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九、书面表达
请根据中文提示，以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇短文，可适当发挥，词数不少于80。
1. 埃米(Amy)是我最好的朋友。她个子高，苗条，有着一双大眼睛。她慷慨大方、乐于助人……她是我真正的朋友，从不说他人的坏话，总是为我保守秘密。
2. 埃米的理想学校上午9点开始上课，下午3点放学。她喜欢唱歌，每天上音乐课。她长大后想成为歌手。
3. 我们都喜欢旅行。上周末，我们乘地铁去了世界公园。在那里，我们欣赏了100多种世界名胜的模型。我们还拍了许多照片，玩得很开心！
My Best Friend
请根据中文提示，以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇短文，可适当发挥，词数不少于80。
1. 埃米(Amy)是我最好的朋友。她个子高，苗条，有着一双大眼睛。她慷慨大方、乐于助人……她是我真正的朋友，从不说他人的坏话，总是为我保守秘密。
2. 埃米的理想学校上午9点开始上课，下午3点放学。她喜欢唱歌，每天上音乐课。她长大后想成为歌手。
3. 我们都喜欢旅行。上周末，我们乘地铁去了世界公园。在那里，我们欣赏了100多种世界名胜的模型。我们还拍了许多照片，玩得很开心！
My Best Friend
答案
One possible version:
My Best Friend
Amy is my best friend. She is tall and slim with big eyes. She is generous and always ready to help others. She has a good sense of humour. She tells funny jokes. She always makes me laugh. She is a true friend. She never says bad words about others and always keeps secrets for me.
Amy's ideal school starts at 9 a.m. and ends at 3 p.m. She loves singing and takes music lessons every day. She wants to become a singer when she grows up.
Both of us love travelling. Last weekend, we took the subway to the World Park. We saw models of more than 100 places of interest from all over the world. We took many photos and had a lot of fun!
My Best Friend
Amy is my best friend. She is tall and slim with big eyes. She is generous and always ready to help others. She has a good sense of humour. She tells funny jokes. She always makes me laugh. She is a true friend. She never says bad words about others and always keeps secrets for me.
Amy's ideal school starts at 9 a.m. and ends at 3 p.m. She loves singing and takes music lessons every day. She wants to become a singer when she grows up.
Both of us love travelling. Last weekend, we took the subway to the World Park. We saw models of more than 100 places of interest from all over the world. We took many photos and had a lot of fun!
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My Best Friend”，需根据中文提示分三部分内容：一是介绍好友Amy的外貌与性格特点；二是说明Amy的理想学校安排及未来理想；三是讲述两人共同的旅行经历。写作时注意时态：介绍人物常态用一般现在时，描述上周末的旅行用一般过去时，适当添加细节丰富内容，确保覆盖所有提示要点，词数达标。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇点题，介绍Amy是自己最好的朋友，描述其外貌特征；2. 介绍Amy的性格特点，说明她是真正的朋友；3. 讲述Amy的理想学校时间安排、爱好及未来理想；4. 说明两人的共同爱好，描述上周末去世界公园的旅行经历，包括所见所做及感受。
【答案】My Best Friend
Amy is my best friend. She is tall and slim with big eyes. She is generous and always ready to help others. She has a good sense of humour. She tells funny jokes. She always makes me laugh. She is a true friend. She never says bad words about others and always keeps secrets for me.
Amy's ideal school starts at 9 a.m. and ends at 3 p.m. She loves singing and takes music lessons every day. She wants to become a singer when she grows up.
Both of us love travelling. Last weekend, we took the subway to the World Park. We saw models of more than 100 places of interest from all over the world. We took many photos and had a lot of fun!
【知识点】英语书面表达
【点评】本题为提示性英语书面表达题，考查学生对英语词汇、时态的运用及篇章组织能力，要求结合中文提示完成短文，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇点题，介绍Amy是自己最好的朋友，描述其外貌特征；2. 介绍Amy的性格特点，说明她是真正的朋友；3. 讲述Amy的理想学校时间安排、爱好及未来理想；4. 说明两人的共同爱好，描述上周末去世界公园的旅行经历，包括所见所做及感受。
【答案】My Best Friend
Amy is my best friend. She is tall and slim with big eyes. She is generous and always ready to help others. She has a good sense of humour. She tells funny jokes. She always makes me laugh. She is a true friend. She never says bad words about others and always keeps secrets for me.
Amy's ideal school starts at 9 a.m. and ends at 3 p.m. She loves singing and takes music lessons every day. She wants to become a singer when she grows up.
Both of us love travelling. Last weekend, we took the subway to the World Park. We saw models of more than 100 places of interest from all over the world. We took many photos and had a lot of fun!
【知识点】英语书面表达
【点评】本题为提示性英语书面表达题，考查学生对英语词汇、时态的运用及篇章组织能力，要求结合中文提示完成短文，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
