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端午节是中国四大传统节日之一。为加深学生对中华文化的理解，激发学生的爱国主义情怀，某英语报“Culture”专栏正面向中学生举行以“The Duanwu Festival—A Celebration of Patriotism”为题的征文比赛。请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
【提示】1. What is the Duanwu Festival?
2. Why is the Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
3. As teenagers, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
【要求】1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
2. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Duanwu Festival—A Celebration of Patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
【提示】1. What is the Duanwu Festival?
2. Why is the Duanwu Festival also widely accepted as a celebration of patriotism?
3. As teenagers, how can we practise the spirit of patriotism?
【要求】1. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
2. 100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Duanwu Festival—A Celebration of Patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival.
It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of fifth month in Chinese lunar calendar.
People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat racing are closely related to patriotism.
Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies.
Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
答案
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The Duanwu Festival—A Celebration of Patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of fifth month in Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat racing are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
The Duanwu Festival—A Celebration of Patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of fifth month in Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat racing are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先梳理核心要求：一是必须全覆盖题干给出的三个提示问题，二是总词数控制在100词左右，给出的开头不需要重写。解题第一步先回应第一个问题：清晰介绍端午节的基本属性，点明它是中国重要传统节日、对应的农历时间、吃粽子和赛龙舟的传统习俗，引出纪念爱国诗人屈原的背景。第二步回应第二个问题：把屈原忧国投江的事迹、龙舟竞速承载的集体奋进精神和爱国主义内核关联起来，解释端午节被广泛认可为爱国庆典的原因。第三步回应第三个问题：结合青少年的身份，列举具体可落地的践行爱国精神的做法，比如认真学习、从小事做起为国家发展贡献力量。最后调整语句衔接，保证行文流畅没有语法错误，符合征文的正式表达风格。
【解析】
写作可以按三步有序完成：
1. 拓展第一个要点：承接给出的开头，补充介绍端午节是中国最重要的传统节日之一，点明它在农历五月初五，全国民众通过吃粽子、举办龙舟赛事的方式纪念古代伟大爱国诗人屈原，完整回答第一个提示问题。
2. 阐述第二个要点：点明屈原故事背后的精神内核、龙舟赛事承载的团结奋进精神都和爱国主义高度绑定，屈原为家国牺牲的行为就是爱国主义的具象体现，清晰解释端午节作为爱国庆典的原因。
3. 落地第三个要点：站在青少年视角，说明我们可以通过努力学习、追求学业进步，主动做好身边小事为集体和国家出力的方式，践行爱国主义精神。最后整体通读调整，控制总词数符合要求，保证逻辑连贯。
【答案】
The Duanwu Festival—A Celebration of Patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of fifth month in Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat racing are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
【知识点】
1. 中国传统节日英文表达
2. 提纲类英语作文写作
3. 主题征文规范输出
【点评】
本题属于文化主题的英语应用文写作，既考查学生基础的英语遣词造句、语篇组织能力，也渗透了中华传统文化传播与爱国主义价值引导。写作时要注意三个提示要点逐一对应不遗漏，适当添加衔接词让行文逻辑更顺畅，同时严格把控词数符合题目要求，避免出现基础语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先梳理核心要求：一是必须全覆盖题干给出的三个提示问题，二是总词数控制在100词左右，给出的开头不需要重写。解题第一步先回应第一个问题：清晰介绍端午节的基本属性，点明它是中国重要传统节日、对应的农历时间、吃粽子和赛龙舟的传统习俗，引出纪念爱国诗人屈原的背景。第二步回应第二个问题：把屈原忧国投江的事迹、龙舟竞速承载的集体奋进精神和爱国主义内核关联起来，解释端午节被广泛认可为爱国庆典的原因。第三步回应第三个问题：结合青少年的身份，列举具体可落地的践行爱国精神的做法，比如认真学习、从小事做起为国家发展贡献力量。最后调整语句衔接，保证行文流畅没有语法错误，符合征文的正式表达风格。
【解析】
写作可以按三步有序完成：
1. 拓展第一个要点：承接给出的开头，补充介绍端午节是中国最重要的传统节日之一，点明它在农历五月初五，全国民众通过吃粽子、举办龙舟赛事的方式纪念古代伟大爱国诗人屈原，完整回答第一个提示问题。
2. 阐述第二个要点：点明屈原故事背后的精神内核、龙舟赛事承载的团结奋进精神都和爱国主义高度绑定，屈原为家国牺牲的行为就是爱国主义的具象体现，清晰解释端午节作为爱国庆典的原因。
3. 落地第三个要点：站在青少年视角，说明我们可以通过努力学习、追求学业进步，主动做好身边小事为集体和国家出力的方式，践行爱国主义精神。最后整体通读调整，控制总词数符合要求，保证逻辑连贯。
【答案】
The Duanwu Festival—A Celebration of Patriotism
The Duanwu Festival is also called the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It falls on the fifth day of fifth month in Chinese lunar calendar. People across China eat rice dumplings and hold dragon boat races to commemorate Qu Yuan, a great ancient patriotic poet.
The spirit behind Qu Yuan's story and the spirit of dragon boat racing are closely related to patriotism. Qu Yuan's sacrifice for his country demonstrates the spirit of patriotism.
As teenagers, we should strive for the prosperity and strength of our motherland. We can do this by working hard and pursuing excellence in our studies. Additionally, by dedicating ourselves to protecting the earth, we can become better individuals and contribute to the well-being of our country.
【知识点】
1. 中国传统节日英文表达
2. 提纲类英语作文写作
3. 主题征文规范输出
【点评】
本题属于文化主题的英语应用文写作，既考查学生基础的英语遣词造句、语篇组织能力，也渗透了中华传统文化传播与爱国主义价值引导。写作时要注意三个提示要点逐一对应不遗漏，适当添加衔接词让行文逻辑更顺畅，同时严格把控词数符合题目要求，避免出现基础语法错误。
【难度系数】
0.6
