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假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动，号召大家准备关于保护濒危动物的演讲。你们班的交换生Tom给你发了一封邮件向你询问相关事宜，请用英文回复一封邮件，告知他相关事宜。
【要点】1. When should he hand in(上交) the speech?
2. What do you know about the endangered animals?
3. What is your suggestion to him?
参考词汇:next Monday, elephants, golden monkeys, hunt, protect, raise money, pictures
【要求】1. 必须包含所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等。
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，词数不少于90(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“保护濒危动物”的宣传活动，号召大家准备关于保护濒危动物的演讲。你们班的交换生Tom给你发了一封邮件向你询问相关事宜，请用英文回复一封邮件，告知他相关事宜。
【要点】1. When should he hand in(上交) the speech?
2. What do you know about the endangered animals?
3. What is your suggestion to him?
参考词汇:next Monday, elephants, golden monkeys, hunt, protect, raise money, pictures
【要求】1. 必须包含所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等。
3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，词数不少于90(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you some information about our speech on protecting animals in danger.
If there is anything else I can do, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
First, our teacher told us that we have to hand in the speech before next Monday, so you still have enough time to get ready for it.
Now many wild animals are in serious danger. People hunt elephants for their expensive ivory, and golden monkeys are losing their suitable living habitats. The number of these endangered animals is dropping fast, and if we don't take action now, we may never see them again in the future. I have some useful suggestions for you. You can search for some vivid pictures of endangered animals to put in your speech, which will make your presentation much more impressive. Also, you can add the idea of calling on classmates to raise money for the wildlife protection groups, to encourage more people to join us to protect the endangered animals.
Now many wild animals are in serious danger. People hunt elephants for their expensive ivory, and golden monkeys are losing their suitable living habitats. The number of these endangered animals is dropping fast, and if we don't take action now, we may never see them again in the future. I have some useful suggestions for you. You can search for some vivid pictures of endangered animals to put in your speech, which will make your presentation much more impressive. Also, you can add the idea of calling on classmates to raise money for the wildlife protection groups, to encourage more people to join us to protect the endangered animals.
解析
【分析】本题为英文应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份回复交换生Tom的邮件，告知其关于“保护濒危动物”演讲的相关事宜，需覆盖三个核心要点：上交演讲的时间、自身了解的濒危动物情况、给Tom的建议，同时要使用给定参考词汇，词数达标且符合书信格式。解题时需先梳理三个要点的逻辑顺序，结合参考词汇组织内容，确保语句通顺、符合书信语气，不出现真实信息。
【解析】1. 先明确上交时间：告知Tom需在下周一前上交演讲，时间充裕；2. 介绍濒危动物现状：以大象（被猎取象牙）、金丝猴（栖息地丧失）为例，说明濒危动物数量快速下降的情况，强调保护的紧迫性；3. 给出具体建议：建议Tom使用生动图片增强演讲感染力，还可号召同学为野生动物保护组织筹钱，呼吁更多人参与保护，覆盖所有要点并运用参考词汇，满足题目要求。
【答案】First, our teacher told us that we have to hand in the speech before next Monday, so you still have enough time to get ready for it.
Now many wild animals are in serious danger. People hunt elephants for their expensive ivory, and golden monkeys are losing their suitable living habitats. The number of these endangered animals is dropping fast, and if we don't take action now, we may never see them again in the future. I have some useful suggestions for you. You can search for some vivid pictures of endangered animals to put in your speech, which will make your presentation much more impressive. Also, you can add the idea of calling on classmates to raise money for the wildlife protection groups, to encourage more people to join us to protect the endangered animals.
【知识点】英文书信写作、濒危动物话题表达、应用文写作
【点评】本题围绕环保主题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求明确、贴近学生生活，既锻炼学生的书信表达能力，又渗透了保护濒危动物的意识，是一道典型的英语写作练习题。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 先明确上交时间：告知Tom需在下周一前上交演讲，时间充裕；2. 介绍濒危动物现状：以大象（被猎取象牙）、金丝猴（栖息地丧失）为例，说明濒危动物数量快速下降的情况，强调保护的紧迫性；3. 给出具体建议：建议Tom使用生动图片增强演讲感染力，还可号召同学为野生动物保护组织筹钱，呼吁更多人参与保护，覆盖所有要点并运用参考词汇，满足题目要求。
【答案】First, our teacher told us that we have to hand in the speech before next Monday, so you still have enough time to get ready for it.
Now many wild animals are in serious danger. People hunt elephants for their expensive ivory, and golden monkeys are losing their suitable living habitats. The number of these endangered animals is dropping fast, and if we don't take action now, we may never see them again in the future. I have some useful suggestions for you. You can search for some vivid pictures of endangered animals to put in your speech, which will make your presentation much more impressive. Also, you can add the idea of calling on classmates to raise money for the wildlife protection groups, to encourage more people to join us to protect the endangered animals.
【知识点】英文书信写作、濒危动物话题表达、应用文写作
【点评】本题围绕环保主题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求明确、贴近学生生活，既锻炼学生的书信表达能力，又渗透了保护濒危动物的意识，是一道典型的英语写作练习题。
【难度系数】0.6
