B. 书面表达
在繁忙的生活中,爱好如同一盏明灯,照亮我们的前路,给我们带来无尽的快乐和满足感。某英文报纸开展题为“My Hobby”的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英语写一篇短文并投稿。

注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在文中出现真实校名和学生真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。
My Hobby
在繁忙的生活中,爱好如同一盏明灯,照亮我们的前路,给我们带来无尽的快乐和满足感。某英文报纸开展题为“My Hobby”的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在文中出现真实校名和学生真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。
My Hobby
My hobby is reading.
When I was in primary school, I received a book about wildlife as a birthday gift. I was so attracted by the book that I didn't want to put it down.
Now when I have free time, I always pick up a book and immerse myself in it.
Reading keeps my mind active. The more books I read, the wiser I become.
Besides, reading makes my life colourful and brings me a lot of fun. So I love reading.
答案
参考范文:
My Hobby
My hobby is reading.
When I was in primary school, I received a book about wildlife as a birthday gift. I was so attracted by the book that I didn't want to put it down. Now when I have free time, I always pick up a book and immerse myself in it.
Reading keeps my mind active. The more books I read, the wiser I become. Besides, reading makes my life colourful and brings me a lot of fun. So I love reading.
My Hobby
My hobby is reading.
When I was in primary school, I received a book about wildlife as a birthday gift. I was so attracted by the book that I didn't want to put it down. Now when I have free time, I always pick up a book and immerse myself in it.
Reading keeps my mind active. The more books I read, the wiser I become. Besides, reading makes my life colourful and brings me a lot of fun. So I love reading.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“My Hobby”,需依据思维导图的三个模块构思:1. 确定具体爱好(如阅读);2. 描述爱好形成的过程,包含开始的时间(如小学时)和起因(如收到相关生日礼物被吸引);3. 阐述收获的益处,至少两点(如活跃思维、丰富生活)。写作时要注意语句连贯,词数约80,适当拓展细节,不出现真实信息,避免直接照抄提示内容。
【解析】先点明爱好是阅读;接着叙述爱好的形成:小学时收到一本野生动物相关的书作为生日礼物,被内容吸引,空闲时就会阅读;最后说明益处:让思维保持活跃,变得更聪慧,还能让生活多彩有趣,表达对阅读的喜爱。
【答案】My Hobby
My hobby is reading.
When I was in primary school, I received a book about wildlife as a birthday gift. I was so attracted by the book that I didn't want to put it down. Now when I have free time, I always pick up a book and immerse myself in it.
Reading keeps my mind active. The more books I read, the wiser I become. Besides, reading makes my life colourful and brings me a lot of fun. So I love reading.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】范文紧扣思维导图所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,拓展合理,准确传递了爱好的相关内容,符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】先点明爱好是阅读;接着叙述爱好的形成:小学时收到一本野生动物相关的书作为生日礼物,被内容吸引,空闲时就会阅读;最后说明益处:让思维保持活跃,变得更聪慧,还能让生活多彩有趣,表达对阅读的喜爱。
【答案】My Hobby
My hobby is reading.
When I was in primary school, I received a book about wildlife as a birthday gift. I was so attracted by the book that I didn't want to put it down. Now when I have free time, I always pick up a book and immerse myself in it.
Reading keeps my mind active. The more books I read, the wiser I become. Besides, reading makes my life colourful and brings me a lot of fun. So I love reading.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】范文紧扣思维导图所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,拓展合理,准确传递了爱好的相关内容,符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.7
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