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随着中国免签政策的实施，许多外国友人来到你的家乡旅游，他们震惊于中国科技飞速发展给生活带来的巨大变化。请根据下图写一篇短文向他们介绍科技是如何改变我们的生活和学习的。
注意事项:
1. 短文要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于 90，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in our lifestyle and study.
Technology has really brought us a better life.
随着中国免签政策的实施，许多外国友人来到你的家乡旅游，他们震惊于中国科技飞速发展给生活带来的巨大变化。请根据下图写一篇短文向他们介绍科技是如何改变我们的生活和学习的。
注意事项:
1. 短文要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于 90，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in our lifestyle and study.
First of all, the ways we go around have changed a lot. We used to ride bicycles or take buses, but now electric cars and self-driving cars are more common.
When it comes to study, reading habits are different. Instead of only reading paper books, some prefer e-books. Also, we can get answers and learn new knowledge more easily with the help of AI tools.
In the past, we felt that getting information and communicating with faraway people were difficult. Now, technology makes us feel more connected. We can share our lives and ideas online.
Technology has really brought us a better life.
答案
One possible version:
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in our lifestyle and study.
First of all, the ways we go around have changed a lot. We used to ride bicycles or take buses, but now electric cars and self-driving cars are more common.
When it comes to study, reading habits are different. Instead of only reading paper books, some prefer e-books. Also, we can get answers and learn new knowledge more easily with the help of AI tools.
In the past, we felt that getting information and communicating with faraway people were difficult. Now, technology makes us feel more connected. We can share our lives and ideas online.
Technology has really brought us a better life.
(90 words)
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in our lifestyle and study.
First of all, the ways we go around have changed a lot. We used to ride bicycles or take buses, but now electric cars and self-driving cars are more common.
When it comes to study, reading habits are different. Instead of only reading paper books, some prefer e-books. Also, we can get answers and learn new knowledge more easily with the help of AI tools.
In the past, we felt that getting information and communicating with faraway people were difficult. Now, technology makes us feel more connected. We can share our lives and ideas online.
Technology has really brought us a better life.
(90 words)
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确核心任务：向来访的外国友人介绍科技给我们生活、学习带来的改变，所有核心提示要点都已经在表格中给出，不需要额外做过多超纲拓展。首先梳理必须覆盖的全部要点：第一是生活维度的交通变化，对应提示里过去依靠自行车、公交出行，现在电动汽车、自动驾驶汽车逐渐普及；第二是学习维度的变化，从传统纸质书阅读，发展出电子书，还有AI技术辅助日常学习；第三是感受的今昔对比，先描述过去的生活体验，再描述当下科技带来的全新体验。接下来安排行文逻辑：承接题目给出的开头之后，先用过渡词引出交通变化的内容，再自然过渡到学习场景的改变，之后完成今昔感受的对比，最后衔接题目给出的结尾，全程注意语句通顺，区分过去时和现在时的使用，保证词数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本文是介绍类说明文，受众是外国游客，语气友好平实即可，必须覆盖表格全部3个模块的提示内容，词数不少于90，给定的首尾句不计入总词数。
2. 要点拆解：
① 生活出行部分：说明出行方式的变迁，过去人们日常出行选择自行车、公交，如今电动汽车、自动驾驶汽车越来越普及，出行便捷度大幅提升。
② 学习部分：说明阅读和学习方式的变化，过去只能阅读纸质书，现在很多人选择阅读电子书，同时AI工具可以帮助我们快速答疑、获取新知识，学习效率更高。
③ 感受对比部分：描述过去的体验：过去人们获取信息难度高，和远方的亲友沟通很不方便；描述现在的体验：现在科技让所有人的联结更紧密，我们可以随时在线分享自己的生活和想法。
3. 衔接润色：使用First of all、When it comes to等过渡词串联不同模块的内容，保证行文逻辑连贯，语法准确，最终自然衔接给定的结尾句。
【答案】
One possible version:
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in our lifestyle and study.
First of all, the ways we go around have changed a lot. We used to ride bicycles or take buses, but now electric cars and self-driving cars are more common.
When it comes to study, reading habits are different. Instead of only reading paper books, some prefer e-books. Also, we can get answers and learn new knowledge more easily with the help of AI tools.
In the past, we felt that getting information and communicating with faraway people were difficult. Now, technology makes us feel more connected. We can share our lives and ideas online.
Technology has really brought us a better life.
【知识点】
说明文写作，时态运用，要点整合
【点评】
本题属于提示类书面表达，所有核心写作要点都已通过表格明确给出，不需要学生自主构思大量内容，重点考察学生的信息整合能力、基础语句组织能力和时态区分运用能力，只要完整覆盖所有提示点，合理添加过渡衔接内容，就能写出符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确核心任务：向来访的外国友人介绍科技给我们生活、学习带来的改变，所有核心提示要点都已经在表格中给出，不需要额外做过多超纲拓展。首先梳理必须覆盖的全部要点：第一是生活维度的交通变化，对应提示里过去依靠自行车、公交出行，现在电动汽车、自动驾驶汽车逐渐普及；第二是学习维度的变化，从传统纸质书阅读，发展出电子书，还有AI技术辅助日常学习；第三是感受的今昔对比，先描述过去的生活体验，再描述当下科技带来的全新体验。接下来安排行文逻辑：承接题目给出的开头之后，先用过渡词引出交通变化的内容，再自然过渡到学习场景的改变，之后完成今昔感受的对比，最后衔接题目给出的结尾，全程注意语句通顺，区分过去时和现在时的使用，保证词数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：本文是介绍类说明文，受众是外国游客，语气友好平实即可，必须覆盖表格全部3个模块的提示内容，词数不少于90，给定的首尾句不计入总词数。
2. 要点拆解：
① 生活出行部分：说明出行方式的变迁，过去人们日常出行选择自行车、公交，如今电动汽车、自动驾驶汽车越来越普及，出行便捷度大幅提升。
② 学习部分：说明阅读和学习方式的变化，过去只能阅读纸质书，现在很多人选择阅读电子书，同时AI工具可以帮助我们快速答疑、获取新知识，学习效率更高。
③ 感受对比部分：描述过去的体验：过去人们获取信息难度高，和远方的亲友沟通很不方便；描述现在的体验：现在科技让所有人的联结更紧密，我们可以随时在线分享自己的生活和想法。
3. 衔接润色：使用First of all、When it comes to等过渡词串联不同模块的内容，保证行文逻辑连贯，语法准确，最终自然衔接给定的结尾句。
【答案】
One possible version:
How technology has changed our lives
Over the past few years, technology has greatly changed our lives, especially in our lifestyle and study.
First of all, the ways we go around have changed a lot. We used to ride bicycles or take buses, but now electric cars and self-driving cars are more common.
When it comes to study, reading habits are different. Instead of only reading paper books, some prefer e-books. Also, we can get answers and learn new knowledge more easily with the help of AI tools.
In the past, we felt that getting information and communicating with faraway people were difficult. Now, technology makes us feel more connected. We can share our lives and ideas online.
Technology has really brought us a better life.
【知识点】
说明文写作，时态运用，要点整合
【点评】
本题属于提示类书面表达，所有核心写作要点都已通过表格明确给出，不需要学生自主构思大量内容，重点考察学生的信息整合能力、基础语句组织能力和时态区分运用能力，只要完整覆盖所有提示点，合理添加过渡衔接内容，就能写出符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
