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（2025·江苏南通启东期末）上周日，阳光中学七年级（1）班举行了一次户外活动。假设你是该班学生李华，打算在学校英语俱乐部分享此次活动的经历和感受。请以“An outdoor activity”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
【要求】1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
3. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An outdoor activity
Last Sunday，our class had an exciting outdoor activity in a nearby park.
（2025·江苏南通启东期末）上周日，阳光中学七年级（1）班举行了一次户外活动。假设你是该班学生李华，打算在学校英语俱乐部分享此次活动的经历和感受。请以“An outdoor activity”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
【要求】1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
3. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An outdoor activity
Last Sunday，our class had an exciting outdoor activity in a nearby park.
It was sunny and pleasant. We rode our bikes there in the morning, then we set up tents and shared snacks with each other. After that, we played group games and flew kites, which made us laugh a lot.
The beautiful scenery and fresh air made everyone feel relaxed. We also took many photos to remember this happy time. This activity was really unforgettable.
All in all, I really enjoyed this activity because it not only helped us get close to nature, but also strengthened our friendship.
答案
One possible version:
An outdoor activity
Last Sunday, our class had an exciting outdoor activity in a nearby park. It was sunny and pleasant. We rode our bikes there in the morning, then we set up tents and shared snacks with each other. After that, we played group games and flew kites, which made us laugh a lot.
The beautiful scenery and fresh air made everyone feel relaxed. We also took many photos to remember this happy time. This activity was really unforgettable.
All in all, I really enjoyed this activity because it not only helped us get close to nature, but also strengthened our friendship.
An outdoor activity
Last Sunday, our class had an exciting outdoor activity in a nearby park. It was sunny and pleasant. We rode our bikes there in the morning, then we set up tents and shared snacks with each other. After that, we played group games and flew kites, which made us laugh a lot.
The beautiful scenery and fresh air made everyone feel relaxed. We also took many photos to remember this happy time. This activity was really unforgettable.
All in all, I really enjoyed this activity because it not only helped us get close to nature, but also strengthened our friendship.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求：身份是学生李华，主题是分享上周日班级户外活动的经历，需要覆盖所有提示要素：第一补充活动的天气等背景信息，第二清晰描述当天的具体活动内容，第三写出参与活动的直观感受，最后给出对本次活动的评价。全文以一般过去时为主，用第一人称叙述，按照“背景引入-活动流程-个人感受-活动评价”的逻辑推进，结合配图给出的骑车、野餐、搭帐篷玩游戏三个场景补充细节，控制总词数在90左右，避免出现真实个人信息，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
这是一篇校园生活类记叙文写作，解题步骤如下：
1. 明确核心要求：时态以一般过去时为主，人称使用第一人称，确保所有提示要点全覆盖：活动背景、具体活动内容、个人感受、活动评价。
2. 搭建写作框架：
① 承接给出的开头，补充天气情况，依次描述上午骑车到公园、搭帐篷、分享零食、玩游戏放风筝的活动过程；
② 接着写优美的风景和新鲜空气让大家很放松，大家拍照留念，点明活动令人难忘；
③ 最后收尾总结，说明活动的意义：既亲近了自然，也增进了同学间的友谊。
3. 写完后检查语法错误，确认所有提示点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现真实校名姓名。
【答案】
One possible version:
An outdoor activity
Last Sunday, our class had an exciting outdoor activity in a nearby park. It was sunny and pleasant. We rode our bikes there in the morning, then we set up tents and shared snacks with each other. After that, we played group games and flew kites, which made us laugh a lot.
The beautiful scenery and fresh air made everyone feel relaxed. We also took many photos to remember this happy time. This activity was really unforgettable.
All in all, I really enjoyed this activity because it not only helped us get close to nature, but also strengthened our friendship.
【知识点】
一般过去时
记叙文写作
户外活动话题表达
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础写作题，话题贴合学生真实的校园生活，配图和文字提示给出了明确的写作方向，不需要学生自行构思复杂情节，只需要按照给定的逻辑顺序梳理活动流程，注意过去式动词的正确变形，把经历、感受、评价三个部分自然衔接，就可以完成一篇符合要求的短文，主要考察学生对记叙文写作结构和过去时态的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先要明确写作要求：身份是学生李华，主题是分享上周日班级户外活动的经历，需要覆盖所有提示要素：第一补充活动的天气等背景信息，第二清晰描述当天的具体活动内容，第三写出参与活动的直观感受，最后给出对本次活动的评价。全文以一般过去时为主，用第一人称叙述，按照“背景引入-活动流程-个人感受-活动评价”的逻辑推进，结合配图给出的骑车、野餐、搭帐篷玩游戏三个场景补充细节，控制总词数在90左右，避免出现真实个人信息，保证语句通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
这是一篇校园生活类记叙文写作，解题步骤如下：
1. 明确核心要求：时态以一般过去时为主，人称使用第一人称，确保所有提示要点全覆盖：活动背景、具体活动内容、个人感受、活动评价。
2. 搭建写作框架：
① 承接给出的开头，补充天气情况，依次描述上午骑车到公园、搭帐篷、分享零食、玩游戏放风筝的活动过程；
② 接着写优美的风景和新鲜空气让大家很放松，大家拍照留念，点明活动令人难忘；
③ 最后收尾总结，说明活动的意义：既亲近了自然，也增进了同学间的友谊。
3. 写完后检查语法错误，确认所有提示点都覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现真实校名姓名。
【答案】
One possible version:
An outdoor activity
Last Sunday, our class had an exciting outdoor activity in a nearby park. It was sunny and pleasant. We rode our bikes there in the morning, then we set up tents and shared snacks with each other. After that, we played group games and flew kites, which made us laugh a lot.
The beautiful scenery and fresh air made everyone feel relaxed. We also took many photos to remember this happy time. This activity was really unforgettable.
All in all, I really enjoyed this activity because it not only helped us get close to nature, but also strengthened our friendship.
【知识点】
一般过去时
记叙文写作
户外活动话题表达
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础写作题，话题贴合学生真实的校园生活，配图和文字提示给出了明确的写作方向，不需要学生自行构思复杂情节，只需要按照给定的逻辑顺序梳理活动流程，注意过去式动词的正确变形，把经历、感受、评价三个部分自然衔接，就可以完成一篇符合要求的短文，主要考察学生对记叙文写作结构和过去时态的掌握程度。
【难度系数】
0.7
