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51. 假如你是陈红,请给 Peter 回一封邮件,谈谈你的家规。包括以下提示内容:
(1)简单介绍一下自己的现状;
(2)描述自己的家规(起床/睡觉/上学/到家时间、到家先完成作业、每天运动至少半个小时、上学日晚上不能看电视或玩游戏……);
(3)谈谈你对家规的看法。
要求:
(1)不能照译原文,要包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)语句连贯,条理清晰,词数 60 左右。邮件的格式和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you? You want to know about my family rules. Let me tell you about them.
Yours,
Chen Hong
(1)简单介绍一下自己的现状;
(2)描述自己的家规(起床/睡觉/上学/到家时间、到家先完成作业、每天运动至少半个小时、上学日晚上不能看电视或玩游戏……);
(3)谈谈你对家规的看法。
要求:
(1)不能照译原文,要包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)语句连贯,条理清晰,词数 60 左右。邮件的格式和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you? You want to know about my family rules. Let me tell you about them.
Yours,
Chen Hong
答案
51. 参考范文：
Dear Peter,
How are you? You want to know about my family rules. Let me tell you about them.
There are a lot of rules at my home. I must get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I have to run for half an hour before breakfast. And I must get to school at 8:00. I must arrive home before 6:00 p.m. Besides, I can't watch TV or play computer games on school nights. I have to finish my homework first. And I need to go to bed before 9:00 p.m. I think the rules are too strict. However, my parents make the rules to help me, so I think I should follow them.
Yours,
Chen Hong
Dear Peter,
How are you? You want to know about my family rules. Let me tell you about them.
There are a lot of rules at my home. I must get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I have to run for half an hour before breakfast. And I must get to school at 8:00. I must arrive home before 6:00 p.m. Besides, I can't watch TV or play computer games on school nights. I have to finish my homework first. And I need to go to bed before 9:00 p.m. I think the rules are too strict. However, my parents make the rules to help me, so I think I should follow them.
Yours,
Chen Hong
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以陈红的身份给Peter回邮件介绍家规。解题思路：1. 结合提示补充自身现状（如身份、日常状态）；2. 按要求梳理家规内容：明确起床、睡觉、上学、到家时间，体现到家先写作业、每日运动、上学日禁看电视玩游戏等要求；3. 表达对家规的看法，需连贯自然，控制词数60左右，遵循邮件格式，不生硬照译提示。
【解析】
写作步骤：①承接给定开头，先简单介绍自身现状（如点明自己是中学生）；②依次描述家规：起床6:30，早餐前运动半小时，8点到校，下午6点前到家，到家先完成作业，上学日晚不能看电视或玩游戏，9点前睡觉；③表达看法：家规虽严格但利于自身成长，应遵守。注意用词准确，语句连贯，符合邮件语气，控制词数。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you? You want to know about my family rules. Let me tell you about them.
There are a lot of rules at my home. I must get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I have to run for half an hour before breakfast. And I must get to school at 8:00. I must arrive home before 6:00 p.m. Besides, I can't watch TV or play computer games on school nights. I have to finish my homework first. And I need to go to bed before 9:00 p.m. I think the rules are too strict. However, my parents make the rules to help me, so I think I should follow them.
Yours,
Chen Hong
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家规话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生英语应用文写作能力，围绕“家规”话题展开，要求整合提示信息完成邮件，既考查词汇运用与句式表达，也考查逻辑组织能力，是初中英语常见题型，需学生准确把握相关英语表达并合理组织内容。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以陈红的身份给Peter回邮件介绍家规。解题思路：1. 结合提示补充自身现状（如身份、日常状态）；2. 按要求梳理家规内容：明确起床、睡觉、上学、到家时间，体现到家先写作业、每日运动、上学日禁看电视玩游戏等要求；3. 表达对家规的看法，需连贯自然，控制词数60左右，遵循邮件格式，不生硬照译提示。
【解析】
写作步骤：①承接给定开头，先简单介绍自身现状（如点明自己是中学生）；②依次描述家规：起床6:30，早餐前运动半小时，8点到校，下午6点前到家，到家先完成作业，上学日晚不能看电视或玩游戏，9点前睡觉；③表达看法：家规虽严格但利于自身成长，应遵守。注意用词准确，语句连贯，符合邮件语气，控制词数。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you? You want to know about my family rules. Let me tell you about them.
There are a lot of rules at my home. I must get up at 6:30 every morning. Then I have to run for half an hour before breakfast. And I must get to school at 8:00. I must arrive home before 6:00 p.m. Besides, I can't watch TV or play computer games on school nights. I have to finish my homework first. And I need to go to bed before 9:00 p.m. I think the rules are too strict. However, my parents make the rules to help me, so I think I should follow them.
Yours,
Chen Hong
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、家规话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生英语应用文写作能力，围绕“家规”话题展开，要求整合提示信息完成邮件，既考查词汇运用与句式表达，也考查逻辑组织能力，是初中英语常见题型，需学生准确把握相关英语表达并合理组织内容。
【难度系数】
0.5
