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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D27
「2026江苏连云港东海月考改编」
假如你是七年级三班的李辉，参加学校艺术节才艺大赛。你将现场展示你设计的服装并用英文做介绍。请你根据提示，写一篇英文解说稿。
提示：
1.你的设计包括一件女式衬衫、一件外套和一条裙子。
2.女式衬衫——黄色，女孩最爱的颜色。
3.外套——深蓝色，和衬衫很搭配。
4.裙子——黑色，和其他任何颜色都相配，不长也不短，很受年轻女孩的欢迎。
5.都是棉质，穿着舒服。
要求：
1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7.
I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
「2026江苏连云港东海月考改编」
假如你是七年级三班的李辉，参加学校艺术节才艺大赛。你将现场展示你设计的服装并用英文做介绍。请你根据提示，写一篇英文解说稿。
提示：
1.你的设计包括一件女式衬衫、一件外套和一条裙子。
2.女式衬衫——黄色，女孩最爱的颜色。
3.外套——深蓝色，和衬衫很搭配。
4.裙子——黑色，和其他任何颜色都相配，不长也不短，很受年轻女孩的欢迎。
5.都是棉质，穿着舒服。
要求：
1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7.
Today I want to show you my fashion design.
My design includes a blouse, a coat and a skirt. The blouse is yellow. I think it is girls’ favourite colour. The coat is dark blue. It is fashionable. It matches the blouse very well.
The skirt is black. The colour matches any other colour. It is not too long or too short. It’s very popular with young girls nowadays.
More importantly, the blouse, the coat and the skirt are all made of cotton and very comfortable to wear.
I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7. Today I want to show you my fashion design.
My design includes a blouse, a coat and a skirt. The blouse is yellow. I think it is girls’ favourite colour. The coat is dark blue. It is fashionable. It matches the blouse very well. The skirt is black. The colour matches any other colour. It is not too long or too short. It’s very popular with young girls nowadays. More importantly, the blouse, the coat and the skirt are all made of cotton and very comfortable to wear.
I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
进阶版范文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7. Today, I’m very happy to show you my fashion design.
First of all, this is a blouse for young girls. It is yellow, which is the favourite colour of many girls. Then, look at this coat. It is dark blue and matches the blouse very well. Next, here is a skirt. It is black. Black matches any other colour and is very popular with young girls. It is not too long or too short, just the right length. Finally, all of them are made of cotton and very comfortable to wear.
I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
基础版范文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7. Today I want to show you my fashion design.
My design includes a blouse, a coat and a skirt. The blouse is yellow. I think it is girls’ favourite colour. The coat is dark blue. It is fashionable. It matches the blouse very well. The skirt is black. The colour matches any other colour. It is not too long or too short. It’s very popular with young girls nowadays. More importantly, the blouse, the coat and the skirt are all made of cotton and very comfortable to wear.
I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
进阶版范文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7. Today, I’m very happy to show you my fashion design.
First of all, this is a blouse for young girls. It is yellow, which is the favourite colour of many girls. Then, look at this coat. It is dark blue and matches the blouse very well. Next, here is a skirt. It is black. Black matches any other colour and is very popular with young girls. It is not too long or too short, just the right length. Finally, all of them are made of cotton and very comfortable to wear.
I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以七年级三班李辉的身份，为学校艺术节才艺大赛写英文服装介绍解说稿，开头和结尾已给出，需涵盖5个提示要点，词数不少于80，不得出现真实人名和校名。解题思路：先承接开头引出服装设计展示，再按顺序介绍三件服装的颜色、特点，最后点明材质优势，衔接给定结尾，确保内容完整、语言通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明展示内容：Today I want to show you my fashion design.；2. 介绍衬衫：The blouse is yellow, which is girls’ favourite colour.；3. 介绍外套：The coat is dark blue and matches the blouse very well.；4. 介绍裙子：The skirt is black, which matches any other colour. It is not too long or too short and is popular with young girls.；5. 说明材质：All of them are made of cotton and very comfortable to wear.；6. 衔接给定结尾，确保词数达标，无违规信息。
【答案】
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7. Today I want to show you my fashion design. My design includes a blouse, a coat and a skirt. The blouse is yellow. I think it is girls’ favourite colour. The coat is dark blue. It matches the blouse very well. The skirt is black. The colour matches any other colour. It is not too long or too short. It’s very popular with young girls nowadays. More importantly, the blouse, the coat and the skirt are all made of cotton and very comfortable to wear. I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
【知识点】
英文应用文写作、服装类英文表达、描述性语句运用
【点评】
本题结合校园艺术节场景，考察学生实用英文写作能力，要求紧扣提示要点，准确运用服装相关词汇，语言通顺连贯，符合七年级学生英语水平，贴近生活实际。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以七年级三班李辉的身份，为学校艺术节才艺大赛写英文服装介绍解说稿，开头和结尾已给出，需涵盖5个提示要点，词数不少于80，不得出现真实人名和校名。解题思路：先承接开头引出服装设计展示，再按顺序介绍三件服装的颜色、特点，最后点明材质优势，衔接给定结尾，确保内容完整、语言通顺。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明展示内容：Today I want to show you my fashion design.；2. 介绍衬衫：The blouse is yellow, which is girls’ favourite colour.；3. 介绍外套：The coat is dark blue and matches the blouse very well.；4. 介绍裙子：The skirt is black, which matches any other colour. It is not too long or too short and is popular with young girls.；5. 说明材质：All of them are made of cotton and very comfortable to wear.；6. 衔接给定结尾，确保词数达标，无违规信息。
【答案】
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I am Li Hui from Class 3, Grade 7. Today I want to show you my fashion design. My design includes a blouse, a coat and a skirt. The blouse is yellow. I think it is girls’ favourite colour. The coat is dark blue. It matches the blouse very well. The skirt is black. The colour matches any other colour. It is not too long or too short. It’s very popular with young girls nowadays. More importantly, the blouse, the coat and the skirt are all made of cotton and very comfortable to wear. I hope you will like my design. Thank you!
【知识点】
英文应用文写作、服装类英文表达、描述性语句运用
【点评】
本题结合校园艺术节场景，考察学生实用英文写作能力，要求紧扣提示要点，准确运用服装相关词汇，语言通顺连贯，符合七年级学生英语水平，贴近生活实际。
【难度系数】
0.5
