上周末,你们学校组织了一次短期的旅行。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍这次活动情况。

注意:
(1)文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
(2)写作词数为80词左右。

写作点拨:
审题
要求写一篇短文介绍一次学校旅行,需包含时间、地点、交通方式、进行的活动和你的感受。文章体裁为记叙文,人称使用第一人称,时态为一般过去时。
提纲

参考句型
1. It took sb sometime to do...
2. We did many things there,such as...
3. Of all the activities, the most interesting one was...
4. We had a great time/had fun/enjoyed ourselves last weekend.
规范作文:

主题写作实践
Last weekend, we had a trip to a small village.
We set out at 7 o'clock in the morning. It took us
two hours to get there by bus. We did many things
there, such as having a picnic and taking a lot of
photos. Of all the activities, the most interesting one
was picking apples on the hill because we got the
chance to eat some of them. We had a great time last
weekend!

【分析】
本题为英语主题写作题，要求介绍学校组织的短期旅行，需明确写作核心要点：时间（上周末）、地点、交通方式、活动内容、个人感受；体裁为记叙文，人称使用第一人称，时态限定为一般过去时；需遵循80词左右的词数要求，不得出现真实人名、校名等信息，可结合题目给出的参考句型完成写作。
【解析】
写作时先确定核心要素：时间为上周末，地点选小村庄，交通方式为公交（耗时两小时）；接着列举活动：野餐、拍照、摘苹果（其中摘苹果为最有趣的活动）；最后表达旅行感受（玩得开心）；写作中运用题目给出的参考句型，注意时态统一为一般过去时，控制词数在要求范围内，避免出现真实信息。
【答案】
Last weekend, we had a trip to a small village. We set out at 7 o'clock in the morning. It took us two hours to get there by bus. We did many things there, such as having a picnic and taking a lot of photos. Of all the activities, the most interesting one was picking apples on the hill because we got the chance to eat some of them. We had a great time last weekend!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般过去时应用，英语主题写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，涵盖了旅行的时间、地点、交通、活动及感受等所有要点，运用了题目给出的参考句型，时态正确，语言通顺，符合词数要求，未出现真实信息，是一篇符合标准的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6