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五、写作任务
以“My favourite animal”为题写一篇文章,包含以下所给信息,可适当发挥。条理清
晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。80词左右。
以“My favourite animal”为题写一篇文章,包含以下所给信息,可适当发挥。条理清
晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。80词左右。
The red panda is my favorite animal. I love red pandas because they're so cute
and kind, just like cats.
Red pandas look different from pandas. They are small and have beautiful fur. Their
fur helps them keep warm in cold places. They have big ears and long tails. They eat
bamboo, fruit, insects and bird eggs. They are good at climbing trees.
However, red pandas are in danger. They live in the forests, but people cut
down too many trees. We should try our best to save them. Let's save the forests
and stop cutting down trees. We can also make laws to protect them. Every red
panda counts.
and kind, just like cats.
Red pandas look different from pandas. They are small and have beautiful fur. Their
fur helps them keep warm in cold places. They have big ears and long tails. They eat
bamboo, fruit, insects and bird eggs. They are good at climbing trees.
However, red pandas are in danger. They live in the forests, but people cut
down too many trees. We should try our best to save them. Let's save the forests
and stop cutting down trees. We can also make laws to protect them. Every red
panda counts.
答案
One possible version
The red panda is my favorite animal. I love red pandas because they're so cute
and kind, just like cats.
Red pandas look different from pandas. They are small and have beautiful fur. Their
fur helps them keep warm in cold places. They have big ears and long tails. They eat
bamboo, fruit, insects and bird eggs. They are good at climbing trees.
However, red pandas are in danger. They live in the forests, but people cut
down too many trees. We should try our best to save them. Let's save the forests
and stop cutting down trees. We can also make laws to protect them. Every red
panda counts.
The red panda is my favorite animal. I love red pandas because they're so cute
and kind, just like cats.
Red pandas look different from pandas. They are small and have beautiful fur. Their
fur helps them keep warm in cold places. They have big ears and long tails. They eat
bamboo, fruit, insects and bird eggs. They are good at climbing trees.
However, red pandas are in danger. They live in the forests, but people cut
down too many trees. We should try our best to save them. Let's save the forests
and stop cutting down trees. We can also make laws to protect them. Every red
panda counts.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：以“My favourite animal”为主题，字数控制在80词左右，做到条理清晰、语法正确。解题思路可以按照三步展开：第一步开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是什么，简单交代初步的喜爱原因，快速切入主题；第二步主体部分围绕该动物的外形特点、生活习性、饮食习惯等维度展开描述，补充合理细节让内容更饱满；第三步结尾可以适当升华，提及该动物的生存现状，发出保护动物的正向倡议，全程注意以一般现在时为主要时态，保证语句衔接自然，避免语法和拼写错误。
【解析】
本篇参考范文按照总-分-总的规范结构完成写作：
1. 开篇点题：第一句直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是小熊猫，紧接着说明喜爱它的原因是可爱温顺，像小猫一样，开门见山契合主题。
2. 主体拓展：先点明小熊猫和大熊猫的外形差异，依次介绍它的体型特征、毛发的作用、五官特点、食性、擅长的技能，内容符合客观事实，逻辑层次清晰。
3. 结尾升华：点明小熊猫目前处于濒危状态，说明致危的人为原因，同时给出对应的保护倡议，传递了保护野生动物的正向价值观，全文语法准确，语句通顺，符合题目的全部要求。
【答案】
One possible version
The red panda is my favorite animal. I love red pandas because they're so cute and kind, just like cats.
Red pandas look different from pandas. They are small and have beautiful fur. Their fur helps them keep warm in cold places. They have big ears and long tails. They eat bamboo, fruit, insects and bird eggs. They are good at climbing trees.
However, red pandas are in danger. They live in the forests, but people cut down too many trees. We should try our best to save them. Let's save the forests and stop cutting down trees. We can also make laws to protect them. Every red panda counts.
【知识点】
英语命题写作，一般现在时运用，动物话题表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰完整，开篇点题不拖沓，中间从外形、习性多个维度介绍小熊猫，内容详实不空洞，结尾延伸到野生动物保护的主题，立意积极正向，全文没有语法错误，衔接自然流畅，完全符合题目的各项要求，学生写作时也可以参照该结构，替换成自己熟悉的其他动物填充对应内容，就能快速完成符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：以“My favourite animal”为主题，字数控制在80词左右，做到条理清晰、语法正确。解题思路可以按照三步展开：第一步开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是什么，简单交代初步的喜爱原因，快速切入主题；第二步主体部分围绕该动物的外形特点、生活习性、饮食习惯等维度展开描述，补充合理细节让内容更饱满；第三步结尾可以适当升华，提及该动物的生存现状，发出保护动物的正向倡议，全程注意以一般现在时为主要时态，保证语句衔接自然，避免语法和拼写错误。
【解析】
本篇参考范文按照总-分-总的规范结构完成写作：
1. 开篇点题：第一句直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是小熊猫，紧接着说明喜爱它的原因是可爱温顺，像小猫一样，开门见山契合主题。
2. 主体拓展：先点明小熊猫和大熊猫的外形差异，依次介绍它的体型特征、毛发的作用、五官特点、食性、擅长的技能，内容符合客观事实，逻辑层次清晰。
3. 结尾升华：点明小熊猫目前处于濒危状态，说明致危的人为原因，同时给出对应的保护倡议，传递了保护野生动物的正向价值观，全文语法准确，语句通顺，符合题目的全部要求。
【答案】
One possible version
The red panda is my favorite animal. I love red pandas because they're so cute and kind, just like cats.
Red pandas look different from pandas. They are small and have beautiful fur. Their fur helps them keep warm in cold places. They have big ears and long tails. They eat bamboo, fruit, insects and bird eggs. They are good at climbing trees.
However, red pandas are in danger. They live in the forests, but people cut down too many trees. We should try our best to save them. Let's save the forests and stop cutting down trees. We can also make laws to protect them. Every red panda counts.
【知识点】
英语命题写作，一般现在时运用，动物话题表达
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰完整，开篇点题不拖沓，中间从外形、习性多个维度介绍小熊猫，内容详实不空洞，结尾延伸到野生动物保护的主题，立意积极正向，全文没有语法错误，衔接自然流畅，完全符合题目的各项要求，学生写作时也可以参照该结构，替换成自己熟悉的其他动物填充对应内容，就能快速完成符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
