第三部分 书面表达
在运动中,我们总能感受到一种强大的力量。它或许是比赛落后时队友的鼓励,是筋疲力尽时坚持到底的决心,是团队协作中彼此支撑的温暖……我校英语社团正在组织“The Spirit of Sports”英文故事征集活动,请你以此为题,分享一次在运动中感受到力量与成长的经历。提示:
1. What sport did you take part in?
2. What challenge did you face?
3. Who encouraged you, or how did you show your spirit?
4. What did you learn from this experience?
要求:1. 不少于80词(首段已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
The Spirit of Sports
Sports are more than just games. They teach us important lessons about courage, teamwork, and never giving up. I once had an experience that made me truly understand the spirit of sports.
在运动中,我们总能感受到一种强大的力量。它或许是比赛落后时队友的鼓励,是筋疲力尽时坚持到底的决心,是团队协作中彼此支撑的温暖……我校英语社团正在组织“The Spirit of Sports”英文故事征集活动,请你以此为题,分享一次在运动中感受到力量与成长的经历。提示:
1. What sport did you take part in?
2. What challenge did you face?
3. Who encouraged you, or how did you show your spirit?
4. What did you learn from this experience?
要求:1. 不少于80词(首段已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
The Spirit of Sports
Sports are more than just games. They teach us important lessons about courage, teamwork, and never giving up. I once had an experience that made me truly understand the spirit of sports.
答案
Last year, I took part in the 1000-meter race at the school sports meeting. I ran very fast at first, but soon I felt so tired that my legs almost couldn't move, and I even fell to the ground with a slight hurt on my knee. I almost wanted to give up at that moment.
Just then, all my classmates on the playground shouted my name loudly and cheered for me. Their eyes were full of trust. I told myself I could not let them down, so I stood up and kept running step by step towards the finish line.
I didn't win any prize in the end, but all my friends hugged me warmly. From this experience, I finally understand that the spirit of sports is never about getting the first place. It is the courage to keep moving forward even when you are in great difficulty, and the warm support from your friends that makes you become a stronger person.
Just then, all my classmates on the playground shouted my name loudly and cheered for me. Their eyes were full of trust. I told myself I could not let them down, so I stood up and kept running step by step towards the finish line.
I didn't win any prize in the end, but all my friends hugged me warmly. From this experience, I finally understand that the spirit of sports is never about getting the first place. It is the courage to keep moving forward even when you are in great difficulty, and the warm support from your friends that makes you become a stronger person.
解析
这是一篇记叙文类书面表达,写作思路如下:
1. 紧扣题干给出的开篇内容,依次覆盖全部4个提示要点:首先点明自己参加的运动项目,接着描述比赛过程中遇到的具体困难,再说明他人的鼓励以及自己坚持的行动,最后分享从中获得的感悟。
2. 行文用一般过去时叙述经历,语言符合七年级词汇难度,适当添加细节让故事连贯自然,词数满足不少于80词的要求,不出现真实个人和学校相关信息。
1. 紧扣题干给出的开篇内容,依次覆盖全部4个提示要点:首先点明自己参加的运动项目,接着描述比赛过程中遇到的具体困难,再说明他人的鼓励以及自己坚持的行动,最后分享从中获得的感悟。
2. 行文用一般过去时叙述经历,语言符合七年级词汇难度,适当添加细节让故事连贯自然,词数满足不少于80词的要求,不出现真实个人和学校相关信息。
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