6. 友谊是人生不可缺少的一部分。假设你是李华,最近你在学校举办的“手拉手”活动中结交了一位来自美国的新朋友Mary。请根据下列表格内容提示,用英文写一篇短文,在“手拉手”活动中介绍她。
| 名字 | Mary |
| 年龄 | 13岁 |
| 国籍 | 美国 |
| 兴趣爱好 |
游泳 |
| 饮食习惯 | 每天喝牛奶,吃蔬菜和水果 |
| 日常作息 | 早睡早起 |
| 最喜欢的动物 | 熊猫 |
注意:
(1)可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。
| 名字 | Mary |
| 年龄 | 13岁 |
| 国籍 | 美国 |
| 兴趣爱好 |
| 饮食习惯 | 每天喝牛奶,吃蔬菜和水果 |
| 日常作息 | 早睡早起 |
| 最喜欢的动物 | 熊猫 |
注意:
(1)可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。
答案
Hello everyone, I'm Li Hua. It's my pleasure to introduce my new friend Mary to you. I got to know her in our school's "Hand in Hand" activity.
Mary is a 13-year-old girl from America. Her favorite hobby is swimming, and she often swims in her free time. She has very good living habits: she drinks milk every day, and eats plenty of vegetables and fruit. She always goes to bed early and wakes up early. Her favorite animals are pandas, she thinks they are so cute and hopes to see real pandas in China one day.
Mary is a 13-year-old girl from America. Her favorite hobby is swimming, and she often swims in her free time. She has very good living habits: she drinks milk every day, and eats plenty of vegetables and fruit. She always goes to bed early and wakes up early. Her favorite animals are pandas, she thinks they are so cute and hopes to see real pandas in China one day.
解析
这是一篇人物介绍类写作题,写作思路如下:1. 开篇点题,说明自己在学校"手拉手"活动中结识了新朋友Mary;2. 依次覆盖表格所有要点:介绍她的年龄、国籍基本信息,再补充兴趣爱好、健康的饮食习惯、规律的作息,最后介绍她最喜欢的动物,可适当拓展小细节让内容更自然;3. 全文使用七年级要求掌握的一般现在时,语句连贯,词数控制在80左右,不出现真实个人信息。
登录