@ 跟踪演练
假设你是John，本周英语角的话题是“My Favourite Animal”。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，分享你最喜欢的动物。词数60~70。

My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is







92 英语 七年级 上册 外研版

单元主题写作
跟踪演练
One possible version:
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the elephant. Elephants are very big and smart animals. They have grey skin and a very long nose. Some of them have white ivory.
I like elephants because they are very friendly to humans. They can help people do a lot of things. They are also very cute and lovely. They are important to our environment. We should protect them and let them live happily in the wild.

【分析】这是一道英语单元主题写作题，要求根据给定的思维导图（核心为最喜欢的动物是大象，包含动物特征、喜欢的原因两类提示），围绕“My Favourite Animal”话题写短文。解题思路：1. 确定核心动物为大象；2. 结合思维导图补充大象的具体特征（如体型大、聪明、灰皮肤、长鼻子等）；3. 梳理喜欢大象的原因（对人类友好、能帮忙做事等）；4. 用七年级所学的英语句式组织内容，控制词数在60-70之间，确保表达连贯准确。
【解析】首先点明最喜欢的动物是大象；接着描述大象的特征：体型大且聪明，有灰色皮肤和长鼻子；然后说明喜欢的原因：对人类友好，能帮助人们做事，还很可爱；最后简单提及要保护大象，符合词数要求，用规范的英语表达完成写作。
【答案】My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the elephant. Elephants are very big and smart animals. They have grey skin and a very long nose. Some of them have white ivory.
I like elephants because they are very friendly to humans. They can help people do a lot of things. They are also very cute and lovely. They are important to our environment. We should protect them and let them live happily in the wild.
【知识点】英语单元主题写作、动物类英语表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查动物话题的英语写作，贴合七年级上册英语单元主题，既考查词汇运用也考查语句组织能力，是基础的写作训练题，符合学生的学习进度。
【难度系数】0.6