importance of protecting animals.
组织语言时注意时态（现状用一般现在时，演讲安排用一般将来时），确保语句连贯，覆盖所有要求要点，使用参考词汇，达到不少于90词的要求。
【答案】
The speech will take place in our school hall next Monday. At present, many endangered animals such as elephants and golden monkeys are facing serious problems. People hunt them for their valuable parts, and their living space is getting smaller and smaller, so the number of them is dropping fast. In the speech, we will talk about the actions we can take: we should try our best to stop people from hunting these endangered animals, and we can also raise money for the animal protection group to help build more safe living areas for them. I will also show a set of pictures of these poor animals in my speech to make more people know their situations. I advise everyone to do something small in daily life: never buy products made from endangered animals, and tell the people around you that protecting animals is very important for our whole world.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、濒危动物话题表达
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，以校园保护濒危动物演讲为背景，考察学生邮件写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点并运用参考词汇，贴近学生生活，能有效考察学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一封回复Tom的英文邮件，需围绕“保护濒危动物的演讲”展开写作。首先要明确需包含的核心要点：演讲时间（下周一）、演讲内容（濒危动物现状：捕猎等，可举例大象、金丝猴；行动：阻止捕猎、筹钱；建议：日常保护行动）。写作时需衔接已给开头，用通顺的英语组织内容，使用参考词汇，适当发挥，确保语句连贯，不出现真实信息，满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 说明演讲的时间与地点：The speech will take place in our school hall next Monday.
2. 介绍濒危动物现状：列举elephants、golden monkeys，说明它们因被hunt、生存空间缩小导致数量减少，即many endangered animals like elephants and golden monkeys face serious problems, hunted for valuable parts, living space smaller, number dropping fast.
3. 说明演讲中的行动：stop hunting these animals, raise money for animal protection groups.
4. 补充演讲辅助内容：show pictures of these animals让大众了解现状。
5. 给出日常建议：never buy products from endangered animals, tell others the importance of protecting animals.
组织语言时注意时态（现状用一般现在时，演讲安排用一般将来时），确保语句连贯，覆盖所有要求要点，使用参考词汇，达到不少于90词的要求。
【答案】
The speech will take place in our school hall next Monday. At present, many endangered animals such as elephants and golden monkeys are facing serious problems. People hunt them for their valuable parts, and their living space is getting smaller and smaller, so the number of them is dropping fast. In the speech, we will talk about the actions we can take: we should try our best to stop people from hunting these endangered animals, and we can also raise money for the animal protection group to help build more safe living areas for them. I will also show a set of pictures of these poor animals in my speech to make more people know their situations. I advise everyone to do something small in daily life: never buy products made from endangered animals, and tell the people around you that protecting animals is very important for our whole world.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、濒危动物话题表达
【点评】
本题为英语应用文写作题，以校园保护濒危动物演讲为背景，考察学生邮件写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点并运用参考词汇，贴近学生生活，能有效考察学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
